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Humko sirff tumse pyaar hai humko sirff tumse pyaar hai
Keh rahii hai dill kii bekhudii bas tumhara itezar hai
Humko sirff tumse pyaar hai humko sirff tumso pyaar hai

Love the part armaan ne kitna plan kiyya
But stupid ridzi sab kharab kar diyya
Love the way she feels guilty
Aww armaan cant saw tears in her eyes he forgave her
Their moment was awsome one i love it and ridzi's saree was superb

But one complaint also y sid yar please i don't want him between AR
So please throw him out
And do update soon please
With lots of love
Nikita

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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 1:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by niki.5

Humko sirff tumse pyaar hai humko sirff tumse pyaar hai
Keh rahii hai dill kii bekhudii bas tumhara itezar hai
Humko sirff tumse pyaar hai humko sirff tumso pyaar hai

Love the part armaan ne kitna plan kiyya
But stupid ridzi sab kharab kar diyya
Love the way she feels guilty
Aww armaan cant saw tears in her eyes he forgave her
Their moment was awsome one i love it and ridzi's saree was superb

But one complaint also y sid yar please i don't want him between AR
So please throw him out
And do update soon please
With lots of love
Nikita

NOOO WORRY BABYYY WO NAHI AA PAYEGAA

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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Angry
 
                                                              
 
 (okkk firsty guys my exam dates has been revealed and i hv to prepare for this hell bad time 
sooo i dont think so i will come here reguler actuly will be very offen bt u guys bhul mat jana yaar after my eaxms i promiss me apni saari ffs complet ker dungi iss baar so i am trying ki isse update ker du bt agar na ker pau toh dont be gussa okk...Star short update se kaam chala lo pllzzz)

recap - shanki introduces sidd to armaan and ridziii and asked rizdi to show him house ...armaan was very much irritated seeing him bt wt to doo...

armaan - loo abhi toh meri love story suru bhi nahi hui aur kahani mai vilen ki entry ho gayiii
...(he was making puppy facess watching ridzi from behind going with sidd...
koi baat nahi bachhe tu bahut pachtayega meri love story mai unwanted entry kerne ke liye,,,,,,,,,(he got an evil smile,,,,,,)

just then ridzi turned her face behind while walking,,,,,,she has a confused expression  but when she saw armaan still there watching her unknowingly a blush covered her face and she lowered her eyelids ,,,,,,and again turned to gooo

armaan who was seeing her changing expressions smiled seeing this..

ar - oye hoyeee...flashing a dimpled smile ...
(in background ...dilll hoteee jooo mere seenee mai dooo
dusraaa dilll bhi tumhe deta mai torne kooo its a beautifull song of exx dewaana tha new movie i love this line give it a chance)
gosh i love herrr...i madly love herrr
he ruffled his hairs and left the place with a cute smile...

in his roommm he jummped on his bed and lye down there... stareing the sealing
he was just smilinggg after some mins...

ar -  ohhh god i am i jerk...(saying this he sat with a sudden force)
why cant i control  getting her near me,,,,,,,,wo kya so rahi hogi mere baare mai...pout
mai toh welcome ka nana pateker ban gaya hu ...bas control armaan control kerta rahta huu...god pyar kerna kitna mushkil kaam haiii...aur usse bhi jyada mushkil hai apne pyar ka ijhar kernaaa...(he prayed to god)
god jee plzz mere pagal hone ke pahle me usse bata du ki i love her bas itni help ker do werna jiss tarah se meri halat ho gayi haiii mai toh gya kaam seee...

and he gain l lied smiling over himself...LOL

ridzi was alsoo as usall confused by the words she hared that  he is having a gf and with his behavior more over her reaction...Confused

they both slept with each other thoughts...

on the next morning ...on breakfast table...
every one was sitting there accept  shashank and mihir...
armaan was having breakfast when ridzi came and sat in front seat to him...
she was not meeting her gaze to him, and she also dsnt know whyLOL...her was eatting her bf silently and her eye lids were down through out...armaan was watching her changing expressions and smiling flashing his dimples...

