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Posted: 19 July 2011 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Amazing update, Amazing story
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Posted: 19 July 2011 at 11:40am | IP Logged
pls make Ahem more jealous and let Jigar n Gopi r best friendss
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nyccc..waitin for moree
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Posted: 19 July 2011 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
Good update ... interesting to read Ahem's conflicting voices - shows the dilemma he is facing. He is in total denial.
 
Update soon.
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Hi friends, thanks for leaving your comments I appreciate it. This part took me few days to complete. I was totally blank as to how to proceed with it. I have finally finished it but im not sure if you are going to like it. Anyways here it is:

Part 4:

Recap:

         Rashi is hating all the house work

         Ahem is not understanding why he is thinking so much about Gopi

         Jigar is being a real sweetheart in picking Gopi from school because Ahem refused to do so

         Dhawal and Kinjal are going out for lunch

 

Gopi is standing out the gate waiting for someone from her family to come pick her up when she sees Ahem's car pull up infront of her. Gopi gets excited thinking that Ahem has come to pick her up but is soon disappointed to see that its Jigar. "Bhabhi get in" Gopi gets inside and fastens her seatbelt and slowly asking "devarji, you in ahemji's car?" "oh yes bhabhi, my car is gone for servicing so I got bhai's car. He was busy so I took his car. Bhabhi I'll drop you home and go back to the office". Gopi is thinking *you stupid gopi! How could you dare think that ahemji will come pick up. He is only supposed to drop you to school, maaji never mentioned to him to pick me up so why will he. Stop getting your hopes high*. Jigar drops her off and returns to the office.

"bhaiya serve up 2 pav bhaji fatafat" Dhawal tells the thella wala. Kinjal looks carefully at the thella wala to make sure he is making it cleanly. "here you go bhai sab and bhabhiji your pav bhaji" handing it over to dhawal and kinjal. Dhawal hurriedly started eating while kinjal stood there staring at both dhawal and the pav bhaji thinking *how am I supposed to eat this standing up? Theres not even any seat to sit down. And this dhawal is almost done with his* dhawal notices her and realises quickly whats bothering her. "kinjalji, give me the plate ill hold it while you eat. I know its difficult for you to eat like this" holding the edge of kinjals plate. She slowly hands it to him and then starts eating her pav bhaji. Dhawal stares at her thinking how beautiful she is and how cute she looks while eating, just like a child. Kinjal finishes her plate and they both head back to the store. "dhawalji, thank you for the lunch" dhawal smiles and replies "mention not kinjalji. Actually I should be saying thank you for making this lunch best and best for me". Kinjal smiles and they both get back to work.

 

The Modi men are back home and Rashi brings in a variety of snacks to serve. Ahem is searching for Gopi but doesn't see her [Mani serves him gree tea]. "maa where is gopi bhabhi?" jigar asked. Before hetal could reply, Rashi says, "Jigarji, who gopi is feeling a bit tired so she is resting". Ahem thinks *this is just her second day and she is already tired. She just wants everyone to feel sorry for her* "Mom im going to freshen up, please get dinner ready". Gopi is sitting on the sofa in her room thinking about how Ahem never likes her presence and how he doesn't support her in anything, *kanhaji, please help me in my studies so atleast ahemji won't have to tell anyone that im an illiterate* just then ahem walks into the room and goes to the bathroom.

Rashi made a variety of dishes to please everyone at dinner. Hetal was very proud of her while kokila found some faults. After dinner ahem and gopi were in their room doing their respective work when Jigar enters, "Gopi bhabhi, im back to teach you. Today I'll teach you English" Jigar and Gopi were so into their teaching and learning process that they didn't even realise ahem staring at them. Ahem was thinking *why does Jigar have to be here at this hour to teach her. Shouldn't he be in his room with his wife? Why can't he teach gopi some other appropriate time? Why now?* before he could realise it, ahem was saying half of his thought out loud enough for jigar to hear while Gopi was rehearsing her alphabets. Jigar was surprised yet happy to hear that he does think about gopi. Jigar wasn't sure what to do; whether to stay and continue teaching leaving ahem to think how shameless he is to still be there or to retire to his room leaving Gopi thinking why all of a sudden he left.

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged
nice update... waiting for the next instalment
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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 6:00am | IP Logged
Thats very unkind of you...you can't stop there.

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 6:31am | IP Logged
A short update and an exposed Gopi, unsure what happened with Jigar and why did he leave suddenly, leaving Ahem to lure his prey.

Edited by swasthi - 23 July 2011 at 6:32am

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