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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged

PART 5

It was time for Geet to go home.
Geet- Maan, what time is it?
Maan- 5:00 PM.
Geet- Mere jaane ka waqt aa gaya hain. Dadimaa ne mujhe jaldi ghar aane ke liye bola tha.
Maan- Chalo theek hain.
Geet searched for Vicky's arms. Vicky couldn't bear to see Geet in this state.
Geet- Vicky? Aap kahan ho?
Vicky touched Geet's shoulders.
Geet smiled and hugged Vicky. Vicky was teary.
Vicky- Hum fir milenge.
Geet- Jaroor.
Geet and Maan left and went home. Maan was tempted to ask Geet about her past in the car ride.
Maan- How did you become blind?
Geet- It's a long story.
Maan- I like long stories.
Geet- Well, I don't like to talk about it.
Maan- As you wish.
Geet nodded and listened to the music that was on.
Maan dropped Geet off at her house.
Maan- I'm happy that you had a good time today.
Geet- yeah. Thanks so much...for everything.
Maan- No problem.

The next day-
It was 10 AM and Maan came to the coffee shop again.
Maan- Good Morning Geet, Nani.
Geet- Morning Maan.
Nani- Good morning bete. Have some muffins, Geet just made them.
Maan- Banana nut? My favorite.
Geet smiled.
Geet- Mine too.
Maan smiled.
Geet- Accha, to kaam kaisa hain?
Maan- Accha hain. I have a client coming from Punjab next week.
Geet- Punjab? Arey, my village is over there. It's my dream to go there.
Maan- Really?
Geet- Yeah! Golden Temple, Patiala, Chandigarh, Amritsar ke kulche, Jalandhar ki tikiaan aur pakore it all seems so fascinating.
Maan- That's nice. I'm also Punjabi.
Geet- Accha? Vahan aap kahan rehte hain?
Maan- Mera bunglow Chandigarh mein hain aur vahan Khurana Constructions ka Head Office bhi hain.
Geet- Oh, main to Jalandhar se hoon.
Maan- Oh, to Doaba ki ladki hain.
Geet- Ji han
Maan smiled.
Geet- Due to my blindness, Nani never bothered to go back to Punjab.
Maan- Geet, haven't you ever tried going to a doctor and trying surgery.
Geet- I can't afford it. We barely have enough money for the house morgtage, loans, the coffee shop, our car and alot more. Surgery is way out of our league.
Maan- Oh.
Geet- But I don't want surgery anyway. I deserve to live in a black world.
Maan- Why?
Geet- I can't tell you.
Maan- Yes you can. We're friends.
Geet- I know, and thank you, but I'm just not ready.
Maan- When will you be ready?
Geet- yeh sab janne se aapko kya milega?
Maan- Chain
Geet- Lekin mujhe nahi. Mujhe kabhi chain nahi aayega yeh sab batakar. Mujhe to sirf dar lagega.
Maan- Dar? Kis baat ki?
Geet- Aapko khone ki. Apne dost ko khone ki.
Maan- Geet, believe me, I will always be there for you.
Geet- Sorry, itni taqat nahi hain mujhmein aapko yeh sab batane mein.
Maan- Main tumhara taqat bankar rehonga Geet. Batao mujhe.
Geet- Nahi Maan. Nahi.
Maan didn't want to force Geet or make her feel uncomfortable.
Maan- Sorry if I made you uncomfortable. I was just curious. Whenever you are ready, mujhe jaroor batana.

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Precap- Geet+Preeti+Maan= Shopping
 
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Edited by iluvblue0812 - 16 August 2011 at 11:25am

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wow i loved it !! 

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i loved it...i just hope that geet will soon trust maan enough to tell him all about her...continue soon n thnxxx...

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Geet seems to be really hurt by her past wonder what happened
can't wait for her to trust Maan and tell him everything
nice part
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 11:35am | IP Logged
Wonderful update...Clap
Geet was so much hurt by her past..soon she will trust maan
Awesome precap..continue soon..eagerly waiting of next part.
thanks for pmSmile

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Loved the update!!! Hope Geet trusts Maan soon!!
 
Saba xxx

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awesome update

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