Armaan thought to teas her'and a evil smirk took over his lips'

 

Ar ' mom paa iss duniya ke sabse lucky man hai naa'.

 

Ja ' (janhvi ridzi's mom hope maine naam sahi likha hai agar kuch aur ho toh mujhe bhi bata dena'..) ohh realyyy bt kyuuu''(she got armaan's mood and joined him in his lil game)

 

Ar ' aree paa ke pass duniya ki sabse khoobsurat lerki hai as his wife'.

 

Ridzi who was the most silent person over there , got a stork hearing this'.she was having her  hot chocholate and that stuck'..

 

Ri ' (in her mind) omggg ab ye hamri maa se flirt kernge'pout

She frowned and armaan loved this'.LOL

 

Be ' aree mere bachee tu pareshan kyu hota hai tere liye bhi hum chand si dulhan laynge'(and bi smiled with janhvi)Wink

 

Ja ' ha ha bi bilkul mere ammy ke liye chand jaisi dulhan laynge'Wink

 

Ar ' not possible maa chand si dulhan toh paa ko milgayi meri aisi kismet kaha'mai chand ke tukre se hi kaam chala lunga'(and he winked to riddhima'who was watching him with poping eyes) Ouch


Now riddhima's brain was nt working , she was totally lost wt to blv and wt nt'.

 

Ri ' oooh hoo kanha jee plz help me naa'

 

Every one lved the place to there work and as our hero and heroin hv no work except each other they went to there rooms'

 

Ridhima was passing from the gallery '.when armaan called her'

 

Ar ' baskeeettt

 

She turned '..and asked through her eyes '..what'

 

Ar ' oye hoye issi ada ke toh hum dewaane haiii'.

Wo kuch kehna the tumse'..

 

He started coming near her slowly slowly'..she got lil nervous by his action...


Seeing armaan nt stoping she started moving in the back ward direction , she was nt getting wt he is going to do'.and was lil scared also seeing a rang in his eyes'..he was continously coming towards her.

And at last she banged to the wall''and an evil smile came on his face''he came realy near her that he can hear her fast unmanaged heart beats'..she was breathing really heavily and was stareing armaan with puppy cute face'.

Armaan smiled seeing his effect on her'.he bend a lil to her ears'

And her breath stuck'..

He whispered in her ears '.

Ar.- baskeettt''..

Voice just didn't came out from her throat '..

Her again said'..

Ar ' baskettt'.tum sari mat pahna karooo''

His breath was tickling her...and a shiver ran down her spin ...she was hving goose bumps ...sm how she said..very mild voice

 Ri ' kyu hum per achhi nahi lagtiii''

She was blushing'.now and was waiting for him to say sm thing''.he was just admiring her beautiful innocent face'.and with that pink blush she was looking just like an angel'..

Ar ' nahiii bahut achhi lagtiii hoo''..(he gave her a naughty smile)

She smiled with a blushing face''



He just want to capture that moment in his eyes'..he was looking at her  with soo much love'.she was looking down'.and his cute smile turns in evil one and her said'LOL


Ar- basket  kab tak sans rok ke rakhogi ab choro bhi itni moti bhi nahi ho tum'ki ye sab kerna pade'.

Hearing this her eyes just popped out in shock'..she was looking him with innocent confused faceOuch


and very soon it converted in to anger...she gave him a deadly glare...

ri - loveee...AngryAngry

and he giggled...seeing her ...

he wanted to teas her more bt just then his phn rang...

it was mihir and he called him office to discuss sm project venture with modi's hearing sid's name an evil smirk came on his face...and he cut the call...

ar - ooo baskett i would love to have ur glares whole day bt abhi jana padega kisi ko batna hai ki meri story mai vilen nt needed...Evil Smile

ri - god aaj kal aap kya kehte hai kuch samjh nahi aata...(and she left stomping her feet...)

ar - hyeee issi baat ka toh ronaaa hai...Ouch

he came to his room and went to cupboard  to get his cloths...he was trying to decide wt to wear from 15 mins and now got frustrated...

