Nivren ff:love story (chapter 9 updated)

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys this is my first ff so I hope that you like


Character intro:
Nivedita Sharma
Nivedita Sharma (also known as nivi) is a modern day girl she wears all types of clothes jeans,dresses,shorts ect ect. She is a 17yr old girl that goes to college and loves all of her friends very dearly she doesnt believe in love but she later on starts to when she meets the man of her dreams.

Viren Sood
Viren Sood the same description as Nivi.

These are the main characters for now but you will meet many more characters along the way.

CHAPTER 1
Nivi is walking along the college corridor with her friends Naina and Tani when she accidentally bumps into someone (it's Viren) and drops her stuff and Viren apologizes to her but Nivi just walks past him with her friends but before she could walk too far Viren yells out from behind her "Ruko" she stops and turns and says "kya hai mujhe aisay kyun roka?" then Viren asks her "Tum ho kaun?" Nivi was about to answer when Naina says from behind "Bhai yeh meri dost hai Nivedita" "Nice name" says Viren Nivi looks at Naina with a surprising and questioning look on her face Naina understood the look on her face and said "Nivi yeh Mera bara bhai hai Viren aur yeh hai uske dost Anurag aur Daksh" just then Nivi says "oh toh aap hai the famous Viren Sood sorry sorry main Samjhaty hoon dekhiye na main nay aap Kay bohat kisay sunay hain towel mein nachna apni tayji say apna kaan khichwana isi Tara Kay chotAy chotay kisay sunay hain wesay dikhnay mein itnay bhi buray nahi ho tum jitna Naina ne kaha tha us hisaab say tho tum bohat handsome ho" she winks at him and leaves with Naina and Tani.

CHAPTER 2
AFTER CLASS:
Nivi, Naina and Tani are at the principles office just then Viren,Daksh and Anurag walk in and the principle says " ok tho ab tum Sab log agay ho tho main bata detha hoon Kay mainly tum Sab logo ko yaha kyu bulaya hai ,well mainay tum logo ko yeh batana tha Kay Nivedita tum Tani aur Naina in theeno ko tution parhaogi just then Viren says "Lekin kyu sir." then the principle explains to them that they have been doing very badly in class so the principle says "Nivedita tum Viren ko uskay ghar jaa Kay parhaogi ,Naina tum Daksh ko uskay ghar jaa Kay parhaogi aur Tani tum Anurag ko uskay ghar jaa Kay parhaogi is that ok with you?" then they all say "yes sir" but just then Anurag cuts in and say "Lekin sir main aur Daksh tho em saath rehtay hai merat ghar pe tho kya Naina aur Tani wahi par aya Karengi hamay parhanay kay liye?" and the principle answers yes and says "Lekin tum log larkiyon ko apnay apnay kamray mein leaker jaogay is the understood?" both say "yes sir" and they all leave the principles office and discuss when they are going to do tuitions.

SORRY GUYS THE FIRST TWO CHAPTERS ARE SHORT BUT IT'S MY FIRST FF SO I JUST WEOTE ABIT BUT LET ME KNOW IF I SHOULD CARRY ON OR NOT PLZ.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.![/FONT]

AFTER SCHOOL THE GIRLS WENT TO TUTOR THE BOYS:

As soon as Nivedita entered virens house She was bombarded with questions by chanchal (the characters are the same ones from the show) she was about to answer when Viren cut in and said "maa please yeh mujhe tutor karne ai hai principle ke Kehnay pe" " oh tho tum ho Nivedita" " jee" replied Nivedita in a polite tone "chalo meray kamre mein chalte hai" Nivedita nodded and followed him when they got to his room Viren only just realized how beautiful Nivedita was looking and he thought to himself "wow wo tho salwar kameez mein bohat achi lagti hai khaskarke jab wo pink colour ke ho tho" Viren stared at Nivedita for atleast 10 minutes before Nivedita asked him "kya hua essay kya dekh rahe ho" "nahi kuch nahi wo bas sorry wo neechay maa ne tumse" before he could finish his sentence Nivedita said "it's ok Viren mujhe bilkul bhi bura nahi laganab shuroo kare" Viren nodded as if saying yes, so the started studying and studied for about two hours and then they got bored so to end the boredom Viren said to Nivedita "kya hum dost ban sakte hai" Nivedita thought about it then said " haa lekin" "lekin kya" asked Viren "baki Sab kahi galat naa samajh bethay tum tho jaantay hoo naanun Sab ko" said Nivedita in a worried tone ,Viren sensed her worry so he took her hand into his and said "tum fikar mat karo Sab theek hoga" Nivedita nodded and hugged him vire was taken aback by this gesture of hers but he still hugged her back just then chanchal and Vandana cleared their throats very loudly and came in, Nivedita was too embarrassed to say anything so she just said "ab mujhe chalna chaya hai bye Viren" she leaves the room but Viren was just as embarrassed as she was so he said "main usse darvazay tak chor ke atha hoon" as soon as he leaves chanchal says "bhabhi mujhe tho yeh Nivedita bohat pasand hai aur isle aur Viren ki Jodi bhi bohat achi lagay gi hai na?" haan aur chanchal tumhe pata hai Kay yeh kasha bhaisaab ki beti hai Nivedita Sharma" "kya yeh tho bohat achi baat hai bhabhi main tho kehthi hoon Kay jesay hi yehP log college chorthay hai na hum Viren ko leaker unkay ghar chale jay aur Nivedita ka haath maanglay kyu?" "haan chanchal tum bilkul theek kerahi ho".

