maneet ff:rishton mein uljhan - Page 2

Posted: 12 years ago
 
hi every one i am back with part 7...
 
 
PART7:
 
mein soo jayi thi..
jab delhi aane wala thanaina ne mujhe jagaya..
 
 
maine casually ma se poocha ki airport koun aayaga
M:(mom)geet airport par maan dev aur naintara ayenge..
 
G:(st)kya...😲.
 aacha...
 
mein conscious ho gayi thi...😳haan mujhe yaad aaya ki ek baar mom ne kaha ki hum dono ki families milke shopping karenge...
 
 
main ghabrane lagi ..
N:arre kya hua..
G:kuch nahi...seat belt laga le..
 
 
Flight land kar chuki thi...
 
mein aur ghabrane lagi..
N:geet mujhe bata kya baat hai jo tu ghabara rahi hai?????
G:agar tu sunagi tuho tere nhi yahi haal hoga...
N:tu aise bool rahi hai ki jaise maan airport aa raha hai????
G:tujhe kaise pata??????
N(shocked)kyaaa😲!!!!!!!!!!!
G:haan aur nahi tho kya...
N:chalo MRS.MSK aapke hone wale se milte hain..
G:naina mind it...main aabhi MRS.MSK nahi hoon...
 
 
 
maine aapna cell switch on kiya..karte hi call aaya,maine naam dekhe bina hi utthaliya
G:hello...(maan ka call tha.)
M:geet kya flight land kar chuki???
G:😒do min mein pata chal jayega..
M:aacha..thora jaldi aana mein wait kar raha hoon...
 
 
 
 
maine usse baat poori nahi karne di call cut kar diya..
 
 
 
 
 
N:geet kya hua????
G:kuch nahi...aacha..thora jaldi aana mein wait kar raha hoon...😛(initating maan)
 
 
 
 
listening to this naina started laughing then i also joined her...we had fun time recalling it...
 
 
THIS IS THE END OF PART 7...
 
 
till this part was for geet now the next few parts will focus on maan's life...
 
thanks for liking and comments...
 
 
if this part is good please comment and like...
 
LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️
 
 
Posted: 12 years ago
loved it,i dont understand if geet loves maan why is she avoiding it.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by seemamary


loved it,i dont understand if geet loves maan why is she avoiding it.
 
 
 
thats the story read it then u will come to know it.
 
Posted: 12 years ago
hi every one...
 
 
I am back with the next part.
 
 
PART 8:
 
date:18:april.
time:breakfast table
place:hoshiyarpur-khurana mansion...
 
 
 
 
 
the table is rectangular with 8 chairs...
 
 
in the head chair was sitting rishab singh khurana the head of the family and father of maan singh khurana...opposite to him was sitting savitri devi khurana wife of rishab and  mother of msk..
left of rishab were sitting dev singh khurana elder son of family and after him was naintara khurana wife of dev and the darling SIL of msk...after her was annie rathord and opposite to her was her hubby arjun rathord and leaving a place was sitting(my ff hero...)maan singh khurana the love of the family...
 
 
 
 
 
 
he was the love of the family only because of his stubornness the agreed to marry him with geet...
 
 
 
 
 
 
(now everything will be maan's monolouge except conv...:)
 
 
 
aaj se ek mahine baad meri shaadi hai aur mein bohut zyada khush hoon mere maan tho kar raha hai ki main aabhi jaake geet ko aapni bahoon mein lee loon aur mehoos karu ki kaise lagtha hai par woh bohut dur hai. mein call karna chata hoon par iss samey woh mera call nahi utthayagi...
 
 
 
 
 
 
SOMEONE CAME    
 
Savitri:arre beta daksh aao nasta kar loo
D:ji aunty ji...
D:hi maan..
M:hi daksh...
 
 
daksh came and sat in the free chair...
 
 
 
nasta ke baad mein aur daksh terrace par jaye...
 
 
 
mein aapni fav. place par baith gaya...
daksh mera mazak bata ta ki mein aapni usse place ko leke kuch zyada possessive hoon mein nahi sunta kyunki woh place mera liye bohut special hai...
 
 
usse mujhe yaad dilaya ki ise place ki karan maine aapna ek dost ko kho diya
 
 
 
----------------flash back-------------
 
 
mere sare friends aaye the aur hum sab uppar cricket khelne uppar aaye the...
 
