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Maneet FF-tum mere kaun hu-pt-48- pg-144 (Page 12)

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Dadima came to geet room. Geet is leaning her bed and she is dreaming about prem. Dadima showed her jewelries and ask her to ware. Geet no words to speak with dadima.

Geet :" thank you dadima... but I think all these are too expensive"


Dadima  hugged her " tum iss ghar ki beti tarah geet have to take this..." and she didn't kept quite . she started remove her old ornaments and placed new jewelries on her. After decorating her dadima stood far and watched her. Some where her eyes are filled. In heart some where it is pained. After some days geet will move from KM. again KM fill from darkess. If maan agreed to marry her...dadima stop to think.

She closed to her , picked some kajal and placed behind her ear. Dadima grabbed her to hall to show everybody. anni clapped, vicky teased her. At the same time maan entered the hall. He stunned looking geet. His gaze is not moving from her. His throat chocked. Geet very much shied and ran to her room she closed the door. Anni and vicky followed her and asking her to open the door. Her image is not even moving from his mind. He is in trance. He went to his room and closed his eyes. Nobody noticed him.


At evening 7o clock Dadima  came to maan room." Maan pls take geet to boutique . "

Maan: " sorry Dadima I have lot of work..."

Dadima: " pls maan vicky is already left home and anni is helping to me. there are  too much of marriage pending work is remained. Can you take her to boutique."

He couldn't say no to her. He agreed. Geet ready with her simple yellow suit. Today she left her hair open. It is freely flying here and there. Her jumka is kissing her cheek. Maan jealous with her jumka. Her simple make up, her simple yellow suit  made her more beautiful. There is a special glow on her face. He dipped his face down .

They reached boutique it is almost 8'o clock. Sales person welcome them and he started show beautiful wedding dresses. Geet didn't notice the time . she is busy with selecting new dresses. Again his gaze stuck on her. He is just watching her excitement. Each sari she show to him and asking suggest for maan. Even maan is helping her. Slowly all the customer left  boutique .

it is almost 9'o clock. Maan got the call from Sharma so he went outside. Only geet remained in side. Suddenly all the lights off. Geet scared. After that accident night she is scaring to face darkness. She started to search maan. "Maan sir...maan sir..." but no use. It is a very big boutique. Her body started shiver. She felt as she lost her all strength. She panicked . when she about fell down maan holed her tightly.



Geet felt somewhere she gain  her life. she hugged  tightly  his neck. Maan trying to calm her. But she is too scared. She is not listening any of his words.


Maan hold her tightly. He closed distance between them. There is no inch of  space between them. He can feel her face on his  bare chest. he can feel Her lips shivering on his chest. Her tears are making wet on his chest. His desires are waking. His chin is touching her fore head. He wrapped her waist in one hand and another hand her back. His hands unwillingly searching her curves. Now it is too hard to control . he cupped her face. His lips move to her lips. When he is about to  touch her lips ...Suddenly Hole boutique brightened with light. Maan quickly moved back. At the same time geet also gained her sense. He freed her. She shied to scaring in dark. She is not aware about his thoughts. "sorry sir...wo mey dur gaya..."

Maan no face to face her. He is dying inside with guilty. How its possible. He thought that he buried all his desires in his heart but today ...just one touch of geet again he loosed his control on him. he is totally ashamed. Looking her innocent face he him self blamed.

Geet selected her wedding dresses and they made their way to KM. on the way maan didn't speak a word. Geet failed to understand His face expression .


Next day at KC .Sharma came had a meeting with KC staff. He is very much impressed of their work. He handled 3 huge projects to KC. Maan planed to throw party Sharma .sharma agreed for party. Adi ,sasha, pinky they taken all the responsibilities. Geet is busy with her wedding plans. Maan don't want to disturb her. but Sharma forced  geet to join party. She agreed. Even  prem waiting for her from long time to spend some time with her. Even he forced to her come party.