PRECAP: Naina and Daksh a couple, Tani and Anurag a couple Nivedita and Viren missing each other and meeting chup chup Kay at night...!!!!

CHAPTER 4
THE NEXT DAY:
The next day Nivedita and Viren got to college and what they saw left them shell shocked,they saw Naina and Daksh walking in holding hands and Tani and Anurag doing the same Nivedita almost fainted but Viren handled her as soon as the couples got to Viren and Nivedita they said "hi guys" just then Nivedita took Naina and Tani to the side and said "what the hell what did I miss" and after hearing this they understood what she meant and Naina said "well we liked each other from ages bas ek doosray ko bata nahi sakay" at that moment Nivedita was so mad that she said the first thing that came to his mind which was "haan haan aur mujhe batatay waqt tho cat caught your tongue didn't it?!" they knew she was angry so they both apologized and promised Nivedita that they would tell her every thing from now on and the same happened with Viren,Daksh and Anurag and that's how the rest of their day at college went on by talking anbout how the couples got together.
AFTER SCOOL AT NIGHT:
Nivedita was in her bedroom she couldnt sleep,why because she was thinking about Viren she didn't know why so she thought to herself "am I missing him kyu,kyu uska chehra meri ankhoon Kay samnay atha reheat hai" she was just thinking when her phone rang...

who called find out by reading on...

CHAPTER 5
She picked up the phone and heard Viren's voice say "hi" she felt a wierd happiness in her heart she didn't know why but she did and so she replied saying "hi Viren main abhi tumhare baray hi soch rahi thi" and she stopped halfway after she realized what she just said and so Viren replied saying "bahar ao mujhe tumsay much kehna hai" "kya" she asked "are bahar tho ao Khudy pata chaley ga" she sighed deeply and said "acha theek hai tum Ruko main aa rahi hoon" (its been a month since Viren and Nivedita met) she got outside and saw Viren there with a bouquet of roses she looked at him questioningly he understood her confusion and said "ab pakro bhi meray haath thak gay hai in roses ko pakar pakar Kay" and at that she smiled and said "Viren tum bhi na" Viren got all happy when she smiled it made him happy to see her happy.

Sorry guys if it's a bit short...

CHAPTER 6
She asked Viren what he wanted to say she was about to ask him something else but before she could Viren grabbed her one hand on her waist and the other on her bare back and he just kissed her hard Nivedita was confused at what was happening but she replied by making the kiss deeper as she kissed him she slid her hand up his chest and around his neck Viren was shocked at her reaction but he was happy and just made the kiss deeper but both of them didn't know that nivedita's Dadi and papa were watching from the window above and what they saw made them happy so after they went in side Keshav said to NT Dadi "amma jesay hi in dono ka college khatam
Ho jay ga hum log chanchal bhabhi say baath karengay theek hai na?" "haan Keshav main bhi yahi soch rahi thi" meanwhile it suddenly started raining and that made Viren and Nivedita break apart but there was also someone else watching this and it was none other than Viren's ex-girlfriend sonia and she was not liking what she was seeing because she had been asking Viren for another chance for the past few days but Viren kept on refusing saying he didn't like her anymore meanwhile with Viren and Nivedita after they had broken apart the first thing Viren said to Nivedita was "I love you Nivedita" and Nivedita replied saying "I love you to Viren" and they both put their foreheads together and they stayed silent for a while but then Nivedita broke the silence by saying "Viren bohat raat ho gay hai mujhe chalna Chaye hai" Viren was just about to say something but it was too late Nivedita had ran off and so Viren
Left for home aswell as soon as Nivedita got to her bedroom she started smiling continuously and she was blushing uncontrollably she just couldn't stop smiling or blushing and her Dadi and papa noticed this because she was like at college, speaking of college when she got there everyone already knew about the kiss Viren and Nivedita had shared the night before and when she asked Viren he said he didn't know how everyone found out about that just then Sonia came in-between and said that I saw that kiss you two had shared and I told everyone about it.




PRECAP: NivRen's first date Sonia jelous... I hope you liked this one guys.



