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Hello dear friends. This is the second thread of my FF Dil mil Gaye.Tongue
 
Initially I started this as an OS but b'coz of the encouragement love and support that each one of u gave me I converted it into an FF and I have successfully completed 21 parts of this story.
 
So here is a short recap of this FF till now.
 
Geet, Maan and Yash are best friends.
Geet is doing her graduation in Arts and works as a part time as a radio jockey in Just Chill Radio Station. Yash is also an RJ and works with Geet. Maan is the owner of Khurana Constructions and secretly loves Geet. Geet shares a beautiful relationship with her Mom Savitri Handa. Meera is a diehard fan of Yash. Pari is the best friend of Meera and an aspiring model.
 
The story begins with Geet. Geet is sleeping and as usual she is dreaming about her Prince Charming. Her Mom breaks her dream and tells her that she is already late for work. Geet realizes this and rushes to get ready but takes a promise from her mom that next time she will wake her up atleast 5 - 10 minutes late so that she can see the face of her Prince Charming.
 
Geet reaches the radio station. Meanwhile Maan is also ready to meet his most important client... Nakul is confused coz office begins at 9 but maan always leaves for work at 7... the reality is that Maan's most important client is none other than Geet. He never wants to miss her show...he loves her unconditionally
 
Geet starts her program and announces that Yash is again late and he is not popular. Yash enters and controls the situation. He questions geet why did she call him unpopular... Maan realizes that both of them would once again start fighting therefore he gives a call to Geet. Geet keeps the mobile on loudspeaker and then the three of them start discussing on this topic
 
Acc to Yash he is quite popular and he has a huge female fan following but geet believes that other than herself and Maan no one can tolerate Yash for a longer period of time. Maan gives a suggestion that a fourth person should b involved in this discussion. Geet gets an idea and announces a "win a date with yash contest" Yash is very nervous Geet is Happy and so is Maan.
 
Meera the first caller wins the contest. Yash is very excited for his date and he calls Meera and asks her to give a description of herself so that he can recognize her. Meera gets nervous and she gives a detailed description of her friend Pari... Meera convinces Pari to go and meet Yash as Meera... Pari goes for the date
 
The date is a total flop since Yash couldn't relate to Pari and Pari is least intersted in Yash.
 
Geet is restless. Her Mom wants to know the reason that is troubling her daughter. Geet narrates everything... that she had announced a blind date and d first caller itself had won the contest... she was confused abt her feelings... her mom gave her 2 reasons first she felt that mayb geet was worried for yash since she didn't want any wrong person to enter his life or second reason maybe geet loves Yash.
 
Her mother tells that u should give urself sometime before u go for some kind of conclusions... Maan and Yash meet and Yash informs him about the weird date... Maan suggests Yash to give a second try... Yash decides to  give a surprise visit to Meera while Maan decides to confess his feelings for geet.
 
Maan records his confession in a casette. Yash meets the original Meera and Meera introduces herself as Pari. Yash is simply bowled by her simplicity and innocence.
 
Maan goes to meet geet. Geet is still sad. Maan realizes that geet is upset and wants to know the reason behind this. Initially geet does not tell d reason maan feels hurt and he is about to leave geet immediately stops him and hugs him... ( mahi moment) geet informs maan that she fels that she has fallen in love with a guy and she will lose him forever.
 
Maan is heartbroken but he wants geet to b happy he convinces geet that she should confess her feelings to that guy very soon... Together both of them start completing geet's assignment... in between there are many mahi moments
 
Savitri had overheard their convo and she realizes that geet has feelings for Maan n not Yash... Maan leaves for work and places the casette in his car he does not give it to geet. Geet is confused she didn't want maan to leave there was smthng special between them...
 
Meanwhile Yash comes to know the truth of Meera. He decides that from now onwards she is not a part of his life... he leavesthe city for few days
 
Geet's scooty is not working Maan is passing by he notices Geet and offers to drop her at her residence. A client gives an urgent call to Maan and tells him to collect an imp file from him. Maan goes to collect the file and meanwhile Geet is feeling bored so she plays a casette that was lying there. this was the same casette in which Maan had recorded his confession.
 
