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AmnaIsh

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Thanks Appu Hug
Kavs Hug - thankyouu Big smile 
i'm hoping people will participate in it..Embarrassed

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
mine are just plain words not much of a literate I am in terms of soulful words,  that is why I like the shayari that has the perfect words that give out the perfect emotion.
 
 
random one aise hi  Embarrassed
 
dil kehta hai baar baar ki waqt ko mod du
phir woh lamha jee loon
lekin iss baar bhi woh sawal sunungi
to jawab mein naa nahi haan kahu
gujra waqt gujre din
par woh lamha wahi ki wahi tham gayi
chahke bhi  bhoola nahi paaye
kyunki waqt ko mod paaye to
woh mukaam wahi paani thi hume
tumhare labz nagme bane
jaanke bhi hum anjaan bane
kash dil ki awaaz hum bhi sun paate
to aaj waqt ko modne ki khwaish na karte
 
 
very old one I wrote for cottage epi of kmh2 .
 
na jaane kya bhaya mujhe
honth julfe ya tera yeh nasha
huyi achanak dil mein hulchul
ki aankhein bani jubaan
 

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AmnaIsh

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kavyasam

mine are just plain words not much of a literate I am in terms of soulful words,  that is why I like the shayari that has the perfect words that give out the perfect emotion.
 
 
random one aise hi  Embarrassed
 
dil kehta hai baar baar ki waqt ko mod du
phir woh lamha jee loon
lekin iss baar bhi woh sawal sunungi
to jawab mein naa nahi haan kahu
gujra waqt gujre din
par woh lamha wahi ki wahi tham gayi
chahke bhi  bhoola nahi paaye
kyunki waqt ko mod paaye to
woh mukaam wahi paani thi hume
tumhare labz nagme bane
jaanke bhi hum anjaan bane
kash dil ki awaaz hum bhi sun paate
to aaj waqt ko modne ki khwaish na karte
 
 
very old one I wrote for cottage epi of kmh2 .
 
na jaane kya bhaya mujhe
honth julfe ya tera yeh nasha
huyi achanak dil mein hulchul
ki aankhein bani jubaan
 
 
WOW KAVS Clap Superb...!  you write very welll...loved the last one specially..! keep going...aksh is not here..i want somebody to have poetry war wid Wink
 

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 7:48am | IP Logged

Aksar Mere Dil Main Khayal Ata Hai,
K Zindgi Agar Tere Sang Guzarne Pati
To Haseen Ho Bhi Sakti Thi,
Ye Ranj-O-Gham Ki Siahi, Jo Dil Par Chai Hai,
Teri Mohabbat Ki Roshni Se Door Ho Bhi Sakti Thi.
Magar Ye Ho Na Saka, Aur Ab Yeh Aalam Hai,
Tu Nahi, Tera Gham, Teri Justujoo Bhi Nahi.
Guzar Rahi Hai Kuch Is Tarha Zindgi
Jaise Isey Kisi K Sahare Ki Zarorat Nahi.
Na Koi Raah, Na Koi Manzil, Na Roshni Ka Suragh.
Bhatak Rahi Hai Andheron Main  Zindgi.
Inhi Andheron Main Reh Jaongi Kho Kar,
Main Janti Hoon Mere Hamsafar,
Magar Yunhi  Kabhi Mere Dil Main Ye khayal Ata Hai!

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 7:50am | IP Logged
aksh will be back soon,  will love the jugalbandi  between u  two. 
 
 
last one na  I wrote it as a short   take  for that episode, jab  arohi  peeke nashe mein gir jaati hain and arjun just keeps staring at her and feels something abt her.

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AmnaIsh

Aksar Mere Dil Main Khayal Ata Hai,
K Zindgi Agar Tere Sang Guzarne Pati
To Haseen Ho Bhi Sakti Thi,
Ye Ranj-O-Gham Ki Siahi, Jo Dil Par Chai Hai,
Teri Mohabbat Ki Roshni Se Door Ho Bhi Sakti Thi.
Magar Ye Ho Na Saka, Aur Ab Yeh Aalam Hai,
Tu Nahi, Tera Gham, Teri Justujoo Bhi Nahi.
Guzar Rahi Hai Kuch Is Tarha Zindgi
Jaise Isey Kisi K Sahare Ki Zarorat Nahi.
Na Koi Raah, Na Koi Manzil, Na Roshni Ka Suragh.
Bhatak Rahi Hai Andheron Main  Zindgi.
Inhi Andheron Main Reh Jaongi Kho Kar,
Main Janti Hoon Mere Hamsafar,
Magar Yunhi  Kabhi Mere Dil Main Ye khayal Ata Hai!

 
ClapClapClap  amazing flow of words you have .  

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Posted: 07 July 2011 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Thank you so much..Big smile - sometimes i flow in my emotions..hehe LOLLOL
 
Waise the one you wrote for that cottage scene..was oh so nice..Clap truly inspired.

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AmnaIsh

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Posted: 08 July 2011 at 8:52am | IP Logged

Ai Dil-e-Nadaan, Ye Zalim Hai Jahaan..
Apne Matlab Ka Har Koi Hai Yahan...
Tu Kion Dhondta Hai Pyar Is Dunya Mein...
 Kion Dhondta Hai Sukoon
Ik Muskarahat Tak To Milti Nahi Hai Yahan...
Ehsason Ko Apne Yoon Sare-Raah Rakha Nahi Karte...
Tor Deta Hai Sheeshey Ka Ghar Har Koi Yahan...

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