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PristineSoul

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 7:07pm | IP Logged

Hey SP
AMAZING update..
So woh dono frnds hai.. Oops, i mean they were frnds.
Feeling sad for Arpi.

I hope things wont worsen when they meet

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
omggg
just love
child love na
wowww
waiting for next one ha

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
nice updt dr.Smile

waiting fr the next. Big smile


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Posted: 15 August 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
The beauty and innocence of childhood love...
That part was really sweet Jo...
Makes me all the more excited to know what lead to the breakage of such a beautiful bond...
Loved the update...

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 2:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoga23priya

res as usual

will edited later 

n m waiting as usualEmbarrassed

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 3:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sidda8

Neha Darling, this update is amazing. I loved Avita's past. So both of their parents are close friends. Childhood memories are the most precious for people and Avi's memories are full of Arpi. Aww, Arpi is so possessive of Avi and she wouldn't share him. So Avi did love Arpi and still does, but something she did has made him eager to seek vengance against her. I'm sure he will sabotage Arpi's shaadi with Pappu. It is so sad Arpi lost her mom at a young age. Btw, does Avi still have the heart locket? Please update soon.

thanx for linking it dear Siddu
yap its true n not only Avi's childhood memories even his whole life is full of Arpi n her thoughtsEmbarrassed

yap he want to give her back what he give her 'Pain'

sweety this locket have importent place in this story u will find it in next updateWink

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by joliefille

Originally posted by Sidda8

Neha Darling, this update is amazing. I loved Avita's past. So both of their parents are close friends. Childhood memories are the most precious for people and Avi's memories are full of Arpi. Aww, Arpi is so possessive of Avi and she wouldn't share him. So Avi did love Arpi and still does, but something she did has made him eager to seek vengance against her. I'm sure he will sabotage Arpi's shaadi with Pappu. It is so sad Arpi lost her mom at a young age. Btw, does Avi still have the heart locket? Please update soon.

thanx for linking it dear Siddu
yap its true n not only Avi's childhood memories even his whole life is full of Arpi n her thoughtsEmbarrassed

yap he want to give her back what he give her 'Pain'

sweety this locket have importent place in this story u will find it in next updateWink


WAITING EAGERLY dr



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Posted: 18 August 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Myyy NehaaaEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Fabulously done updateClapClapClapClapClap

They are childhood sweethearts..HmmmEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed  Awww..Cho chweetEmbarrassed

Jo..hats off for this wonderful concept darlingEmbarrassed

Avi loves her still...But does Arpi also loves him??OuchOuchOuch I Hope she does..

ye toh fact hai ki pappu se Arpi ki shaadi toot jayegiWink

The song was just perfect for the situation...Very well written Jo...

The last lines were beautifulEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed waah..meri sweetie pieClapClap




Update it sooon..Im eagerly waiting for their meeting

Love yaEmbarrassed

PS:Updated my res posts on page 2 and 5Embarrassed




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