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Cuty16

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Posted: 24 August 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Hye jo,
nice,amazing,shocking and rocking part.
While i was reading ur ff each time pappu's name his face was coming in front of me
ROFL.
Avi is too much yaar slaped arpi but he was more hurt by that naa, i think he has some gr8 pain.
The last quotation was too gud.

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Posted: 24 August 2011 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Neha !!!!!!HugHug

Awesome update dear !!!!!!!!ClapClap

I myself am getting afraid of this AST !!OuchOuch

What happened between them...Why he hates her...& why she now loves pappu???ConfusedConfused

So many questions !!!LOLLOL

Update soon...

Love ya !!!!!!!!!HugHugHug

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Posted: 25 August 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Eowyn

Avdesh is too far gone in love...
All his actions speak of this...
Only something really huge and painful can make Avi act like this...
Wondering what that is...
Excellent update once again Jo...
Waiting for more...
Loved the verses you have written in the end...


Hey Nidhs thanx for such sweet comment dearEmbarrassed

yap Avi i gone too far in love , his love crossed all limits,
Dear, its just beginning ,
his love going to make you wonder is it hero or villain LOL
You will find soon what was there past Wink
thanx for liking my poor attempt
but i promise it will turn better by evry UD Embarrassed

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Posted: 25 August 2011 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kalitondra

as you know, I was a little busy these days, so I missed many of my Hindu language, can you translate for me the Hindi words plz Guru Ji LOL 

Tell me is it a badla case ? i mean AST revenges Avdesh Ji for Pihu slaps ConfusedWink

Gr8 job Clap, go ahead Smile , where is the next , want more , mange more LOLBig smile

u know he  reminds me Devdas, the evening wedding of Paro, when he struck her with the pearl necklace Unhappy

Hey diBig smile
hehe you mean you missed ur Hindi Classes hehe, oye Priya see di knows m good TJWink

@di yap di its reveng case hehe but more then it its something verses love you will find soonEmbarrassed

n ya a you can say AST i revenging for Avdhesh ji heheLOL

you know naa di how lazy i m but i promise b4 next pre i will give hindi words english version for sure n i soon you will not need to ask for it as you will learn it Wink 

Di you don't believe me but i never watched Devdas i find it boring saw only its ending
Dying Deva hahaha
will start writing it soon
love yaa diEmbarrassed



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Posted: 25 August 2011 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Cuty16

Hye jo,
nice,amazing,shocking and rocking part.
While i was reading ur ff each time pappu's name his face was coming in front of me
ROFL.
Avi is too much yaar slaped arpi but he was more hurt by that naa, i think he has some gr8 pain.
The last quotation was too gud.


Hey Rups Big smile

hahaha wow what words yaar,
you know last night i saw PPP in Crime Patrol LOLLOL

i was wondering why anyone not accused me to make Avi slap Arpi,

yap he was in great pain n be prep for some more pain LOL

thanx for liking it Embarrassed

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Posted: 25 August 2011 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jes_jade

Neha !!!!!!HugHug

Awesome update dear !!!!!!!!ClapClap

I myself am getting afraid of this AST !!OuchOuch

What happened between them...Why he hates her...& why she now loves pappu???ConfusedConfused

So many questions !!!LOLLOL

Update soon...

Love ya !!!!!!!!!HugHugHug


Hey jesssHugHug

thanx dearEmbarrassed

be scared of AST he can do anything Evil Smile

ahh so much quess haan chalo you will came to know soon,

btw don't you guys want to know their love story sidhe  fight hi janni hai kyaLOL

will try to UD soon as soon as i can heheheLOL

love yaa tooEmbarrassed

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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 10:49pm | IP Logged
Amazing update Neha, I loved every bit of it. I was so excited for Avita's meeting and you didn't disappoint me. I'm surprised that Arpi loves Pappu or does she still love Avi. Their confrontation in her room was intense. I knew it was Avi. He both loves and hates her. I'm loving this ff. Please update soon. 

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sidda8

Amazing update Neha, I loved every bit of it. I was so excited for Avita's meeting and you didn't disappoint me. I'm surprised that Arpi loves Pappu or does she still love Avi. Their confrontation in her room was intense. I knew it was Avi. He both loves and hates her. I'm loving this ff. Please update soon. 

Hii Siddu hw are u dear
thanx for comment yaar,
well you will find all answers soon with each update
hope you will like the net update too
Wink

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