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Posted: 02 July 2011 at 3:37pm | IP Logged
Hi guys! I'm PriyankaSmile
This is my first FF...hope u like it!Smile


         Kabhi Kabhi...
Sanaya Irani as Khusi in Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

Khushi Kumari Gupta ' a fun, bubbly, happy-go-lucky 22 year
old girl. Her parents died in a car crash when she was 2 years old & her
mom's brother ' Sashi Gupta adopted Khushi. Khushi loves her family &
accepts it as her own. Payal, Khushi's older sister(Sashi's real daughter) is
Khushi's best-friend. Even though they are not real sisters, they share a bond
greater than sisters. Khushi loves her Jiji(Payal) & can do anything for
her. 


Barun Sobti as Arnav in Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon


Arnav Singh Raizada(aka ASR) ' a mysterious man with a

deep-dark secret. Anger lives on his nose, he's a perfectionist & doesn't
spare anyone when things are not the way he wants them to be. He believes he
writes his own destiny & does not believe in God(or so he says). His
sister, Anjali(Di) is everything for him. He can do anything to keep sorrow
away from her.



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                                                        INDEX

                                    Chapter 1 - Page 1

                                    Chapter 2 - Page 3

                                    Chapter 3 - Page 6

                                    Chapter 4 - Page 8

                                    Chapter 5 - Page 13

                                    Chapter 6 - Page 17

                                    Chapter 6B - Page 22

                                    Chapter 7 - Page 27

                                    Chapter 8 - Page 33

                                    Chapter 9 - Page 39

                                    Chapter 10 - Page 48

                                    Chapter 11 - Page 56

                                    Chapter 12 - Page 64

                                    Chapter 13 - Page 72

                                    Chapter 14 - Page 82

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Edited by Prix3 - 28 October 2011 at 7:33pm

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Part 1: Dishoom-dishoom

 

"Arreyy itni bewakoof ladki ko kaha se utha laye ho" Bua screamed.

 Khushi looked down at her Bua's clothes. They were soaking wet & it was all because of Khushi.

"Ab khade khade humra mooh kya dekh rahi ho. Niklo yaha se!"

Khushi wanted to apologize but she knew it was no use talking to Bua right now, she was fuming.

"Ek kaam theek se nahi hota is ladki se!" her Bua added.

Khushi was used to her Bua yelling like this but she was so tired of it. She couldn't take it anymore. Khushi couldn't figure out if she was mad at Bua or herself.

It wasn't that Bua didn't love Khushi. There was this one time last year when Khushi fell really ill & no one but her Bua was home. Bua took take of her so well, Khushi was surprised. But once Khushi was well again, her Bua's yelling & insulting Khushi started again.

"Devi Maya, humse kyun kuch kaam nahi hota!" Khushi complained. "Hum jabhi such karne jaati hain, kuch galat ho jata hai!" she continued. "Aur yeh Bua? Humesha humare hi peeche kyun padi rehti hai?!"

Khushi was so angry today, nothing had gone right the whole day. In the morning, she tripped on the clothing line & all the clothes Payal had recently hung fell down. Next, Garima had told Khushi to buy vegetables from the bazaar. On her way home, Khushi tripped on the stairs & all the vegetables fell, some even got squished. And her biggest deed of the day, the water on Bua. Bua told Khushi to get hot water ready for her shower. Khushi got the water, went to Bua all happy & exclaimed "Bua Ji!" Bua turned around abruptly causing Khushi to drop the tub of water & it splashed all over Bua.

"Aaj ka toh din hi kharaab hai!" Khushi said getting angrier as she remembered all the incidents of the day.

As soon as Khushi finished her sentence, she bumped into a man.

 

 "Chote!" Anjali said from the phone. "Kabhi toh meri baat sun liya karo, breakfast kare bina hi chalegaye na aaj." She complained.

"Di aaj mujhe bohot kaam hai" ASR answered walking down the hot streets in Lucknow. "Main bahar se hi kuch kha loonga."

"Ab mujhe kya buddhu samja hai Arnav! Main bohot acchi tareeke se janti hoon tumhe. Tum pure din bhooke hi rahonge." Anjali went on.

"Acha Di ab main rakhta hoon." He cut the phone.

Ye Di bhi na, Arnav thought. Ek toh yaha pe kitni gharmi hai. Aur raste kitne chote hai, meri gaadi bhi yaha nahi aasakti.

ASR was more annoyed than usual today. It was a hot day & ASR was used to his air-conditioned car. ASR hated walking, he preferred his car.

He felt bad for hanging up on his sister. He was about to call her back when he bumped into a girl.

 

 

Khushi moved back just enough so she could see his eyes. There was something…different…about his eyes. The first thing his eyes shouted was anger but…there was something else too. His brown pair of eyes looked like they were hiding something. But Khushi couldn't make out what it was.

"Dekh ke nahi chal sakti kya?" the owner of the brown eyes called out. That snapped Khushi out of it. "Aankhe toh apko bhi di hai Bhagwan ne. Aap dekhe chaliye na!"

"Apni aukad dekhe baat karo…tum jaanti bhi ho main kaun hoon?" the angry young man said.

Khushi was already having a bad & now this stupid man wanted to start a fight.

"Ji nahi! Aur aap jaise ghmandi aadmi ko hum jaanna bhi nahi chahte hai." Khushi answered.

 

 

Who the heck does this girl think she is?! NO ONE talks to ASR like that.

"Hatto mere raaste sai." He pushed her out of his way.

He was already having a bad day & was in no mood of arguing with some stupid girl. 

The girl ran after him. "Rukiye!" she called out. Arnav stopped but didn't turn around.

"Aap samajhte kya hai apne aap ko?! Aise kaise kisi ladki ko dakha de sakte hai aap? Kisi ne aap ko sanskaar nahi diye kya? Itni akkad dikhayenge toh koi bhi aap se baat karna nahi chaega. Aap ko toh-" she stopped as Arnav turned around abruptly with anger-filled eyes. 

Arnav saw the girl's eyes. She was looking into his eyes, she was clearly scared, but for some reason Arnav felt as if the girl was trying to & succeeding in reading his own eyes. No, he had to stop her. 

"Mujhse behas mat karo...pachtaogi tum. Aur main apne aap ko jo bhi samjhu, tumse matlab?"

With this he turned around & left the scared girl standing there.

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"Aise kaise baat karsakte hai yeh!" she said. 

Hmph! She turned around & left too. 




Edited by Prix3 - 02 July 2011 at 4:06pm

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nice character sketch priyanka! Tongue 
 wud love to read the first chapter~!

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hey priyanka
lovely sketch
looking forward to the story

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Part 1 updatedSmile

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Originally posted by .Preet.

nice character sketch priyanka! Tongue 
 wud love to read the first chapter~!

thank youSmile part 1 is updated!

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Originally posted by -Vishwa-

hey priyanka
lovely sketch
looking forward to the story

Thank you!Smile

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Intreasting ff looking forward to the story Smile

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