At evening maan enter the party he started to search geet. She is with prem. She is wearing white beautiful saree and with very minimum diamond jewelry. Some where his heart squished with pain. when music started geet and prem  moved to dance floor.




Geet and prem enjoying their dance and their closeness. Where maan couldn't see any more. He moved to drinks counter. Requested for drink. Hole KC staff surprised. They know very well MSK will not take any drinks in any party. He is not a drunker. He is not a smoker but today he started to drunk.

NT smiled .she is with sameera. Both of them watching maan from long time sitting in corner table, they are waiting for  perfect time. Evil smile appeared on both of them lips. NT whispered some thing in sameera's ear. She nodded she moved to maan.

Maan furiously looking at stage. Somebody tapped his back. "sameera...tum?"

Sameera: "what a surprise are drinking... um are you..." she meet him one event which is organized by KC long back. She is the model of KC and close friend to NT. very long back she try to trap maan but maan ignored .but today much interested speak with her. Some how  he want to cool his anger. Sameera given a drink. Maan push the drink a side. But sameera" maan pls after many days we have meet. "

Some where he accepted her offer. he agreed?.he grabbed sameera to dance flour. He is watching geet in eye corner. She is enjoying with prem. Prem holding her waist and he is feeling her softness. His grip tightened on sameeras waist. His eyes spiting fire. Inside alcohol is working  much better. After some time sameera take him away from dance floor. She moved to hotel room which is booked for her.

Geet dancing with prem from lost 1 hour. She tired. She stopped. "prem I want to go  wash room."prem agreed. Geet went back side of  hotel searching wash room. When she is about return she heard NT and dev voice. NT  explaining dev how she trapped maan with sameera.

Geet rushed to inside the  hotel and started to search maan. finally she found his room no with the help of receptionist  . when she knock the door sameera opened the door. Maan is already in bed with half naked. Sameera try to avoid her.  Geet pushed her roughly. Sameera very much disappointed with geet entry. She tapped her feet angrily she left.

Geet is trying to wake up maan. but he is not in sense. He is pulling geet on bed. Geet feared .some how escaped from his grip and try to take him out. But he is too strong then her, again he grabbed her. In one jerk she felled on him. he cupped her face . " sangeetha?why you are trying to go away from me." he hugged.

Her eyes widened. She confirmed some where he is crossing his limit. She try to come out from his grip. he is not leaving her .he hugged her tight. His lips moved hungrily through out her face. He bitted her ears. Tears rolled from geet eyes with pain. His non stop kissing making her week. His lips move to her colure bone. He bitted there aggressively. His desires volcano  busted. He is trying to remove her blouse. Geet at lost she grabbed him to bathroom. She on the shower. Cold water  flowed on both of them. Now maan become little bit silent.

Some how she made him to move from there. He is leaning on her. Its too tough to manage. she try to call anni  but her phone not reachable. Vicky out of station. she didn't call prem bcoz  she don't want to damage maan character in front of prem or others. She made her way backside of hotel to hide from media  and looked for car. She changed her mind bcoz Maan situation is very bad where he can not drive the car. She booked the taxi and made her way to KM.


Pre cap: unwanted twist.


Hi friends once again I request you all ,as this is my first ff I might have done lots of spelling mistakes, grammar mistake,  and etc  If you want me to continue this ,please leave your comments. 













Edited by varsha-sharma - 19 July 2011 at 10:27pm

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Posted: 19 July 2011 at 10:21pm | IP Logged
wow..amazing upate
cant wait for the twist

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Posted: 19 July 2011 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
Awesome.waiting for the twist.hope maan n geet together

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Posted: 19 July 2011 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
both parts amazing
uff dont like dev & NT sam too
i'm glad geet save maan
why is prem in hurry does he
have evil intention or after geet property
i hope the twist turn to be maaneet marriage
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm

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Posted: 19 July 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
great part...waiting for the twist

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Posted: 20 July 2011 at 12:01am | IP Logged
a beautiful part
well written
what is that twist


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Edited by varsha-sharma - 20 July 2011 at 10:16pm

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