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-Awantika-

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Okay Dii. Here's A poem. I wrote this poem for one of my on going ff but then decided to share it here. I've always been a huge literature freak. So i happen to be those young writers who uses heavy words.Tongue
Idk, how is it. But my cousin loved it to bits and now i want all your views LOL

P.s - Thanx to Amna Dii. She's edited my poem and made it better. thanx Dii :)
Okay. its called : " I need you"

I need you my Love
like I never needed before
Every time we come close 
I want you even more

 

I need to feel your kiss

Your touch, your tender caress
Your fingers sliding down my back
As you help me undress

 

The smell of you in my breath
Marks of passion on my back 
With your desire I burn 
As you give me what I lack

 

The warm embrace of your arm
The scintillating touch of your skin
To have you just to me
With Pride I Sin!

 

Your kiss makes me tingle
Your touch Makes me scream
With passion n' desire
For only you, I dream

 

With blinded faith I come forth
With dangerous desires in my mind, 
I reach out for the unknown 
And its sheer pleasure that I find

 

Hold your gaze, let it not drown me
The look in your eye is possessive
Your stare pierces my heart
About you my soul becomes obsessive

 

As we come closer through the day
Moving together as one
It is only you I need
My Moon , my Star And my Sun






Edited by -Awantika- - 08 July 2011 at 8:40pm

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
@amna -  another  wonderful shayari  by you . ClapClap
@awantika -  ClapClapClapClapClap wow , that was awesome. loved every line and could feel the passion in it.  give us more such writings.

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kavyasam

@amna -  another  wonderful shayari  by you . ClapClap
@awantika -  ClapClapClapClapClap wow , that was awesome. loved every line and could feel the passion in it.  give us more such writings.
 
Thank you my dear Hug- need more from you aswell..
@Awi..its absolutely beautiful..i read it in very detail LOLLOL

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Posted: 09 July 2011 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Torture ka shauk tha na ab bhugto muhahhahaEvil Smile

Rab hi jane yeh rishte kaise bante hai
Do ajnabi ek dusre ka sab kuch kaise ho jate hai
kisi ka na hokar bhi humesha saath hone ka ehsaas kitna sundar hota hai
Zindagi ke kuch khaas rishto ka swaad sapno se bhi khoobsurat hota hai Day Dreaming

^^^^^random rambling by me i dont even know if i made sense LOL


Edited by --Ari-- - 09 July 2011 at 12:59pm

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Posted: 09 July 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Ari...DAt was straight from the heart and touched the right emotions..i could feel it..too too tooo beautiful ari..a biiig hug fir this sweetheart..:-)

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Posted: 09 July 2011 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AmnaIsh

Ari...DAt was straight from the heart and touched the right emotions..i could feel it..too too tooo beautiful ari..a biiig hug fir this sweetheart..:-)


hehe finally Tongue i refreshed the page like gazillion times after u liked it to read ur comment LOL just something out of the blue used to do hard core poetry a few years back...but now i dnt feel like it much just once in a while kar leti hun for time passEmbarrassed

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Posted: 09 July 2011 at 1:44pm | IP Logged
lolz mere ko shayeri site dhundni padegi,hahaha,,aise toh likhne se rhi,,mere dil ki awjein toh khtrnaak hoti hai,woh nhi likh skti,,lolz,
pr deffo read all

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Posted: 09 July 2011 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Ari--

Originally posted by AmnaIsh

Ari...DAt was straight from the heart and touched the right emotions..i could feel it..too too tooo beautiful ari..a biiig hug fir this sweetheart..:-)


hehe finally Tongue i refreshed the page like gazillion times after u liked it to read ur comment LOL just something out of the blue used to do hard core poetry a few years back...but now i dnt feel like it much just once in a while kar leti hun for time passEmbarrassed

ahhahaa..sorry..out of the house, so check my phn now and then..i knew u wud be waiting..!
But seriously it was too good ari...luved it. I wanna see ur hardcore shayari. Jaldi se brubg it in..have a shayari jugalbandi wid me..;-)

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