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Thank you all for the lovely comments. I honestly did not expect this response. Thank you.

Part 2

Recap:

         Gopi's first day of school

         Gopi made new friend, Khushi.

         Hetal and Kokila are at ease that Gopi's first day went well

         Rashi not so happy about it goes to contact her mummy

Rashi quickly pulled out her phone and called her mummy [I guess Urmila's number was on her speed dial list lol]. Urmila picked up the phone at once as she too was eagerly waiting to hear about her niece being humiliated by little kids at school. Rashi "hello mummy, your kalakari has backfired! That Gopi gawar is happily back from school and telling both mummyji and kadgi about her first day", Urmila's eyes widen almost popping out and mouth wide open replies "Huuuhhh, what are you saying Rashi, that can't be", still in shock. Rashi continues, "Mummy think of something. What will happen to me if that gawar learns to read and write? I'll be rotting in this pathetic kitchen looking for garam masala my whole life! And that Gopi will be ruling the Modi Bhavan". For a second Urmila gets a picture of rashi in torn saree wiping the floors and Gopi all jewelled up sitting on the couch like a queen. She quickly shook that "terrible" image out of her and continued, "Listen Rashi, you continue to win the family with household chores and cooking and let that gawar be for now. She's grown wings, let her reach the top and then I will chop her wings which will make her fall straight down with a bang". Saying this Urmila smirked and hung up. Rashi although not sure of her mother's plans smiled and got back to work.

In the hall:

Gopi gets up immediately looking at the time and tries to hurry off when kokila asks "Gopi vau, where are you rushing off to?" Gopi replies "Maaji its time to start the dinner prep so I will go and see to that". Kokila who was impressed by her says "No need Gopi vau. From today I want you to focus on your studies only. I want you to take full advantage of this opportunity you have been given so from today you will not do any housework until I tell you too, samji gayi". Hetal nodded in agreement but Gopi looked a bit worried. Hetal, "what happen Gopi? Why that questioning face?" Gopi says " kakiji, that means rashi ben will have to do everything by herself, cant I help her?" to that kokila quickly replies, "No you can't. its time for Rashi to learn how to take care of the household and this is a great opportunity for you both to prove yourselves". Gopi understood at once and nodded. Before she can hurry off again kokila stops Gopi and calls out for Rashi. Rashi quickly appeared before her and then kokila continued, "Gopi vau and rashi, I have made a time table for you both which you must follow strictly", she looks firmly at them and continues, "Rashi, from tomorrow you will be taking the milk in the morning and preparing breakfast for all including Gopi's lunch. Gopi vau you will do the puja as you always do and then leave for school. Rashi you will take care of the entire house and meals. Gopi vau, you will come home from school and freshen up, eat and then study. Rashi its your responsibility to look after the house work and gopi vau yours is to prove yourself in your studies. Samji gayi you two" Both nod their head. Kokila thinks to herself *Now rashi, who will save you from your mistakes? I'll make sure you do everything* it was time for the men to come home and Rashi was told to prepare tea and snacks for them. The door bell rings and mani opens the door to let them all in. They all greet one another and Jigar frantically starts searching for Gopi. "Kakiji, where is Gopi bhabhi? I want to ask her about school" this made Ahem remember that her wife was now a school student. Gopi appeared from nowhere and greeted them all. Jigar then starts to ask Gopi questions and she tells him everything. All this while Ahem is sitting there with his tea which rashi prepared and listening without any concern. He thinks to himself *this gawar does everything at the wrong time: when shes told not to do one thing she does it, when shes told to do something then she doesn't do it, and now shes in school studying when she should be home helping my mom* he puts away his cup and retires to his room to change.

Its dinner time and everyone has gathered around the table. Inside the kitchen Rashi is all panicking over the food she prepared wondering if everything is ok. Ahem ate the food and could easily tell that it wasn't cooked by Gopi. Kokila as usual took out faults on rashi's cooking and preparation and then they all retired to their bedrooms to sleep leaving poor Rashi to clean up. And ofcourse rashi cursed Gopi and kadgi with every dish she washed LOL.

Ahem is sitting on the bed with his laptop on while Gopi has spread out her books on the floor revising what she was taught today. Just then Jigar enters the room and asks Gopi if she needs any help since he knows Ahem wasn't bothered let alone helping her. Jigar, "Bhabhi, do you need any help with your work?" sitting down beside her. Gopi "devarji….." she looked at Ahem and the continued, "…I was doing my homework but I am not sure of some things, can you please help me?" This made Ahem look at her for a second before he buried his eyes back to the laptop screen. Jigar, "Bhabhi im here to help you only. Tell me what it is" Jigar then helps Gopi out and soon she finishes her homework. Gopi, "devarji, thank you for your help" Jigar smiles back at her and greets them gooodnite. Gopi then gets up to put her books away and takes her night clothes into the bathroom to change. All this was watched by Ahem from the corner of his eyes and then he thought to himself *what is this woman trying to prove? Is she doing all this to impress me again? Why is she putting on this drama and why is everyone supporting her? Why can't she just………………* he lost words to continue and then angrily put his stuff away and turned off the lights.

Rashi enetered her room and knocked out on the bed. Jigar turned facing towards her and lovingly caressed her face with his fingers while she dozed immediately off. Jigar thought *how beautiful and innocent she looks when she's sleeping. Calm and lovely. Wonder what happens to her when she wakes up* he put the blanket over her and turned off the lights and went to sleep.

 

That's all guys for today. I know im being slow with progress but im slowly building it up. Patience my dear friends. I hope you all liked this part and feel free to leave your comments [I enjoy reading them].

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I like the update Thumbs Up

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cool update... thanx 4 including raji... hope u will include them in coming updates too...Embarrassed

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Great job on the update

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OMG I love it darling...pls continue...Thumbs Up

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Nice update

is ahem jealousShocked BecharaLOL

Hey a smal req pls intimate that part 2 is updated on the titile so that its easy to recognize

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