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congrats !!!!!!!! 4 ur first ff ...

interesting concept ...

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thank you for giving such support but i need more then this pls ... if u feel this is good concept pls leave coments and press like button.

 
Part -3

Maan  leaned back of car seat and just closed his eyes. Sangeetha come front of him. "maan kyu maan ithna soch thi hu mey thumari dil mey hu na..."

His heart is squished by pain. What to do ?how to come out from this pain? Past five years he can not forget her one second. Where ever he go he feel she is with him. 'sangeetha kya hal  bana diya tume maan singh khurana..." she giggles to him.

Suddenly car stopped with big jerk. Driver turned back and said" sir ek ladki ..."

Maan"What happened..."

"Patha nahi ..."

Lets go he don't have any mercy on that girl. Before car start, bodyguards reach the car  the girl fainted. Everybody blanked just watching her . maan get off from car really he is not sure what made him take such step mey be he lost in sangeetha 's memory. He lifted geet and he sat in his car.

Really don't know what happened to maan just he asked driver to move. After 1 or 2 kilometer journey again the geet come to little sense started to scare bcoz she found some of the guys searching on road .they stopped all vehicles and checking. The geet mumered "babhaji help me abhi mey kya karu..."she seen maan. Maan just observing her quietly. The situations are making him to remember that day where he lost sngeetha. Exactly same day ,same situation, in same place now he is facing.

She covered face fully with duppata only her tears filled eyes are visible.  Her eyes are just requesting him to save her. Maan take one shawl from back  and he covered her tip to toe, he grabbed her with his arm. She just placed her head on maans chest.

The people  neared to their car ask them to open the door,maan don't want to create unwanted problems.

Maan "She is my wife , she is not well we are just going to hospital ... pls...but the guys are not cared they forcefully try to open the door, maan barged "chandu move..." now the car moved in high speed where they can not stop the car.

Security guards also followed the car. Suddenly maan felt that she is mumering something just he try to understand what she is mumering." Babhaji  ma ko bhachalo... dharji ko bachalo... brij byia nahi maro hamko... pls humara pura paise apko dedundi pls ho choti bhachha hey unko nahi maro pls ..."her non stop mummer make him rest less.

"Sir  hum nahi ja sakthi idar pura rastha bandh hey morning clear hoga, abhi hum kya karegi..." Chandu told in worried.

Maan just thinking what to do with this girl , I think she is in problem how to help her just leave her here and go?no no that is not maan singh khurana will do ...

"Chandu deko aaj rat ruk ne keliye  koi rasta hey..."

 "Ji sir"

 Within few minutes he came back  "sir aap yaha ka guest house mey ruk sakthe..."

"ok" he picked her and went to guest house. All the securities are they tired and they waited out side itself.

Maan carried geet to his room. He try to wake up her but she is again fainted. Slowly he put her on bed she mumered in pain. Slowly he removed the from her face . he was shocked ...  she is sangeetha...  how come after so many years she is lieing here. No she is not my sangeetha. Mey be some mistake. She left her soul on my hands. Clearly he saw that she died in his own hands.

How come she looking bilkul like sangeetha. Still he had some hopes in his heart that she will be sangeetha.

She started murmuring. She is in pain. She is fainted but the pain is bringing her on conscious. Just slowly he opened the showl fully just he freeze. Her most of the body parts are bleeding like any thing. Every where there is poked sharp prickles . mey be she fallen on prickl bushes. That is hurted her very badly.

He need the doctor urgent .but he know very well that can not be bcoz in this high way where he will search doctor. Something he decide and he removed her cloths one by one .there is very sharp prickles poked her hole body very badly. her milky body was more visible to maan but maan is not interested just he start removing the prickles from her body.  His hand moved slowly  top to bottom. His gaze stuked in her neck. There is a small gold thin chain with pendent he grabed the pendent and pressed secret code to open it. pendent  opeaned his eyes where widened. Yes that chain he presented to sangeetha when she is last breath. The secret code only none by maan. Specially he given order to goldsmith made it. Inside the pendent he inserted sangeetha and maan picture.

How come she is wearing .geet start mummer in pain. He came out from his thoughts.  he removed all prickles one by one with out delay.

From top to toe he observed again searching prickles but finally he succeeded removing all the stone pieces and prickles'  from her body.  he observed her feet each inch of her feet is poked by sharp prickles and stones. How did she ran from there in this pain god knows. Her soft skin was marked very badly from injuries.

Maan just wondered how she can be managed in this situation.

After removing all the prickles from her body she slept quietly. At the same time even sun raised...chandu informed that the way also cleared.

Again there is no other spare cloths for that geet. Maan removed his long coat and covered her  he picked her his strong  arms and he made the way to car.

Maan just thinking what to tell about this girl to dadima and anni. Who is she ...and she is looking like sangeetha...

 

 

Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake,  and etc  If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments. 

 



Edited by varsha-sharma - 07 July 2011 at 10:13pm

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
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nice tittle
so geet & sangeetha
are look like
me already loving the storyHeart
sounds promising
yu narrate so well
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simply beautiful all
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