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Through the Facade- ArHi FF Completed (Page 36)

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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Love_Mehak

awww its one of the most beautiful written piece i've ever read!!! tears came to my eyes reading the last part ...u've done a fab job!! *THUMBS UP*

Thanks for appreciating my work dear, means a lot to me :)
Tears of joy, am glad this SS made such an impact Embarrassed
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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 7:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by alice54

your ff is simply brilliant:)

Aww Thank You, means a lot to me Embarrassed
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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged
That was beautiful!
Specially the last part, I don't have words...

The manner in which you've worded the healing power of love amongst the living is poetic... felt it deeply...


Keep writing...
And thank you for such a lovely FFTongue

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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mirnalini

That was beautiful!
Specially the last part, I don't have words...

The manner in which you've worded the healing power of love amongst the living is poetic... felt it deeply...


Keep writing...
And thank you for such a lovely FFTongue

Heya! Thanks Embarrassed and Yeah that's the message! Bad things happen, It's the necessary losses we all go through, With each we grow and become a new self. it's all about getting past those sad moments and taking life as it goes. Because nothing stays, and the best way to live through all of it, is simply Loving :)

Thanks for reading and appreciating my work, It means a lot to meHug
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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
loved ur ff!! great job!

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 5:46pm | IP Logged
superb writing!!this was what should have happened if the shyam track was being dragged ie both brothers protecting their sister together..khushi not being blamed and the brothers realising that anjali could not be made to live with such a liar anymore! and by the way i really liked the short and clipped monologue
Hold her hand!
No!
Say Something!
As If!
She's scared.
Let her be
You are being rude
Thank You!

i must have read this ten times already!!  it's always clear how/what the characters think. pls pm me any other work of yours. 

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Posted: 21 December 2011 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
i had a "dream came true" smile on my face when I finished this FF. beautifully depicted.tx!

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Posted: 22 December 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gauranitai

  loved ur ff!! great job!


thnks a lot, am glad u liked it =) Embarrassed

Originally posted by karisma

superb writing!!this was what should have happened if the shyam track was being dragged ie both brothers protecting their sister together..khushi not being blamed and the brothers realising that anjali could not be made to live with such a liar anymore! and by the way i really liked the short and clipped monologue
Hold her hand!
No!
Say Something!
As If!
She's scared.
Let her be
You are being rude
Thank You!

i must have read this ten times already!!  it's always clear how/what the characters think. pls pm me any other work of yours. 

i had a "dream came true" smile on my face when I finished this FF. beautifully depicted.tx!  


Awwh Thank You! Embarrassed  I have this big goofy smile on my face after reading your review, it truly means a lot to me :) I am simply overwhelmed that i could share smiles through this FF, I had a gala time writing this FF, it was an Amazing experience, thanks to all the readers too, they have a huge hand in how this FF has turned out, they kept me charged :D 
A dream come true FF, that's a huge compliment, am speechless! Embarrassed

Thanks for reading and appreciating my work, I have been writing since years now, will surely PM my other works Hug


Edited by TheWandmaker - 22 December 2011 at 1:43am

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