Ok now just in case if u'll hv forgotten that maan ne actually kya kaha tha then here it is...
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This was the same cassette in which maan had recorded his confession

Geet: Ye aawaz tho cassette se aa rahi rahi hai.

 

She increases the volume

 

( Maan's confession begins)

 

Geet... is cassette mein meri aawaz sunkar shayad tumhe thoda ajeeb lage. Wo actually bahut dino se main tumse ek baat kehna chahta tha. Lekin isse pehle ke main apni baat tumhare saamne rakhu tumhe mujhse ek vaada karna hoga ke chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye humare dosti ke rishte mein koi bhi badlav nahi aayega, hum humesha se best friends the aur aage bhi best friends rahenge.

 

Sach kahu tho main kafi confused hoon ke iss baat ki shuruwat main kaha se karu.

 

Jaanti ho geet kuch saal pehle mere Dad ki death ho gayi thi. Mere dad mere liye mere guardian, mere friend , mere hero mere sab kuch the. Unke sudden death se jaise meri saari duniya hi bikar gayi.

 

Apne gum ko bhulane ke liye maine apne aap ko puri tarah se kaam mein uljaye rakha itna ke naahi mujhe kabhi waqt ka hosh raha aur naahi kisi ke feelings ki kadar. Main dheere dheere insaan se machine ban gaya.

 

Saare jazbaat, sari khushiyaan duniya ke saare rang mere liye bematlabi aur bemaiyne ho gaye. Mere dil ne tho jaise dhadakna hi band kar diya.

 

Maine khud hi apne irth girt aise deewar khade kar diye jise thodna mushkil hi nahi namumkin tha. Har wo baat jo ke mere dil ke jazbaato ka darpan hoti thi use bahar aane se pehle hi mein khuchal deta tha. Apne aap ko maine andhere ke ek aise daldal mein phasa diya tha jisme ke har roz main ek nayi maut mar raha tha.

 

Phir ek din achanak sab kuch badal gaya.

Tum meri zindagi mein aayi geet. Tumne mere andhere zindagi mein khushiyon ki roshni bankar dastak di

 

Aisa laga jaise ke khushiyan apni bahhe failakar mujhe apni taraf bula rahi ho. Koi mera haath thamkar mujhe us daldal se bahar nikal raha ho.

 

Palak jhapakte hi mere charo taraf ki deeware tumne apni maasumiyat se thod di. Tumne mujhe iss baat ka ehsaas dilaya ke zindagi mein pyar, mohabbat, dosti, rishte naate in sab ke kya maiyne hai. Mujhe ek machine se phir se ek insaan bana diya, ek aisa insaan jo ke dusaro ke jazbaato ki izzat kare unhe samjhe, jise khush rehne ka pura hak ho aur jiska dil bhi kisi ke liye dhadakta ho.

 

Main tumse ye tho nahi kahunga ke tumhe dekhte hi main tumhe pasand karne lag gaya tha, kyunki ye sach nahi hai.

 

Tumhe humhari pehli mulakat tho yaad hogi hi jaha pe tumne mujhe sabke saamne Dhust Danav kaha tha aur hum dono ke beech kafi badi bhehes chid gayi thi. Yakin mano geet mujhe vakai mein uss din ye laga tha ek agar main iss duniya mein kisi se sabse zyada nafrat karta hoon tho wo tum ho

 

Lekin kismat ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha. Pata nahi ye nafrat kab dosti mein badal gayi aur kab ...

 

Jaanti ho geet nakul mujhse humesha ek sawal karta hain ke subah 9 baje ke office ke liye main subah 7 baje hi kyun nikal jaata hoon. Us bechare ko ye nahi pata ke subah main kisi client se milne ke liye nahi balki apne car mein tumhara show sunne ke liye jaldi nikalta hoon. Bechara yahi sochta hai ke ye kaisi meeting hai jo ke kabhi khatm hi nahi hoti.

