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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: kavyasam

mine are just plain words not much of a literate I am in terms of soulful words,  that is why I like the shayari that has the perfect words that give out the perfect emotion.
 
 
random one aise hi  😳
 
dil kehta hai baar baar ki waqt ko mod du
phir woh lamha jee loon
lekin iss baar bhi woh sawal sunungi
to jawab mein naa nahi haan kahu
gujra waqt gujre din
par woh lamha wahi ki wahi tham gayi
chahke bhi  bhoola nahi paaye
kyunki waqt ko mod paaye to
woh mukaam wahi paani thi hume
tumhare labz nagme bane
jaanke bhi hum anjaan bane
kash dil ki awaaz hum bhi sun paate
to aaj waqt ko modne ki khwaish na karte
 
 
very old one I wrote for cottage epi of kmh2 .
 
na jaane kya bhaya mujhe
honth julfe ya tera yeh nasha
huyi achanak dil mein hulchul
ki aankhein bani jubaan
 

 
WOW KAVS 👏 Superb...!  you write very welll...loved the last one specially..! keep going...aksh is not here..i want somebody to have poetry war wid 😉
 
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Posted: 12 years ago

Aksar Mere Dil Main Khayal Ata Hai,
K Zindgi Agar Tere Sang Guzarne Pati
To Haseen Ho Bhi Sakti Thi,
Ye Ranj-O-Gham Ki Siahi, Jo Dil Par Chai Hai,
Teri Mohabbat Ki Roshni Se Door Ho Bhi Sakti Thi.
Magar Ye Ho Na Saka, Aur Ab Yeh Aalam Hai,
Tu Nahi, Tera Gham, Teri Justujoo Bhi Nahi.
Guzar Rahi Hai Kuch Is Tarha Zindgi
Jaise Isey Kisi K Sahare Ki Zarorat Nahi.
Na Koi Raah, Na Koi Manzil, Na Roshni Ka Suragh.
Bhatak Rahi Hai Andheron Main  Zindgi.
Inhi Andheron Main Reh Jaongi Kho Kar,
Main Janti Hoon Mere Hamsafar,
Magar Yunhi  Kabhi Mere Dil Main Ye khayal Ata Hai!

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Posted: 12 years ago
aksh will be back soon,  will love the jugalbandi  between u  two. 
 
 
last one na  I wrote it as a short   take  for that episode, jab  arohi  peeke nashe mein gir jaati hain and arjun just keeps staring at her and feels something abt her.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: AmnaIsh

Aksar Mere Dil Main Khayal Ata Hai,
K Zindgi Agar Tere Sang Guzarne Pati
To Haseen Ho Bhi Sakti Thi,
Ye Ranj-O-Gham Ki Siahi, Jo Dil Par Chai Hai,
Teri Mohabbat Ki Roshni Se Door Ho Bhi Sakti Thi.
Magar Ye Ho Na Saka, Aur Ab Yeh Aalam Hai,
Tu Nahi, Tera Gham, Teri Justujoo Bhi Nahi.
Guzar Rahi Hai Kuch Is Tarha Zindgi
Jaise Isey Kisi K Sahare Ki Zarorat Nahi.
Na Koi Raah, Na Koi Manzil, Na Roshni Ka Suragh.
Bhatak Rahi Hai Andheron Main  Zindgi.
Inhi Andheron Main Reh Jaongi Kho Kar,
Main Janti Hoon Mere Hamsafar,
Magar Yunhi  Kabhi Mere Dil Main Ye khayal Ata Hai!

 
👏👏👏  amazing flow of words you have .  
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much..😃 - sometimes i flow in my emotions..hehe 😆😆
 
Waise the one you wrote for that cottage scene..was oh so nice..👏 truly inspired.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ai Dil-e-Nadaan, Ye Zalim Hai Jahaan..
Apne Matlab Ka Har Koi Hai Yahan...
Tu Kion Dhondta Hai Pyar Is Dunya Mein...
 Kion Dhondta Hai Sukoon
Ik Muskarahat Tak To Milti Nahi Hai Yahan...
Ehsason Ko Apne Yoon Sare-Raah Rakha Nahi Karte...
Tor Deta Hai Sheeshey Ka Ghar Har Koi Yahan...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay Dii. Here's A poem. I wrote this poem for one of my on going ff but then decided to share it here. I've always been a huge literature freak. So i happen to be those young writers who uses heavy words.😛
Idk, how is it. But my cousin loved it to bits and now i want all your views 😆

P.s - Thanx to Amna Dii. She's edited my poem and made it better. thanx Dii :)
Okay. its called : " I need you"

I need you my Love
like I never needed before
Every time we come close 
I want you even more

 

I need to feel your kiss

Your touch, your tender caress
Your fingers sliding down my back
As you help me undress

 

The smell of you in my breath
Marks of passion on my back 
With your desire I burn 
As you give me what I lack

 

The warm embrace of your arm
The scintillating touch of your skin
To have you just to me
With Pride I Sin!

 

Your kiss makes me tingle
Your touch Makes me scream
With passion n' desire
For only you, I dream

 

With blinded faith I come forth
With dangerous desires in my mind, 
I reach out for the unknown 
And its sheer pleasure that I find

 

Hold your gaze, let it not drown me
The look in your eye is possessive
Your stare pierces my heart
About you my soul becomes obsessive

 

As we come closer through the day
Moving together as one
It is only you I need
My Moon , my Star And my Sun




Edited by -Awantika- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
@amna -  another  wonderful shayari  by you . 👏👏
@awantika -  👏👏👏👏👏 wow , that was awesome. loved every line and could feel the passion in it.  give us more such writings.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: kavyasam

@amna -  another  wonderful shayari  by you . 👏👏

@awantika -  👏👏👏👏👏 wow , that was awesome. loved every line and could feel the passion in it.  give us more such writings.

 
Thank you my dear 🤗- need more from you aswell..
@Awi..its absolutely beautiful..i read it in very detail 😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Torture ka shauk tha na ab bhugto muhahhaha😈

Rab hi jane yeh rishte kaise bante hai
Do ajnabi ek dusre ka sab kuch kaise ho jate hai
kisi ka na hokar bhi humesha saath hone ka ehsaas kitna sundar hota hai
Zindagi ke kuch khaas rishto ka swaad sapno se bhi khoobsurat hota hai 😍

^^^^^random rambling by me i dont even know if i made sense 😆
Edited by --Ari-- - 12 years ago