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Posted: 18 July 2011 at 2:36am | IP Logged
 Ahem driving in his car to home Modi Bhavan, today his mind, his heart and his body all were at peace after a long time... and the reason was gopi... He smiled at his thought of her... 

yesterday he had said what he was wanting to say to her for a few months now... thinking about yesterday night... he couldnot wait to get home... he just wanted to see her once again... its been already seven hours that he had seen her... 

Yesterday night,... ohh how it started and how it had ended... 

As usual after dinner... she had taken too long to come to their room... and she came in with a glass of milk put it on the side table and then went to close the door...he had been waiting for her... He had been trying to tell her about his feelings of her for last 2 weeks and one or the other thing comes up... So he was determined to talk to her tonight... he could not keep his feelings to himself any longer... But he had a clue that elders in this house had a clue of his changed perception about Gopi...but the one person he was waiting to see the changed Ahem...was not even close to acknowledging the fact... 

She was an innocent girl... may be after all the harsh treatment he had given her... and all the time the way he had pushed her away from him... she would not be willing to acknowledge the change... But he was determined to talk to her today... Although he was nervous... he had never had a chance to talk about his feelings about a girl to anyone... how was he going to start a conversation... 

She came closing the door and lifted the milk glass from the side table and forwarded it towards him... he lifted his eyes from the file that he was holding pretending to be busy... as soon as his eyes met hers she lowered them in fear of making him angry... and he squimered ... "Ohh how am I to start a conversation with her when she is so scared of me...???" 

he took the glass of milk from her and started drinking... she waited... and as soon as he gave her the glass she turned to leave from there... he felt irritated... he at once tried to grab her from going... in the process.. he pulled her pallu from her head down... she turned... not knowing and then being scared of him scolding her... she tried to put her pallu back... 

he came towards her and she stepped back... realising that he was intimidating her... he stopped in his tracks... he forwarded his hand... to take the glass... but she gave a blank expression not understanding what he wanted... he sighed thinking he has a lot of teaching to do to his wife... and then took the glass from her hand... and put it on the side table... 

He turned back at her... and she was not in the same place... she was making her bed... he litterally walked in anger... thinking "what the hell...????" and he grabbed her by the arm... making her even more scared... now she was scared and everytime seeing her scared expression for him made him even more mad... he wanted her to see the changed him... and he had been not shouting or scolding or even trying to spend some time with her...but she has been avoiding him... he could not take it anymore... 

But he had to control himself... he took a deep breath and told her to sit on the bed...  she went and sat there obidiently... and slowly he sat down... and immediately she stood up... "Maine bola kya utne ko...bayte jaoo" and she immediately sat down... 

he looked at her she was scared...of what was coming... how he wanted to just hug her and say her he wanted her... ohh how it would be if she tried to understand from his justures... he was very bad at having a good conversation... he could talk to client but having a funny conversation with his family would be hard for him... 

he saw her holding her pallu between her hands and twising it... he slowly moved his hand forward to take her hand and she jerked back her hand... but he moved forward on the bed and slowly took her hand... without looking at her... as he knew her scared face would make him crazy... 

he slowly took her hand in his... and tried to feel the smoothness of her delicate skin...  at the contact of her... he felt at peace... "kya mein tume itna dara tha hu..??" and gopi nodded negative vigurously... 

seeing her scared expression again... he decided that coversation wasn't going to work... he just  moved closer... and as gopi tried to moved back... "hilna bhi mat..." and gopi nodded positive... he moved forward and sat near to her... he could see the dilema in her face... he just... bent foward towards her and she bent her body back away from him... so he immediately pulled her towards him with his hand on her back... and with the other hand on her shoulder bent forward and kissed her on her cheek... gopi froze... he didnot let go of her... he continued to kiss her on the cheek... after may be five minutes... gopi's body started to relax in his hold he could feel her eratic breath and relaxing body... he then slowly left her... to look at her reaction... she had closed her eyes tightly shut... 