ar - god why the hell i cnt decide wt to wear basket ko bulaunga toh wo toh anne nahi walii abhi toh muh fula ker baithi hongi madam...LOL

he smiled remembering her cute face...god basket mai kaise samjhu tumhe how much i love u mai tumhe teas toh ker sakta hu , bt tumhari ankho mai dekh ker i love u nahi keh sakta...kyoki mera dimag kaam kerna band ker deta

hai...aur mujhe mera naam bhi yaad nahi rahta...(he pouted making cute baby face...) gosh...kash  mere pass koi aisa frnd hota jisse i can tell my situation and wo mujhe advise ker sakta...Cry 

just then his phn ranged again ...he picked his phn whole frustrated ...

ar - hellooo...Angry 

no one answered ...this increased his frustration ...

ar - if u dnt want to talk ...then why u make this call...AngryAngry

a very sweet voice of a girl came from the other side ...seams lil scared...and she was stammering too...LOL

voice -  aa a hellooo  sorrry sir woo this my first day of job...i am calling from city bank and like to know if want our creadit card...

ar - AngryAngryAngry wttt yaha meri life mai itne pange hai and u want to sell ur creadit card...Angry

voice - emmm sorry...wo mera first day hai toh i was just...Cry

ar - hye u speak in hindi naa

voice - yaha mai india se huu...

ar - ohh me too...sorry i shouted on u...wo mai jara pareshan tha...

voice - its okk ho jata hai i can understand...Smile

ar - wow tum kitni asani se samjh gayi aur ek baskettt hai jo mere kahe meri her baat jan leti hai bt jo sabse imp hai wo samjhti hi nahi...Cry

voice - wttt wtt u said baskettt rightConfused

ar - haa wo i call her baskett ...u know she is my bestest friend ...i love her soo much...mai usse keh nahi pata aur wo samjhti hi nahiii...Cry

 he told her in excrement...bt didnt got any rply...

ar - hye r u there...Confused

voice -  yahh yaahh yahi huu... oooh girlfriend ...tell me if i can help u...

ar - ohh and how...

voice - simple she is a girl me too...toh i can tell u na how to make her under stand...Big smile

ar - really u willlBig smile

voice - yaah sure...

ar - okk abhi i hv to go mai  kuch der baad tumhe call karu issi no. per...Big smile

voice - yaah sure...Big smile



(hye guys this is it ...see i tried hard bt dimag kaam nahi ker raha coz exam tension...jaisa bhi hai kaam chala lo...next i will come back affter my exam ...toh u will get so many updated...do tell me how was it...jaisa bhi lage tell me and give long comments...)...love u alll...

from now i will not come here bt u ppl dont forget to comment haaaAngry 

me exams ke baad aungiiiBig smile

 




Edited by ishka_virani - 26 February 2012 at 4:55am

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Posted: 08 February 2012 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Ohk I am first one to commentDancing...yeepiiee..Love the chapter to the core...Awwiiee AR and their cute moments are treat to readDay Dreaming...OMG,Now Armaan will take help  frm a credit card girl that to in love-matterShocked...Kya din aa gaye ha humare hero keLOL...Bt what to do...He is in love na..Wink.. waiting for more so do try to continue soon... Take care

PS: All th every best for your examsThumbs Up

Lotsof Love
Geet


Edited by sweetdesire - 04 March 2012 at 3:24am

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Yaayyy u've updated well short part...gonna read it!!!! well will edit my comment above later today...
Take care n all the very best for your exams Ish...miss u loads!!!
Muahhh
Hug
Pranishta


Edited by ARKJ_4EVER - 26 February 2012 at 2:20am

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Posted: 26 February 2012 at 5:02am | IP Logged
hi princess
i knw i m dammm wala late 
n plz ff del mat karna 

i loved it so much 
haye armaan he is sooo cute n bechare ki luv story mein humesha sid kyu ata hai
love the teasing and blushing session
wondering mommy kitna blush  kar rahi hogi
and armaan credit card wali  se hi apni love life discuss kar rah thaLOL
aise kaam sirf or sirf ARMAAN MALIK  hi kar sakta hai

love u 
badi


Edited by angledesire - 07 March 2012 at 9:35am

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