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FF(Maneet):Dil mil gaye Thrd 2 Upd prt 34 pg 140 (Page 6)

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Congratulation piya dear for thread #2
you have summarised everything very nicely
Waiting for part 22

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hey dear.. congrats on the new thread...
waiting for the update...
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Thank you dear friends for your love, support and encouragement.  Here is the next part I hope u will enjoy reading it.

Request: Roopali dear I wanted a VM for this particular FF can u pls make it for me. Song is "Tum ho mera Pyar" from the movie Haunted 3D. I will pm u the entire situation. Thanks


Geet is really irritated and today she can't share her feelings with anyone since her mom is also not there in the house.

Geet gets ready to leave for the Radio Station

For the first time Geet was late. Yash had started the program. Maan realized that Geet was still thinking about his so called girlfriend "khawb" and hence was late for the show

Maan was extremely happy that his plan was indeed working

Geet reaches the Radio Station. She is surprised to see Yash.

Yash: Guys back to back songs for u

Yash goes and greets Geet they hug each other.

Geet: Yash tum kab aaye?

Yash: Yesterday night dear.

Geet: Oh'

Yash: (realizes that geet is lost in sm thoughts) Geet kya hua tum khoyi khoyi lag rahi ho.

Geet: Nahi Yash wo' actually

Yash: Ofho Geet main kuch dino k liye shehar se bahar kya chala gaya k tumhe mujhse baat share karne mein bhi hishkichahat ho rahi hai.

Geet: Nahi Yash aisi baat nahi hai' tum mujhe ye batau kya tumne maan se baat ki' mera matlab hai kya   tum maan se subah phone pe baat kar rahe the? ( u tell me did u contact maan after u arrived?)

Yash: nahi toh' haan main usse call karne ki koshish zaroor kar raha tha magar baar baar yahi sunne ko mil raha tha k busy on another call (no dear I tried calling him but he was busy on some other call)

Geet: (sad) Kya' Achha batau kya  tum kisi "Khwab" ko jaante ho? (ok do u know anyone named khwab?)

Yash: Khwab ye kaun hai?

Geet: Maan ki girlfriend

Yash: (suppresses his smile) Achha' maan ne toh mujhe iske baare mein kuch nahi bataya bada chupha rustam hain humara dost' khair jald hi main usse milkar uski class lunga aur usse kahunga ke humari honewali bhabhi se humhe jald hi milaye (Ok girlfriend' Maan never told me abt this' I will meet him and ask him to introduce me to my future bhabhi)

Geet: (frustrated) Kya honewali bhabhi?

Yash: (smiles) Haan Geet wo jo koi bhi ladki hai wo toh definitely maan ki future wife hai' u know na apna maan is a one woman man

Geet: Chup Yash. Khabhardar aisi baate dubara ki  toh'  mujhse bura koi nahi hoga keh deti hoon (Yash stop talking nonsense'dare if u speak such a thing again)

Yash: Tum aise kyun react kar rahi ho? (Why r u reacting like this dear?)

Geet: Wo tumhe baadmein batathi hoon' pehle program continue karte hain

They go on with their next segment

Geet is trying to call maan... But maan doesn't pick up her call. Yash is trying hard to keep a check on his laughter


Meera: Pari Yash wapas aa gaya' I am so happy Pari ' (Pari yash is back)

Pari: Meera ye acchi baat hai k yash wapas aa gaya hai lekin teri problem abhi tak solve nahi hui ' agar tujhe Yash ko wapas apni zindagi mein shaamil karna hai tho tuhje usse maafi maangni hogi aur usse ye yakin dilana hoga k tu usse kitni mohabbat karti hain

Meera: Haan pari tu thik keh rahi hai' Yash mera phone tho nahi receive karega issliye main radio station jaakar hi usse mil lethi hoon (I will personally go and meet Yash)

Pari: Haan ye thik hoga

Meera gets ready and immediately leaves

The show ends.

Geet: Yash tum ek kaam karo k aaj shaam ko Maan se mil lo (Yash I think u should b meeting maan today)

Yash: Geet aaj main thoda busy hoon isliye aaj main Maan se nahi mil sakta kal millunga  (I m busy today I will meet him tomorrow)

Geet: (thinking) Dath theriki ek bus Yash tha jiski baat Maan taal nahi saktha tha aur ab isse bhi aaj hi koi zaruri kaam yaad aana tha' o babaji ab aap hi batayiye ke main maan ko date pe jaane se kaise rokhu ( It was only Yash who could have stopped Maan from meeting that khwab and yash has an imp work today o god how do I stop maan from going on a date)

Yash: Geet kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: Kuch bhi tho nahi

Yash: Ok Geet tumse baadmein mitlta hoon. Bye.

