Maaneet.. Eclipse UPDATING

Posted: 12 years ago
Hi
here is the 4th fiction of mine.
 
PROLOGUE

Geet stard at her reflection in the mirror. Why did she always turn introspective in the bathroom? She reached into her purse, pulled out a compact to adjust her makeuo and grimaced. Her serious expression made her look older than her twenty- one years.

Time was not her friend, she decided.

 

Pulling out her lip gloss as well, geet touched the rose pink to her lips, blotted the better part of the colour into a tissue and restored the makeup to her purse

 

Hazel eyes staired back at her from the mirror, while long dark brown rings of hair cascaded from the head like a waterfall

Before yesterday ,thick brown mass had reached nearly to her waist.

Now a stranger looked back at her.

Why had i let Meera talk me into getting a cut

CHAnge you want something new in your life.. she had said dramatically

She smiled sadly remembering it.

Change. She whispered . she was right I had not had a hair cut in 5 yrs.i had not had lived in past 5 yrs too. Just some rhythmic breaths. Why can't those breaths change their course?

Why can't they stop breathing?

Why  why why..

There were so many why is in her life but answer..

 

i am not sure about the title. plz suggest a title for it..

i was considering...
 life without soul
eclipse
hidden meaning of life
if you have any other name plz tell
 
plz tell me if i should continue it or not...
Thanx
My other fictions:
 
INDEX
 
Edited by ssch - 11 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
CHARACTER SKETCH:
 
Geet Handa:
   21 yr old . beauty with brains.. living a soul less life. had no ambitions had no intentions of living a long life. every moment cursing her fate.
 
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Maan Singh Khurrana:
young buiseness tycoon. nobody knows anything personal about him other then his best buddies.
yash pari aadi
Meera :
 
 
21 Yr old Geet's best frnd.. lively  fun loving  person. The only tension she had in her life is  Geet.
to make geet live again.
Pinky:
 
 geet 's frnd cum sister lives in shimla. is a college student chirpy full of life . got married at the age of 17 . Her husband came out to be a jerk as he wd just visit her once in a year. geet met her while her stay in shimla.
 

Pari:

 Maan's employee . has a big crush on maan . Maan's childhood frnd too did college together with him. But when she got to know him better she realized she can never make her place in his heart . so here she is helping him out in his mission.

Aadi :

Maan's employee . respect Maan a lot  . he had been with him through out thick and thin.

He has sworn with him that they will expose the truth together.

Yash Handa .:

Maan's best frnd . Geet 's brother.. Together with maan is trying to bring out the truth
Edited by ssch - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it
Eclipse does sound good
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
sounds interesting
con soon
thanks 4 da PM
Muahhh
Xxx
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice start...cont soon
thanx for pm
Posted: 12 years ago
yeah nice start dear cont soon

i will wait for ur update

please cont soon
Posted: 12 years ago
sounds interesting
con soon
thanks 4 da PM
Posted: 12 years ago
nice start and i feel the present name is nice
Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima

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