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Milan - SS of MAANEET Thread 1

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Hi All,
 
I am silent reader of this forum. Having read so many lovely FF's on this forum has inspired me to pen something of my own. I am not good in writing but would like my story to reach others. Please comment and let me know how is it.
 
MILAN- It is a simple story of the milan of our Loved MAAN and GEET.
 
Characters:
MAAN - He was from a rich family but due to some twists in his life (which i will reveal soon), he is a self made man has his own business. A man of his words, always stands for the right things. He is arrogant and hard working like the serial character. Doesn't believe in love (due to the twists)... but then something happens which changes him... for the better.
 
GEET - Very nice, down to earth girl but a chatter box at times. She is from a small town , was given a choice to either get married or study college in town. She wanted to be independent so chose to study. She is now working in some company (not Maan's Wink)... She believes in loving who ever her parents choose to marry... till one day ...
 
Other characters will play small roles, i will talk as they make entry...
 
Will be posting first part soon...
 
Do comment please please


Edited by arpitaji - 31 October 2011 at 4:14am

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Posted: 02 July 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged

Index

Chapter 1 - Page 1

Chapter 2 - Page 1
Chapter 3 - Page 2
Chapter 4 - Page 4
Chapter 5 - Page 5
Chapter 6 - Page 7
Chapter 7 - Page 10
Chapter 8 - Page 14
Chapter 9 - Page 17
Chapter 10 - Page 22
Chapter 11 - Page 30
Chapter 12 - Page 36
Chapter 13 - Page 43
Chapter 14 - Page 52
Chapter 15 - Page 58
Chapter 16 - Page 65
Chapter 17 - Page 73
Chapter 18 - Page 79
Chapter 19 - Page 90
Chapter 20 - Page 99
Chapter 21 - Page 112
Chapter 22 - Page 126
Chapter 23- Page 139
 
Thread 2
 
 
Please My other works @ Arpi's Maaneet world


Edited by arpitaji - 11 February 2012 at 4:56am

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Chapter 1

Maan was working in his office, late as usual when his cell phone rang. It was his best friend Rahul.

Rahul - Hi Maan. I am very annoyed with youAngry
Maan - Hi Rahul. What did i do buddy...?
Rahul - You forgot your best friend birthday and now are asking ...
Maan - (hits his head and thinks God i again forgot his birthday, don't know now what he will make me do) {Rahul was the only one who could force Maan for something) - Happy Birthday Buddy...
Rahul - I am not going to spare you so soon... Meet me now in the HELL disco...
Maan - Yaar u know how i hate discos...
Rahul - His is your punishment for forgetting my Birthday... now come
and he cut the call
 
Maan knew he had no option but to oblige... so he went to the HELL disco..
 
Geet's apartment. she stays in alone in an apartment given by company. Pinky her best friend lives next door and works along with Geet.
 
Pinky rushes to Geet's apartment.
Pinky - Geet yaar save me... please.
Geet -  yaar kya hua, aaj we are anyways late from office, let me goto sleep.
Pinky - Yaar, i forgot to tell you there is our office party today and we must go.. you know otherwise we will be teased for being out of odd tomorrow.
Geet- I don't care yaar, i am always like that since i where traditional dress..
Pinky - yaar, please come with me for company since Neha is not coming and i can't go alone... Please... Pretty Please...
Geet - Ok. i will come.
So here Geet and Pinky set out for HELL disco...
 
Precap - Will they meet
 
Please comment...


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wow...great part...nyc starting...all the very best for your FF  EARLY WAITING for next part..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SmileSmile

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Originally posted by cute1122

wow...great part...nyc starting...all the very best for your FF  EARLY WAITING for next part..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!SmileSmile
Thanks!! Updating soon

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Chapter 2
 
Maan reached the HELL disco and greeted Rahul. Rahul was already partying hard and had a bunch of friends over. Since Maan didn't like disco's he went and sat in a nice corner with a drink. He never enjoyed parties but had no option today to escape, so he mentally prepared himself for a dull and boring time, longing to be back to his work.
 
Here Geet also arrived at the disco along with Pinky. Geet was wearing a white Tweety top and blue denin jeans. Pinky immediately joined the office gang, leaving Geet alone. Geet took a diet pepsi and was searching for a quite place to settle down, when she noticed Rahul. Rahul and Geet had studied together in computer course after college. Rahul greeted Geet and they started talking about old times.
 
Rahul - Geet so what are you doing these days.
Geet - I am working now.
 
Since the music was loud they were having trouble in conversing. So they went to a quite corner (Yes,, the same where Maan was seated Wink).
 
Rahul - Maan what are you doing here sitting alone. Oh... meet my friend Geet. Geet, this is my best buddy Maan...
 
Maan and Geet look at each other and some feeling unknown to them triggers. Both not sure why did it feel like they know each other since ages when they shake hands. They are brought out of their thoughts by Rahul...
The music had just changed... It was Rahul's favorite song
Rahul - Wow!! my favorite... i am out of here
and he runs to the dance floor leaving Maan and Geet.
 
There is silence between them and both get lost in their thoughts...
 
Precap : Maan's past


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wow nice start yaar ...continue soon ...do add me to ur pm list ...

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