Geet: Bye

Meera is waiting for Yash outside the radio station

Yash comes out.

Yash (calls maan) Hey Maan tumhara plan ka tho bahut hi badiya asar ho raha hai geet par. Bechari bahut hi pareshan hai. Aur haan ye "KHWAB" kaun hai? ( Maan ur plan is working' geet is really very upset and irritated and by the way who is this khwab?)

Maan: (laughs) Accha toh geet ne tumhe khwab k baare mein batadiya. Tujhe detail mein sab shaamko batatha hoon. Waise maine tujhse uss jagah ka address msg kar diya hain ( o I will tell u everything in detail in d evening )

Yash: Ya I got ur msg. Ok then see u in d evening

Maan: Bye

Call ends

Yash is very happy. But then his happiness is short lived as soon as he sees Meera.

Yash tries to avoid her

Meera: Yash' Yash pls meri baat tho suno (pls listen to me Yash)

Yash: Dekho meera mujhse yaha kisi bhi tarah ka tamasha nahi khada karna hai samjhi tum' tumhe mere saath jobhi khel khelna tha tum wo khel khel chukhi ho' ab pls meri zindagi mein dakhal dena bannd kardo (Look Meera pls don't create a scene over here u have already cheated me once and now pls stop interfering in my life)

Meera: Yash main maaanti hoon k mujhse galti ho gayi par mujhe apni baat kehne ka ek mauka tho dho (pls forgive me Yash atleast listen to me once)

Yash: mujhse tumhare baatho mein koi bhi dilchaspi nahi hai' and pls stay away from me ( I m not at all interested in your talks pls stay away from me)

Yash immediately starts his bike and goes away

Geet had witnessed this incident. But she was unable to hear the conversation clearly and right now her main priority was Maan hence she decided to discuss this topic later on with Yash

Geet: Ofho ye maan bhi na phone kyun nahi uttha rahe.

Geet: Khair I m getting late for college lectures katham hone par maan ko call karti hoon

Geet leaves for her college

Maan reaches KC

Maan: 100 miss calls and that too from my Geet. Good going MSK Geet par aakhirkaar apka jaadhu chal hi gaya.

Maan: Bahut maza aa raha thana geet tumhe meri thaang keechthe hue ab tum bhi thode din tadpo' confess tho tum hi pehle karogi' n I promise once u confess main bhi tumhe tumhare zindagi ka sabse bada surprise dunga

Saying so he enters his office

Adi and Romeo are busy discussing something

Maan: Are romeo wo tumhare mobile ka ringtone'

Romeo: Haan sir badal diya

Maan: kyun badal diya' kitna achha song tha' immediately wo song ko dubara apna ringtone bana do' got it

Romeo: (confused) Yes sir

Maan smiles and enters his cabin

Romeo: Ye Maan sir ko kabhi kabhi kya ho jaata hai' mera mobile mujhe decide karna chaahiye ke mujhe kaunsa ringtone dalna hai magar nahi mere boss apne mood k hisab se decide karenge' kya zamana aa gaya hai

PRECAP 1: Yash: "Maan meera ne jo mere saath kiya main usse kabhi bhi nahi bhul sakta"

PRECAP 2: Maan : "Geet I love u"

Ok guys pls mujhpar jhute aur chappal mat phekna I know k aaj k update mein maneet ek saath nahi the but pls trust me guys confession k pehle aur confession k baad bhi u will get many mahi moments that is a pakka promise bt u need to b patient for that

Pls press the like button and leave ur precious comments and if at all any one of u want me to include any particular sequence or track in d future do let me know

Roopali once again I request u to make a VM for this FF song as I told u is "TUM HO MERA PYAR" from d movie Haunted 3D

Love- Piya

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Edited by piya- - 13 July 2011 at 3:57am

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Awesome update...Tongue

waiting for confession..Continue soon ...

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Awesome update...Smile

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waiting for next part... the big confession of maneet... yash meera track bhi teekh kar do... dil jaldi he mil jayge

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