 

Mera bus chale tho sach mein ye silsila kabhie bhi khatm na ho.

 

Geet...

 

Tum haule se meri zindagi mein aayi aur jab mujhe tumhare paas hone ka ehsaas hua tab maine jaana ke main kitna lucky hoon ke mujhe iss kaiynaat ki sabse beshkimati darohar mili hai.

 

Us Rab ne tumhe tarashkar tumhe banakar apne rutbe ko ek nayi pehchaan di hai geet.

 

Meri din bhar ki saari thakan tumhari mushkurahat ko dekhkar mith jaati hai.

 

Tumhari shararate tumhe mere dil ke aur kareeb le aati hai.

 

Duniya ke sabse kimati heere ki chamak bhi tumhare aakhon ki chamak ke saamne phiki hai Geet.

 

Tumhari khilkhilati hui hassi mere saare dukh dard ko pal mein gayab kar deti hai.

 

Tumhare chehre ke noor ko dekh chand bhi sharmakar badalo ke peeche chup jaata hai.

 

Tumhari maasumiyat mujhe iss baat ka ehsaas dila thi hai ke duniya aaj bhi khoobsurat hai.

 

Tumhari aakhon mein nami dekhta hoon tho dil ke sau thukde ho jaate hai.

 

Jab bhi tum mujhe meri kisi galti par daat thi ho iss baat ka yakeen ho jaata hai ke haan iss duniya mein mera bhi koi apna hai jise meri fikar hai.

 

Jab tum sharmati ho tab tumhari khoobsurati mein char chand lag jaate hai aur jab tum gusse mein apni nak ko twist karti ho tho yakeen mano geet us waqt tumse zyaada cute koi bhi nahi lagta.

 

Jab tum mujhse naaraz ho jaati ho to lagta hai jaise khushiyoon ne ek baar phir mujhse apna muh mod liya ho.

 

Tumhari saadgi tho khud mein ek misaal hai geet jisse dekhkar uparwale pe yakeen karne par main majboor ho jaata hoon.

 

Chand ki chandni bhi mujhe tumhari aakhon ka mehez ek saaya nazar aati hai.

 

Jab tum meri nazaro se dur chali jaati ho tab is darr se ke khahi main tumhe kho na du main sehem sa jaata hoon.

 

Jab tumhari nigahoon mein apne liye pyar dekhta hoon tab lagta hai jaise ke fizaoon mein duniya ke saare rang ghul gaye ho.

 

Tumhari tasveer ko seene se lagakar soote waqt jannat mein hone ka ehsaas hota hai.

 

Kisi shayar ka khayal bhi tumhari khoobsurati ko lafzo mein bayan nahi kar sakta geet.

 

Agar mera bus chale tho main tumhe apne haatho ki lakeero mein kuch iss tarah se sajadu ke chahkar bhi koi mujhe tumse judha na kar paaye.

 

Main tumse ye tho nahi kehta ke chand taare thod kar main tumhare kadmo mein la dalunga.

 

Haan, magar ye vaada zaroor karta hoon ke

 

Jab bhi tumhe meri zaroorat hogi tum mujhe apne paas paougi

 

Jab bhi tum ladkhadane lagogi tab main tumhara sahara bankar tumhe thaam loonga.

 

Har wo cheez jisse tumhe takleef ho usse pehle mera saamna karna hoga.

 

Hawa ka har wo jhookha jo ke tumhe nuksaan pauchane ke irade se tumhari taraf bade usse tumhe choone se pehle hi main rokh lunga.

 

Tumhe is duniya ke saari pareshaniyoon se dur mehfoos apne dil mein samalkar rakhunga.

 

Apne zindagi ki har ek saas main tumpar nauchavar karunga.

 

Tumhari zindagi ko phoolo se kuch iss kadar mehkadunga ke kaate chahkar bhi tumhare aas paas na mandara sakhe.

 

Pehle tum meri aadat thi geet lekin ab zarurat ban chuki ho. Tumhare bagair mera koi bhi astitva ya wajood nahi hai.

