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Loving With Closed Eyes- Maaneet (Page 3)

rupzloveu IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Amazing prolong do continue...

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mysteriousmilli IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
very much the concept...please carry on...waiting...Smile

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ridhz21 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 12:08am | IP Logged
interesting ff
waiting for update

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 12:37am | IP Logged
interesting ... continue soon pls 

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amzu32 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Congrats for new FF!!!
Continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Continue soon and Do pm me if you can...

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Geet was sitting in her room, looking out the window, wishing she could see what was going on outside. She could hear the laughter of children, the sound of chirping birds, horns honking. Whenever she heard the sounds of horns honking from cars, she would close her eyes and have flashbacks of the tragic accident that took place on the night of her graduation party. Nani came in the room and touched her shoulder.
Nani- Geet beti.
Geet opened her eyes quickly and searched for Nani's arms.
Geet- Ji Nani.
Nani- Beti, tyaar ho? Kaam par jana hain.
Geet- Ji Nani, chaliye.
Geet and her Nani walked to the coffee shop, it wasn't that far away. It was in rather a nice area, away from the city crime and noise. The coffee shop was owned by Nani and it was quite a popular place. Every morning, Maan Singh Khurana's assistant, Sasha, would grab a cup of coffee for Maan. But one morning, she couldn't make it.
Maan Singh Khurana was in his car, driving to work and arguing on the phone with Sasha.
Maan- What do you mean you can't come to work?!!
Sasha- MK, there's an accident on Highway 5, I can't make it. It's impossible to reach work in 20 minutes. This will take about 2 hours.
Maan- Fine whatever! But you'll have to do extra hours, we have alot of work to do this week! And today, there was a meeting with Mr. Mehta who came all the way from India just to sign a deal with our company.
Sasha- MK, should I postpone that meeting?
Maan- Not at all! He's in town only today, he has a flight to Seattle this evening. Impossible. I'll have someone else do the presentation.
Sasha- Ok MK.
Maan drove faster and went to the coffee shop and barged in front of the line. Geet was busy making coffee, she was blind, yet she learned how to work in the cafe.
Maan- I need one Low fat Latte immediately!
Geet turned around and Maan was mesmerized by her. Geet wasn't looking directly Maan, her face was looking towards the side.
Geet- Just a moment.
Nani- Geet beti, Mrs. Smith apni coffee ke liye wait kar rahi hain.
Geet nodded.
Maan- Arey udhar ko kyun dekh rahi ho? Main yahan khara hoon!
A customer who was a friend of Geet was behind him. She was an Indian girl who was of Punjabi descent.
Preeti- Hey, Mr. Jaldi vala, she's blind. Use kaam itni jaldi se nahi hota, you'll have to wait your turn in line.
 Preeti pushed him to the back of the line while Maan was still staring at Geet. She was so beautiful, yet she couldn't see the world.
Geet continued making coffee for the customer. Nani was working at the register. Alot of workers were running late today, so Geet had to make coffee all alone. Usually, there would be a few people with her to help her.
Geet made coffee as Maan just stared at her. Finally his turn came.
Nani- Can I take your order please?
Maan- One Low Fat Latte. Can you make it quick, I'm running late for work.
Nani- Geet beti, one Low Fat Lattte, zara jaldi banaye, Bhai Sahib jaldi mein hain.
Geet- Ji Nani.
Geet made Maan his latte and gave it to him.
Maan- Thank you.
Geet smiled. Her smile was the most gorgeous smile on Earth. Her perfect white teeth twinkled and her eyes also shined. Maan just stood there holding the cup along with Geet's hand.
Geet- Excuse me, can you please let go of my hand. Mujhe aur kaam bhi hain Sir.
Maan realized what he was doing and let go of her hand.
Maan- Sorry.
Maan paid for his coffee and left. Preeti glared at him.
Preeti- Ajeeb aadmi hain.
Geet- Sab aadmi ajeeb hain Preeti. Sab ke sab.
Nani- Arey! Aap dono apni baatein band karo! Geet, get back to work.
Geet nodded and continued doing her work.
Precap- Maan follows Geet

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 2:32am | IP Logged
Beautiful Ff yaar. Love the concept. Cant wait for the next part :)

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