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shamii16

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Hi Everyone!! Im new to this forum and this topic really interested me! I write a bit of poems myself, but they are pretty short! I was told by @Princezz22 that I should start my own thread, so I thought, why not! No better way to stay active around here! I will post up some of my works and then continue posting at least one everyday!.. Well, I'll try to! Smile
 
Here is my latest works:
 
Main Teri Yaad Mey Tadap Kar Tujhe Bhul Na Jaaoon,
Zindagi Mujhe Aage Bulale,
Main Tujhe Peechey Na Chor Jaaoon
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Teri Yaad Mujhe Ab Sathaathi Nahi,
Tera Naam Dil Pey Ab Aatha Nahi,
Teri Awaaz Mujhe Ab Pohchti Nahi,
Par Tera Pyar Dil Sey Mittha Nahi!
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Tu Ne Mujhe Aansoono Ke Samander Mey Akela Chor Diya,
Dard Mey Dhakhel Diya,
Peeche Chor Diya Aur Tu,
Bas Aage Bar Gaya!
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Kho Gaya Hai Mere Khayalon Sey Teri Yeh Tamana,
Teri Yeh Chahat,
Teri Yeh Khaish,
Teri Yeh Arzoo!
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Well, that's all for today! Hope you all like it! Please, do comment! I would love to hear what you all think about my work!
 
ENJOY!!!Approve

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged

Ok, I've got one more for today!

Tadap Tadap Kar Teri Yaadon Ko Sinay Se Lagaa Ke Bethi,
Tera Chehra, Teri Hasee, Aankhon Mey Basaa Ke Bethi,
Dil Mey Bas Teri Hi Chahat Hai,
Aankhoon Mey Bas Tere Hi Sapne Hai,
Aansoono Ke Boond Mey Tera Naam Likha,
Tu Nay Na Suna Menay Tujh Ko Pukaara,
Tu Aage Bar Gaya, Mur Ke Peeche Na Dekha,
Zindagi Ne Mujhe Roq Liya,
Iss Maasoom Dil Ke Saath, Jo Bus Thoot Ke Bikhar Gaya...
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That's all for today... will be back with more tomorrow!!
 
 

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
OMG Shamii all the poetries are AMAZING.

Tu Ne Mujhe Aansoono Ke Samander Mey Akela Chor Diya,
Dard Mey Dhakhel Diya,
Peeche Chor Diya Aur Tu,
Bas Aage Bar Gaya!
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Kho Gaya Hai Mere Khayalon Sey Teri Yeh Tamana,
Teri Yeh Chahat,
Teri Yeh Khaish,
Teri Yeh Arzoo!
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Especially these! They have depth and intensity in them.
I really like your writing style.
Continue with more.


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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
@Princezz22 Thank You sooo much for the encouragement!! I will definitely continue writing! Your sher's inspired me alot to write my own and I guess my inner poet has broken through too!!! Thanks again!! =)

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shamii16

@Princezz22 Thank You sooo much for the encouragement!! I will definitely continue writing! Your sher's inspired me alot to write my own and I guess my inner poet has broken through too!!! Thanks again!! =)


Aww that's really great to know atleast my poetries has done something good to person.Big smile And you deserve the appreciation and encouragement.
I am Mahi, btw :)

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged

I'm Shamii!! Nice to meet you! ^_^

After reading your poems a few times, I realized that you are another person which has alot in her heart and mind, just like me! I guess that was the biggest inspiration! You never know who you can inspire by your words! Keep up the good work yourself! Enjoy reading yours a lot!!!

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shamii16

I'm Shamii!! Nice to meet you! ^_^

After reading your poems a few times, I realized that you are another person which has alot in her heart and mind, just like me! I guess that was the biggest inspiration! You never know who you can inspire by your words! Keep up the good work yourself! Enjoy reading yours a lot!!!


We have talked through Pm's.Big smileI guess you have forgotten.
My poems are quite big, you had time to read them again.ROFL JK.
Seriously, I am over-whelmed that I have inspired you. It shall encourage me also to write more.
Whoever reads my poetry, they say I have gone through disasters in life.ROFL But its not true actually, I love sad stories, sad poetries, and that's why I myself try to write something sad.LOL

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Princezz22

Originally posted by shamii16

I'm Shamii!! Nice to meet you! ^_^

After reading your poems a few times, I realized that you are another person which has alot in her heart and mind, just like me! I guess that was the biggest inspiration! You never know who you can inspire by your words! Keep up the good work yourself! Enjoy reading yours a lot!!!


We have talked through Pm's.Big smileI guess you have forgotten.
My poems are quite big, you had time to read them again.ROFL JK.
Seriously, I am over-whelmed that I have inspired you. It shall encourage me also to write more.
Whoever reads my poetry, they say I have gone through disasters in life.ROFL But its not true actually, I love sad stories, sad poetries, and that's why I myself try to write something sad.LOL

 
Yeah that is true.. i remember talking with you on PM!
That's what people say about me, but The way I right, it's inspired just by my heart and mind! The words just flow from the heart! You dont have to go through disasters to know what things feel like. yes true, you are more inspired when you have gone through it, but just by reading stories, watching movies, you can start making up things like this in your head.. well in your heart! Whatever I write, it all comes from the heart. I like the way you think, reminds me of myself actually!

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