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FF YOU ARE MINE Part-4 "Wen I lvd U-IV"page-19 (Page 12)

UmIbrahim IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Avdesh is too far gone in love...
All his actions speak of this...
Only something really huge and painful can make Avi act like this...
Wondering what that is...
Excellent update once again Jo...
Waiting for more...
Loved the verses you have written in the end...

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yoga23priya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 August 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Kalitondra Senior Member

Joined: 25 November 2010
Posts: 418

Posted: 22 August 2011 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
Chuuutkiii hum back 22222222222222222222222222 LOL

PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
hiee SP..

will read & comment later..

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Kalitondra Senior Member

Joined: 25 November 2010
Posts: 418

Posted: 23 August 2011 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
as you know, I was a little busy these days, so I missed many of my Hindu language, can you translate for me the Hindi words plz Guru Ji LOL 

Tell me is it a badla case ? i mean AST revenges Avdesh Ji for Pihu slaps ConfusedWink

Gr8 job Clap, go ahead Smile , where is the next , want more , mange more LOLBig smile

u know he  reminds me Devdas, the evening wedding of Paro, when he struck her with the pearl necklace Unhappy

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-Prashu- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 August 2011 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Heyyy JoHug

OMG!!! This lovely update was dedicated to me...hayeeeEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

I still dont have words to express your update...Clap
Im thinking wht wold have hapend between themOuch Certainly Avi is too angry and is adamant to take revenge...

I Hope Love blossoms againEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

PS: I updated it finallyLOLLOL

Edited by prash_t - 30 September 2011 at 4:04am
Cuty16 Goldie

Joined: 14 January 2011
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Posted: 24 August 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged
Hye jo,
nice,amazing,shocking and rocking part.
While i was reading ur ff each time pappu's name his face was coming in front of me
Avi is too much yaar slaped arpi but he was more hurt by that naa, i think he has some gr8 pain.
The last quotation was too gud.

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jes_jade IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 August 2011 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Neha !!!!!!HugHug

Awesome update dear !!!!!!!!ClapClap

I myself am getting afraid of this AST !!OuchOuch

What happened between them...Why he hates her...& why she now loves pappu???ConfusedConfused

So many questions !!!LOLLOL

Update soon...

Love ya !!!!!!!!!HugHugHug

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