"Gopi mujhe dekho..." she opened her eyes... slowly to see ... "I am sorry..." and gopi gave an expression that said she could not understand what he was saying... and ahem realised and said... "mujhe maaf kar do..." and gopi gave a surprised expression first and said ... "jiii" and then and then continued... "yeh aap kaisi baathein kar rahe hain..." 

before gopi could avert her eyes... and fall into dilema... "mein tumse pyaar karne laga hu gopi..." and gopi froze there shocked... "mujhe dooseroki tara guma phirake bolna nahi aata..." "mein aisa hi hu..." "Tum agar mujhse pyaar nahi karti toh tum bol sakti ho... mein tume majboor nahi karunga..."  "Mein ne mehsoos kiya hai... ki mein tumare bena adura hu... aur shayad meine tumein pehchaan ne mein derkar di ho..."   "Mein aur der nahi karna chahta hu..." 

he was looking at her change of expressions as he said what he had to say... "Agar tume mein pasand nahi toh ..." he was cut off from saying further as gopi closed his mouth with her fingers...  "Aaise mat kahiye ahem ji..."  and her eyes that were lowered lifted to look at him and they started to drip tears... 

"mein aapse bahut pyaar karthi hu..." that moment he realised... she was a blunt as he was... 

She lowered her eyes and started to cry profusely... holding his hands with her hands... he could not be away from her any longer... he just pulled her into a hug... his eyes watered... seeing her in so much pain... he could see how much she has waited to here this from him... his heart questioned him now... "Is he worthy of her love...??? after all he has done to her..." 

as gopi tightened her grip on his night shirt... he came back from his thoughts... and realised she was crying in hicupps now... So he slowly moved her from his shoulder and then holding her face in his hands wiped her tears with his thumb... she was still having hicupps... he moved to his side table and took the glass of water from there and gave her... and she looked at him... when he signaled with his eyes to have some water... she had the water... and then she kept holding the glass... but he took the glass from her... she tried to get up... and he took hold of her hand... and said... "kaha jara hi ho..."  "ji... woh bahut raat ho gayi hain... sone jarahi hu..."  
he stood up immediately... "kya..." she looked surprised at him so anxious...  and then he calmed down... "kya tumne mujhe abhi tak maaf nahi kiya gopi..." and she said... "ji nahi nahi... mein aapse bahut pyaar karti hu..."  and then he said... "toh phir neeche sone ki kyun soch rahi ho..."  she said... surprised... "jiii..." he looked at her confused expression and realised... she didnot know the abcd of sleeping together...  

he just lifted her in his arms taking her by surprise... "ahem ji yeh aap kya kar rehein hain..." 
"woh kar raha hu... jo meine bahut der kardiee shuruvat karne mein..." and gopi looked at him confused... for the first time... in all their marriage... he smiled... at her...she looked really surprised to see him smile at her... she gave a smile... his heart skipped a beat... seeing her smile... 

he then placed her on the bed... and then said... "hilna bhi mat..." and she obeyed... he walked back to the door locked it... then dimmed all the lights... and came eagerly to her... she was on the bed as he left her... she was too innocent... todays night was going to be long night only if gopi knew what he is about to do to her... 

he moved closer... on to her... and gopi... put her hands on his chest stopping him from moving further... and said... "Ahemji yeh aap kya kar rehe hain..." he knew this was going to come... he just placed a finger on her lips... and said... "sshh..." "Ab ek baat bhi nahi bolna... samji gayi..." and she nodded... then moving her hands from his chest he lowered on to her... and she closed her eyes tightly... he gave a long wet kiss on her one cheek... and her breathing became eratic... he smiled and he moved towards her ear... and said... "Aaaj mein tume apna bana na chahta hu... har tara se..." she opened her eyes in more of shock... he lifted his face and looked intently into her face ... she could see his eyes... feeling drowsy... she didnot know but she couldnot take it any more and lowered her eyes... as anxiety got the better of her... she couldnot understand all the new feeling developing in her... and just hugged Ahem tightly... 