 

Duniya ke saare khoobsurat cheezo mein mujhe bus ek hi chehra nazar aata hai meri geet ka.

 

Sach kahu tho iss saare kaiynaat ke khoobsurat cheezo ko ikkata kar tumhare saamne agar khada kar diya jaaye tab bhi wo saari cheeze tumhari mehez ek parchayi bankar reh jaayengi.

 

Geet...

 

Tum apne dil ki baat bade aasani se keh deti ho aur main har wo baat se dur bhagta hoon jo ke mere feelings ko reveal karte ho.

 

Tum bade aasani se dost bana leti ho aur main utna hi reserved person hoon

 

Tum bahut hi sweet ho aur main ek dhust dhanav

 

Main jaanta hoon ke main tumhare liye perfect nahi magar tum mere liye perfect ho.

 

Jo khamiyaan mujhme hai wo saari khoobiyaan tumme hai

 

In short, U COMPLETE ME GEET! U COMPLETE ME!

 

Geet main tumhe dilojaan se chahta hoon aur jab tak ye zindagi hai ye chahat yuhi barkaraar rahegi.

 

Jab bhi mujhe aisa lagta hai ke main tumhe isse zyaada pyar nahi kar sakta tab tum hamesha kuch aisa kar deti ho ke mein phir se ek baar tumhari pyar ki gehrahiyoon mein doob jaata hoon.

 

Tum soch rahi hogi ke ye baat main tumse milkar bhi keh sakta tha. Maine aisa is liye nahi kiya ke main tumhe kisi bhi tarah ki takleef nahi pouchhana chahta tha.

 

Maine tumse pehle bhi kaha hai ke chahe tumhara jo bhi faisla ho humhare dosti par uska koi bhi asaar nahi hoga. Tumhare faisle ki main izzat karta hoon.

 

Tumhari khushi mein hi meri khushi hai. Main bus tumse yahi kahoonga ke jaise ho humesha waisi hi bane rehna aur apne muskurahat se sabke zindagi mein khusiyaan bekerti rehna.

Tumhara maan

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Geet is extremely happy today she is not confused abt her feelings... she is thankful to her destiny that she found Maan
 
She goes and hugs him she was abt to kiss him when maan's mobile started ringing. Maan is cursing himself since he felt that geet is in love with smone else. Geet decides to play with Maan for sometime.
 
Geet starts making different plans to trouble Maan... maan cannot understand this behaviour of geet...
She goes and announces that maan has a secret girfriend called "khawb" the entire office staff is shocked...
 
then there was a song sequence :HUM TUM EK KAMRE MEIN "
then we saw a scooty ride of maneet and then a passionate romantic rain sequence of maneet song was "HUM..TUM"
 
they shared their first kiss
 
Geet tried to avoid this topic and said that it was just a weak moment... bt this time maan is smart... he figures out that geet had listened to his casette and now he decides that he will trouble geet to such an extent that she will b forced to confess her feelings
 
Yash returns back and calls Maan. Maan takes a promise from Yash that he won't tell geet that he was d one with whom maan was talking in d morning
 
Maan informs geet that he is taking "Khwab" for a date. Geet is shocked since she cannot figure out  who has taken advantage of her lie... she she knows that there is no girl with the name "khwab" it was just a prank
 
Ok guys so this was a short summary of the story till now
 
the precap of the next part is
 
Meera: "Yash meri baat tho suno"
Maan: "Geet I love u"WinkWinkWink
 
I hope that i continue to get your love and support
 
Love - Piya
 
Link to Thread 1 :
 
 
Link to my OS: Tere mast mast do nain
 
 
Link to my FF: Mere humsafar Thread 1
 
 
Link to my FF: Mere Humsafar thread 2
 
 
Link to Dil mil gaye thread 3
 


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hey piya...
congrats on the new thread...!!!
do continue sooon...plz plz plz

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Congratz 4 new thread dear

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congrats 4 new thread


update soon dear

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