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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Precap
Hey guys thanx for such nice responce ,
n about the title too so its decided its
"You Are Mine"
 
"A beautiful face, full of innocence , love, kindness" he closed his eyes, and the face emerge more clear in front of his eyes, A young girl around 12 running  in  corridors , garden 

"Avi catch me if you can!"

A soft sweet smile run on his lips , but in a flick of second that smile vanished , muscles turn stern as the sweet voice turn in harsh n full of disgust tone

"Avdhesh you don't deserve me! I hate you! Don't you dare to touch me , or show me your dirty face ever in life, !"

His clutches tighten n the wine glass he was holding got crushed n a drop of salty water rolled down from those eyes on ground with few drops of blood.

 

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Heyyy TJ Hug

Me first me first Dancing

Precap seems to be Interesting Ermm

Ouch Ouch Avi dear...i know TJ is cruel to hurt you but don't worry when i will Update i will add loads of Romance ROFL

Got job as FF editor * Mom Dad you are baby got a job finally Cool ROFL*

love ya Hug


Edited by yoga23priya - 06 July 2011 at 11:33am

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 4:24am | IP Logged
hehe now m used to this RES now u guys toohave to bear my laziness,
as m damn tired n busy these days
n don't forget to edit it ok from the first page.

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
Kyaa baat haiClapClapClap

"You Are Mine"Embarrassed

Wht happend 2 Avi?? Was she our Arpi??OuchOuch


Update sooonWink



Edited by prash_t - 16 August 2011 at 6:57am

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by joliefille

Precap
Hey guys thanx for such nice responce ,
n about the title too so its decided its
"You Are Mine"
 
"A beautiful face, full of innocence , love, kindness" he closed his eyes, and the face emerge more clear in front of his eyes, A young girl around 12 running  in  corridors , garden 

"Avi catch me if you can!"

A soft sweet smile run on his lips , but in a flick of second that smile vanished , muscles turn stern as the sweet voice turn in harsh n full of disgust tone

"Avdhesh you don't deserve me! I hate you! Don't you dare to touch me , or show me your dirty face ever in life, !"

His clutches tighten n the wine glass he was holding got crushed n a drop of salty water rolled down from those eyes on ground with few drops of blood.

 




Aouch, you hurt me  Neha LOL,

Don 't go, tell us more, what has happened ? Confused  do they know each other as children?

 please Neha do not languish us too long, have
mercy on us LOL


Aye , tu m'as fait mal Neha lol,LOL

Ne pars pas,  que s'est il pass? Confused, se connaissaient t-ils tant enfants?

 s'il te plait ne nous fait pas trop longtemps languir , ai piti de nous
LOL

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Hye jo
nice pre dear Tongue .

Now i guess the sweet voice was of arpi na then why it turn harsh yaar.
Avi dont hurt yourself dear it hurts to us also na
Cry

but jo in the pm u had given the heading update but just added the pre...not fair not fair now we want a looonggg update.

Edited by Cuty16 - 07 July 2011 at 2:44am

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Unres my Post in Pg 2 Tongue

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Neha !!!!!!!!Hug

The promo seems interesting..Thumbs UpThumbs Up

So the story is beginning with flashbacks..

Loved it..StarStar

I am eager to read the whole update...

Will be waiting for u to update it..Embarrassed

Love ya !!Embarrassed

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