Ahem reciprocated her with a tight hug... and then he slowly moved the hair from her shoulders and as he kept saying things to her... he kissed her shoulder... then her colar bone... she jerked... "Tum bahut kubsurat ho gopi..." "Mein tume pana chahta hu.." "apna banana chahta hu..."  

Gopi could only hear his partial words... she was in another world with all the kisses ahem was giving... when he didnot get any reply from her... he lifted his face from her neck and looked at her... and she was enjoying his touch... he felt relieved... 

He then slowly moved to her face and placed a long and much needed kiss on her lips... he could feel her holding his shirt at the his back... he knew he was doing the right thing... 

As he tried to kiss her neck something hard he felt. on her smooth skin and realised they are the jewellery... he slowly started to remove the jewellery... then he removed the tuck of her pallu on her waist... which revelead to him her precious body curves... he gasped... and then slowly traced a finger to see it was real... and when gopi... moaned unknowingly in pleasure... he moved forward and kissed her neck line... he then kissed her on her chest over her garment then moved his hands on to her waist... and he continued kissing her... he moved his hands to the back of her and hugged her tightly... his body was aching for more... 

he slowly tried to open her upper garment... and he waited after opening one button...and when he didnot feel any resistance... he removed all the buttons of her blouse... and then he gasped as he removed it aside... he just couldnot wait... as his lips touched the height of her chest... Gopi gasped and opened her eyes... there was passion in her eyes... Ahem lifted his face at her gasp... and both had a knowing feeling... each one wanted the other... 

Ahem... bent forward and kissed her lips and gopi pressed her fingers into ahem's back... he lifted after the kiss... to remove his top... and gopi realised that her clothes were open... she felt shy now... she immediately closed her chest with her hands... and turned other way...now sleeping on her stomach... Gopi moved her hair from her back and gave kisses on her back and Gopi arched... he put his hand around her waist and pulled her to him... as she arched and moved away... he then caught the melons in his hands from behind... and locked her from moving away...as he felt her gasp...he gave slow kisses on her neck and shoulders and arms to lower her anxiety and make her relax... he then moved to her waist and kissed all the curves... he then tried to remove her lower saree ... but he was unable to figure out... he then moved down to figure out how to open it up... he pulled all the folds of the saree out and then realised there is a tie of inner garment around her waist... he pulled the thread... and as it loosened... he moved up with a smile and hugged gopi and then slowly moved his hand into her inner garments... Gopi gasped... she turned to look at Ahem... but as she turned he hugged her... and then he pushed her saree down to her feet... Gopi was now in a vulnerable state... she felt shy very shy to be in such a state first time in her life and infront of ahem...she tried to hide herself in his broad chest... and hugged him... that was enough for ahem... her trust in him was enough for him... to make her his... he pulled a blanket over them and discarded the rest of his clothes... and pused all the clothes down the bed... and then hugged her feeling her body against his... gopi gasped... ahem gasped... then ahem felt a dilema wether to go further to the next step or not... he couldnot stop himself now...but he didnot want to hurt her... he moved his head up and looked at her... feeling him away from her... she opened her eyes... only to see Ahem looking at her... her cheeks became red with embarrasment... and she shyed and closed her face with her hands... and ahem moved her hands... and said... "Gopi tum teek toh ho na..." and gopi gave a concerned look thinking did she do something wrong... seeing her concerned...  he was in a dilema wether to go further or not... but seeing her put her hands around his neck and come closer to him... he couldnot have stopped even if he wanted... he made gopi sleep on the bed... and then he started to kiss her aggressively... and then moved down below her waist... and kissed her and at the end he kissed her feet... gopi was in heaven... she had closed her eyes... and her hands were  holding the pillow and the blanket ... as ahem moved up... he widened her legs... making her gasp... he came up to her... kissed her neck and shoulders and gopi hugged him tightening her grip... and then ahem gave her kisses to loosen the grip... and then moved her legs... with his... then lifted her left leg up and then lifted himself to arch and then as Gopi felt him inside her... she gasped... she felt a rush of things... she moved her head viguriously... ahem felt scared... but as he tried to pull away... gopi caught him with her legs from moving... and ahem smiled... and then he kissed her to relax her... and then slowly started to make a rythym betwween them... after few minutes... Gopi tuned to the rythym of ahem... and then as they touched the zenith of excitment... both panting for breath...  He kissed her fore head as she lay hugging him... he was finally at peace... and he slept with gopi in his arms... 

