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Posted: 14 July 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoga23priya

Originally posted by KriYa_life

Hiee SP.. You know Im in love with Ur writing.. Aww, My Poor Avi, What happened to my Sweet AviTa, update soon & better dont give Jhatkas like Toofaan.. I wont be able to handle it..


Cherry I am not that evil...i don't give any big Jhatkas too...now a days everyone are giving Jhatkas except me...
who knows my title will go someone else
hope in Kriya FF they will handle the Jhatkas too

na na.. My Toofaan is berry innocent..
Dnt worry, KriYa'ns can take it..

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Posted: 14 July 2011 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Heyyy My JoooEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I finally updated my commentSmile

Kya baat hai!!!! Avi is either obssessd with Arpi or he is damn angry with her...

Arpi ki engagement pappu seDeadDeadDead

Poor Avi..Cry   Kya hua hai yaar Avita k beech???ConfusedConfusedConfused


Jhatkas huh..Jab Priya ho toh jhatka hona hi chahiyeTongueLOL



Awesome suspense ha...

Jaldi se update karnaWink



Edited by prash_t - 18 August 2011 at 1:47am

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Neha !!!!!!!HugHug

Ur editor is Priya?? Dat's why I can smell some jhatkas already !!LOLLOL

Awesome update dear !!ClapClap

It has some suspense element...

Eager to knw what happens next...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Cont soon..Smile




Edited by jes_jade - 16 July 2011 at 12:37pm

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Posted: 16 July 2011 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
@ Jaanuuu

i knew you are only person who knew me perfectly and my writing Blushing

TJ i was right abt my Jaanu Wink

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoga23priya

@ Jaanuuu

i knew you are only person who knew me perfectly and my writing Blushing

TJ i was right abt my Jaanu Wink
That's why we r perfect soul mates...WinkBlushingBlushingROFL

U shud call Neha
'Sensei'
..Wink

It sounds cool.Cool

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Posted: 17 July 2011 at 8:42pm | IP Logged
Neha, thanks for the amazing first chapter. Can you please add me onto the pm list for this ff. I love how you incorporate a flashback with the present time. Avi is in love with some girl but her cruel words keep piercing his heart. Now he desires to seek revenge against her and keep her for himself. I love how you have introduced a vengeful love story, he may hate her but some part of his heart still wishes to see her. I hope Arpi is his love and not some other girl. I'm so glad Arpi is a princess, I rarely hear about Indian tales with princesses. But does she really love Pappu, he is still the same disgusting dude that checks her out infront of her dad. I can't for Avi to go to India. I'm always team Avi even if he is looking for revenge. I would love to see him ruin Pappu's shaadi and steal Arpi. Please update soon hun.

Love you lots, Sidda

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Posted: 03 August 2011 at 3:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jes_jade

Originally posted by yoga23priya

@ Jaanuuu

i knew you are only person who knew me perfectly and my writing Blushing

TJ i was right abt my Jaanu Wink
That's why we r perfect soul mates...WinkBlushingBlushingROFL

U shud call Neha
'Sensei'
..Wink

It sounds cool.Cool

Are soul mates  is Sensei ka meaning mujhe bhi to bataao yaarConfused
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Posted: 03 August 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sidda8

Neha, thanks for the amazing first chapter. Can you please add me onto the pm list for this ff. I love how you incorporate a flashback with the present time. Avi is in love with some girl but her cruel words keep piercing his heart. Now he desires to seek revenge against her and keep her for himself. I love how you have introduced a vengeful love story, he may hate her but some part of his heart still wishes to see her. I hope Arpi is his love and not some other girl. I'm so glad Arpi is a princess, I rarely hear about Indian tales with princesses. But does she really love Pappu, he is still the same disgusting dude that checks her out infront of her dad. I can't for Avi to go to India. I'm always team Avi even if he is looking for revenge. I would love to see him ruin Pappu's shaadi and steal Arpi. Please update soon hun.

Love you lots, Sidda
Hayeee My Siddu liked it Embarrassed
u don't need to ask for PM dear actully last time thr was  probs with my net n PC ,Ouch
but next time i will take care to PM u all Avitans (whather u like it or not heheLOL)
yap Avi is going to be different from other FFs , this time he is going to give lots of shocks by his deeds Evil Smile
n Yap Pappu is same disgusting guy Dead,
huun Arpi loves him or Avi its a secrate dear, you will find it after few more updates.
hope i can start writing soon as my exams will take this month Angry
hope can see you all guys vry soon.
love yaa too dearEmbarrassed

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