CHAPTER 7

"What!!" said the two of them together "haan mathlab mujhe laga kay wo itna cute moment tha tho menay Sab ko bata diya" so Viren replied "ab jab Sab ko pata chal hi Gaya hai tho hum kya kar sakthay hai" so Nivedita nodded in agreement so the whole day went by with people congratulating the new couple and at the end of tue day Viren offered to drop Nivedita home on his bike at first Nivedita was reluctant but then she agreed and then outside nivedita's house Viren asked her out to dinner and said they this would be their first date she shied at first and then agreed so he gave her a packet and said "aaj shaam ko ye dress pehan kar ready rehna main tumhe theek aath bajay PE ay ajaonga theek hai na?" and she replied saying "theek hai main ready rahongi" she was about to leave when Viren asked her to stop,she asked Viren what was wrong and he said that he didn't get his goodbye kiss so she smiled him and gave him a peck on the lips and said bye and as soon as she stepped into the house she saw her dad and Dadi stood there and they told her that they saw everything that happened last night and thetthey were very happy with her decision and at they she shied and ran into her room and she got ready for her date with Viren by 7:30 and then Viren arrived at 8:00 and beeped the horn of his car again and again but then Nivedita came outside and got into the car and Viren was gobsmacked by her beauty.

PRECAP: I'm not going to give you a precap because I want you to be curious now what happens at the date to find out wait for the next chapter oh and I am really sorry if it's short it's just that Im going somewhere so I have to hurry up!

CHAPTER 8
he was so shocked at what he saw that the first thing he did when she got into the car was kiss her passionately and Nivi was shocked by this but she kissed him back and when they broke apart Viren said "chaley" and Nivedita nodded in agreement shyly and they drove off but little did they know that Sonia was following them,they were driving for about half an hour and then they got to a very quiet place and theta when Viren stopped the car and then Viren got out and also opened the door for Nivedita and Then he asked her "Nivedita tum please apni ankhein band karlo" "Lekin kyu Viren Aida bhi kya hai kay main apni ankhein nahi khuli rak sakti?" so he replied "are thodi dear Kay liye hi sahi Lekin apnay boyfriend pay bharosa karlo" and he laughed after that and Nivedita joined him and so they both laughed for a few seconds and then they stopped when they got to a beautiful garden it was hidden behind some bushes away from the hustle and bustle of the city and in the middle of it was a small table ready and set for a candlelight dinner Nivedita was just taking in the site when she felt virens hand around her waist and she shied as she knew it was Viren and she just leaned back into his arms and they stood like that for ages and then Viren led Nivedita to the dinner table where everything was already set even the food was Nivedita's favorite, it was a Chinese cuisine and Nivedita loved Chinese so much but then she asked Viren "tumhe kaise pata chala Kay mujhe chinese pasand hai?" "meri behen hai na tumhare best friend Naina usi ne bataya tha mujhe and with that he kissed her.

PRECAP:last day of college Viren's parents meet Nivedita's parents and talk NivRen worried what are they talking about.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!

Sorry this ones short I was getting late for school SOOO but I promise the next one will be much longer!!

CHAPTER 9

After the ball Viren and Nivedita and divya and siddharth were all called to the sood mansion and when they got the call Dadasahib sounded so serious that they got worried but when thay got there all of that changed because when they got there because Nandu came and gave the two couples a card each and virens card said that him and Nivedita were getting married and siddharths card said that him and divya were getting married and both the couples were very happy to get this good news infact Nivedita and divya were feeling so shy that they ran off home without saying anything and Viren and siddharth were about to follow them when Vandana came and pulled both their ears and said "tum dono kaha jaa rahi hoo?" and then Viren cheekily replied "hum dono honey wali bahu ko lenay jaa rahi hai kyu ki hum log jantay hai ki aap apni bahu's ke bagair nahi jee sakti hai aur nahi hum log jee saktay hai un Kay bagair" "badmaash" said Vandana and chanchal together

3 YEARS LATER.
(the couples have gotten married siddharth and divya had one daughter called divya and Viren and Nivedita had twins one boy and one girl called Varun and Nidhi and Sonia didn't know that Viren and Nivedita had gotten married and now Sonia has returned to gain her love Viren back)

Viren and Nivedita are out of town due to some business work and have left their two year old kids at home,everyone is working and and just busy in their own thing when suddenly Sonia arrives and Vandana notices her and asks her who she is so she replies "wo Antyji main Viren ki college ki dost hoon kya main usay mil sakty hoon?" and Vandana replies "beta wo tho business Kay silsilay mein out of town Gaya howa hai Lekin wo aaj walks araha hai" and that's when sonia turns to leave and Varun asks Sonia who she is but before shecould answer they heard virens voice from outside and that's when sonia said "Antyji aap ease usay mat batayega Kay main ai hoon main usay surprise dena chatty hoon" so Vandana agreed and went to get Viren and when Vandana asked where Nivedita was Viren said that she was at her dads house but Sonia couldn't hear what they were saying and then Viren came a little further in the house and then he heard two voices saying "papa humaray gifts kaha hai?" and seeing that Viren had responded Sonia was so shocked.

PRECAP: Sonia finds out who virens wife is!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice ff sweetie, so it is 3 years later with a twist interesting.
Posted: 12 years ago
nice chapter 9... got leap very fast... ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 12 years ago
nice chapter i wonder whats gonna happen next
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