he jerked from his thoughts as the car came to a halt... and realised he was home... he couldnot wait to see gopi... he took his office bag and entered the house...and knocked on the door... everyone were surprised to see him there... except for one person... gopi...as he had told her he would be home early...

he looked at gopi and kokila sitting at dinning table cutting vegetables... he sat on the sofa putting the bag on the sofa... kokila said... gopi ahem ko chai leke aao... and started walking towards ahem... ahem just wanted to kiss her. and hug her... he sighed... and kokila came and said... "aaj bahut jaldi aagaye ho ahem..." "haa maa... bus aiye se hi..."  "todi der rest karna chahta tha..." he made an excuse... "tabiyat to teek hain na..." he was about to answer... when he saw gopi emerging towards them from kitchen... So he said... "haan teek hai mom... kal raat ko bahut derse soyatha..." hearing this gopi jerked the tea in her hand... and kokila said... "samalke gopi vahu..." and gopi said... "ji maaji..." and she slowly brought the cup of tea to ahem... he took the cup and sauser from her and as he took it he touched her fingers under the cup... she felt concious... and left the cup which ahem caught and gopi walked away fast from there... leaving kokila confused... 

Ahem had the tea and then he said his mother that he wants to eat something and he would be relaxing in the room... and kokila sent gopi to serve him with some snack... he waited for gopi to come in and as gopi placed the food plate on the table... he locked the door of their room and then came towards her and hugged her from behind and then turned her and hugged her again... gopi hugged him back... he started to kiss her on her face and neck... he smelled the fresh smell of her washed hair... 

Gopi pushed him a little saying... mujhe jana hai... neeche bahut kaam hai... but he pulled her into him... and started to kiss her... Gopi swept in the new feeling... and he just lifted her to the bed... as gopi tried to protest he sealed her lips with his and quickly discarded their clothes...

down not finding gopi for some time in the kitchen kokila sent mani behen to call gopi and see what she is doing... mani came and knocked on the door... to see it locked... and inside... gopi was gasping for air after their make out session...  gopi hearing the knock the second time... just jumped from the bed and sat up and ran to the bathroom collecting the clothes... she quickly dressed herself... and then came out... in another 15 minutes... to see Ahem shamelessly sleeping on the bed... she put a blanket over him... and took out his clothes and hanged them in the bathroom ... as she hanged the clothes... she felt shy to look at the bathroom... as she remembered the makeout session they had in the bathroom this morning... when she had gone for bath and how he had come in and then... 

she came back from her thoughts and realised she had been there in the room from long... she walked faster and opened the door and ran down the stairs to kitchen... kokila said... what were you doing for so long in the room... there is so much work to be done... gopi lowered her eyes... and went in to work... as she was stirring the vegetable... mota babhi was standing and cooking on another stove saw... a scratch on her hand with a bronken bangle hanging around it... she pulled her hand and checked for the wound when gopi didnot answer her ... she cleaned the wound... and then as she cleaned the wound her eyes fell on the bite marks on her shoulder and collar bone... and then she smiled to herself... and said gopi to go upstairs and clean up... and when gopi shyed... she kissed her and sent her upstairs... 

Thankyou, just felt like writing... hope you all like it...give a comment if you all like it... 









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Posted: 18 July 2011 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Excellent FF Smile

Super writing , keep it up Thumbs Up

As we know, nothing like this will happen in Saathiya. Confused

Do write more. Smile

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SUPERB FF IT KEEP ROCKING

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plzz write sum more..its awesome!!

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absolutely beautiful

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very nice...keep going...Clap

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