 
 
thodi der khelne ke baad hum thak gaye...mere terrace ke corner mein ek room sa bana tha jo open tha aur usse place mein baithne ke liye slab type bana hai...
 
 
 
 
 
hum sab wahan bahit gay aur mein aapni fav. par baith gaya sab ko pata tha ki mein use jajhe par kisi ko baith ne nahi deta chane woh meri family ho ya friend...
 
 
 
 
mein 2 min ke liye bahar gaya jab takmein aaya mera ek dost wahan baitha tha mera reaction deekhne ke liya mujhe itna jussa😡😡😡 aaya ki meine usski haddi todh di 😕aur bola
 
 
 
 
agli baar koi yaha baita to REACTION isse bura hoga....
 
 
---------flash back------------------
 
 
uske baad se mera friends mere ghar aate the tho usse kamre mein nahi jate the...
 
 
 
mein ne kisiko nahi bataya ki woh meri fav kyun thi aur na hi mujhe pehale pata thi par aab pata chal gaya hai ki woh itni special kyun hai...
 
 
 
 
 
this is the end of part 8  
 
 
PRECAP:WHY IS IT SPECIAL...
 
 
 
waiting for likes and comment...
 
 
LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️
Posted: 12 years ago
loved it... i just read ur ff and its awesome...
Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the likes and comments...
here is part 9:
 
 
mein aur daksh saath mein the...
D:chal maan aab bata bhi de ki teri yeh fav. place kyun hai???
 
aab mein daksh ko kya batau ki woh meri fav. kyun hai...
 
M:chood na kya laga kar rakha hai...tune packing kar li na 5 din baad delhi jaana hai...
D:haan maine packing kar li...aur tune(he himself answered)haan tune tho packing kar li hogi😉(in a teasing tone)..
mein khud soochna laga ki kab se yeh meri fav. place ban gayi...
 
--------------------flash back---------------
 
har saal geet chuttiyon mein yahan aathi thi.
 
yeh tab ki baat hai jab mein 10 saal ka tha...
 
 
usse saal geet aayi thi tab yash chota tha aur bohut cute bhi tha ...geet meri se cycle seekthi thi...
 
 
 
usse saal ek din hum awiee uppar aaye aur hum uppar wale kamre mein baith gaye...geet hamesha ek hi jaghe par baith ti thi usse terrace par tare dekhne aache lagthe the iseliye woh zyada samay uppar hi reheti aur usi place par baith ti thi...
 
 
 
use saal uske jaane ke baad mujhe chaine hi nahi hota tha mujhe pata hi nahi hota tha ki iska karan kya hoga...
 
 
 
 
issi soch mein ek baar mein upar aaya aur room mein baith gaya...
 
 
 
baiththe hi meri bechani door ho gayi...maine  habhi geet ko usse place par baithe hua dhayan nahi diya agar diya hota tho mujhe ussi samay pata chal jata ki is bechani ka karan kya tha...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
usse din ke baad jab bi mein bechain hota tho mein ussi place par baith jata...
 
 
 
woh sukun mujhe kahi aur nahi mila.tab se woh meri pav. place ban gayi thi...
 
 
 
 
------------------flash back--------------
 
mujhe aab pata chala kyunki usse place mein geet biththi thi aur wahan par uska ehassas hai jo mujhe sukoon deka hai...
 
aaj akl tho mera sara wakth yahan baithe baithe hi jata hai...
 
 
 
mein aur daksh baatie karne kage...(ofcourse geet ki😉)..
 
 
shyaam ho gayi thi...
 
 
geet mera mazak banathi hai ki mein usse baath karne ke liye call karne mein bohut punctual hai...aab mein usse kaise batou ki mein call hang karne ke baadh doosre din ke 9 baje tak wait karne mujhe itna mushkil hai...
 
 
 
mein jab bhi call karhta hoon woh 10 min baath kar kar call rakh deti hai😒...pata nahi kyun par 2 mahine se yeh meri aadath ban chuki hai...
 
 
poora din wait karo aur 10 min. ki baath😭...
(😳BOHUT BADI NA INSAAFI HAI😆)
 
 
THIS IS THE END OF PART 9...
 
 
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LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️
Posted: 12 years ago
👏awesome story... plzzz updt soon👏
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ... loved all  parts , 1 - 9 ...

add me to ur pm list ...

continue soon ...
Posted: 12 years ago
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY TO ALL OF U...
 
 
 
 
        

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