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joliefille

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 2:45am | IP Logged

Hello Guys i am back with my new FF hope you all like it Embarrassed


    


Characters:-


Avdhesh Singh Thakur-

"Rich Arrogant, Rude  businessman of India now hardly visit his nation only for his mother, world know this Avdhesh apart from this there's another side of AST which is revealed to only some close friends n someone special whom he valued more then life, but at same time there's someone in the world who's thought make his blood boil, he is searching for that person from years ."


Arpita Rai-

"Princess of state of Lalanpur, came back to her hometown after five years stay in London to get engaged to a Prince chosen by her Father Raja Saahab Mahesh Chandra Rai,"

 

Synopsis-

He is on search of someone he has some deabts to pay that person and he promised himself that he will make sure hell for that person who his whole world revolve around whether like it or not who changed his peaceful world full of love and happiness though he someone special for him now but whom he claims to his only solace that person should be HIS and only HIS  and in his words " YOU ARE MINE"


Video Representation of Synopsis and Characters




Precap on Page 2

Part 1  ... "The Journey  Begins "on Page 3

Precap ... on Page 6

Part 2 ... "When I saw You" on Page 8

Precap... on Page 10

Part 3 ... "Welcome Back" on Page 12

Part4... "When I Loved You-I" on Page14

                   "When I Loved You-II"on Page 16

Precap... on Page 17

                     "When I Loved You-III" on Page 17

                     "When  I Loved You-IV" on Page 19

                   

waiting for you views and any mistake i'm sorry...feel free commentWink

(if you like, don't forget to press the buttonSmile)


Edited by joliefille - 01 January 2012 at 12:31am

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 2:52am | IP Logged
Hye jo, now congrates on your 3rd ff dear.
So avi in a new avtaar rich arrogant buisness man.
And arpi princess of Lallanpur.
Raja mahesh chandra(i started imagining mahesh rai kings get up)
ROFL

Both the title is nice but i think
"U Are Mine" is more nice.
I know dis one also going to be as rocking as Desire.
Do update soon dear.


Edited by Cuty16 - 04 July 2011 at 3:04am

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
congrats on your 1st, 2nd, 3rd FF :P
I never commented on or desire, i know... i'm too lazy to read it.. is it finished now??

Ummm.. you are mine sounds much better for this FF :D
i really liked the synopsis, it feels like their is another tragedy FF lined up now haha :P


Edited by amnaM - 04 July 2011 at 6:44am

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Hiee Sugar Pie.. Missed Ya.. New FF.. Oh Wow.. I want title as YoU ARE MINE. It suits the FF. lovely concept..





update soon..


Edited by KriYa_life - 10 July 2011 at 6:21am

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Heyy neha !!Hug

hw r u??

missing u a lot..Cry

Loved the introduction...Star

I guess YOU ARE MINE is perfect..Thumbs Up


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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Heyy Teacher ji HugHug

Congo Shongo on your 2nd FF Hug Hug

if you ask my opinion then i think Love May Be will be good Embarrassed Embarrassed but You are mine is also good Embarrassed

Love ya TJ Hug


Edited by yoga23priya - 06 July 2011 at 11:14am

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Hi everyone, 

congrates Neha fo this new kahani, liked, i know both speak engrezi hai very well LOL, 'nd may be they 'll talk in english, but i have a preference to "Tum mere ho" , i feel it more romantic ya u can say "Tu es moi ", (isn't frensh 'nd Paris  romantic WinkLOL)

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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 4:31pm | IP Logged
Neha, I love your new ff. Why didn't you send me a pm, I feel so bad for commenting so late. It is very interesting, please continue. I wonder who Avi owes debt to,. OMG Arpi is going to marry another man. I can't wait to see Avita's meeting. 

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