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~**Destiny 2(RN)**~ Updated pg. 61 part 34

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Destiny Thread one
and Prologue

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921


Part 1

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=5


Part 2


https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=8


Part 3

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=11


Part 4

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=15


Part 5

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=20


Part 6

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=24


Part 7

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=29


Part 8

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=33


Part 9


https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=38


Part 10

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=44


Part 11


https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=48


Part 12



https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=55


Part 13

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=62


Part 14


https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=71



Part 15


https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=80


Part 16


www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=91


Part 17

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=101



Part 18


https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=114


Part 19

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=122



Part 20


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1043921?pn=130


Part 21


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1043921?pn=137



Part 22



https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1043921&TPN=145



Part 23



https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1720254


Part 24


https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1720254&TPN=10


Part 25


https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1720254&TPN=17



Part 26

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1720254&TPN=22


Part 27


https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1720254&TPN=28



Part 28


https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1720254&TPN=32



Part 29


https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1720254&TPN=37



Part 30



https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1720254&TPN=43


Part 31



https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1720254?pn=48


Part 32


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1720254?pn=52


Part 33


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1720254?pn=56




Edited by Mahak Sinha - 7 years ago
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Part 24:-

She has taken his breathe away and he was unable to avoid the beauty in her and the beauty for which he was dreaming now a days to explore completely. As being a man and too her husband it was now getting too tough for him to avoid his needs and desires to have her completely. It has been almost nine month of their marriage and almost a month of their confession when he accepted his feelings for her and she found out his true feelings for her from his dairy. It was getting hard for him to control his feelings more and whenever he is alone with Naina his mind becomes haunted by those firy desires.

 

Naina was trying to tie laces for her blouse and she was failing each time. Raj reached to her slowly in a Terrance and offered his help. "Naina may i?"

 

She removed her hands and nodded, Raj's hands touched her bare back which instantly closed her eyes because of some unknown feelings and her fist tightened. Raj was lost in another word and soon instead of tying her laces his hands started roaming at her bare back. His hands were making her week and soon when she felt his lips on her back she has lost all her control over her and she hissed softly, "Veer...".

 

But he didn't pay attention towards her and continued kissing her back and he circled his arms around her waist to pull her closer.

 

Pee loon tere neelay neelay nainun se shabnam
Pee loon tere geelay geelay hontun ki sargam


He was getting wild with each passing second. And now Naina was lost too in his sensuous touch. It was becoming hard for her too to control her, her mind and her heart both said her to let him do what he want.

 

Pee loon hai peenay ka mausam
Tere sang ishq taari hai, Tere sang ik khumari hai
Tere sang chain bhi mujhko, Tere sang bekarari hai


Naina was trying her best to stop her from sinking in that moment but all her attempts went in vain soon Raj's lips started tracing her neck and moved towards her shoulders.


Tere bin jee nahi lagda, tere bin jee nahi sakda
Tujh pe hai haare maine vaare do jahan


He has now full control over her and he was licking and tasting her exposed skin to the fullest making Naina breathe harder and harder. She was just moaning louder and his Veer was now unable to stop himself from tasting her white skin with his tongue.

 

Hosh mein rahun kyun aaj main, Tu meri baahun mein simti hai

Mujh mein samayi hai yun, Jis tarahn ki koi hum nadi

Tu mere seenay mein chupti hai, sagar tumhara main hoon

His hands were working on her saari pallu which opened the pin on her shoulder and soon her pallu removed and dropped and now Raj could see the beautiful two mounds in front of her eyes which demands his love and his exploration when Suddenly Raj's mobile rang which broke the rhythm. They both came out of their Terrance and Naina blushed to see her state.

 

Raj irritatingly saw the phone and see Abhi's number calling, cursing him under his breathe to disturb him at this moment he received the call. "Haan Chauhan sahab."

 

"Raj kahan hai aap?"

 

"Bus aa rahe hain."

 

"Aap ne aadhe ghante kahe the ek ghanta ho chuka hai pls jaldi aaiye."

 

"Haan aa rahe hain hum dono." And he saw Naina again and this time went to help her again.

 

"aap rehne dijiye." She said shyly.

 

"Nahi karoonga to mai hi is baar bus jaldi karoonga." And he tied all laces fighting with his desires hard. And finally give a series of kisses at her back and moving to her ears he said in husky voice, "Naina you are looking hot, chodne ka man hi nahi karta. Bus jee yahi chahta hai ki tum ko kahin jaane na doo aur pyaar karoon."

 

Naina blushed to deep crimson but still replied, "chalein der ho rahi hai captain."

 

"As u say her highness." And he offered his hand just like a perfect gentleman and she gave her hand.

 

They came out locking their room and found Abhi and Shalu waiting for them. Shalu looked at Naina and the blush on her cheeks made her understand everything.

 

"Der to honi hi thi,aakhir in ka chehra bata raha hai raaje dil." Shalu teased to which Naina blushed more.

 

Raj came in rescue, "Chalein?"

 

Abhi just smiled at him while saying, "haan abhi tak kaafi jyada jaldi thi aap ko jab hume baar baar aap ko call karna pad raha tha."

 

 

"Aisa kuch nahi hai, u know na ye ladies ready hone me kitna waqt lagati hain?"

 

Naina gave him a gaze and Raj smiled at her, "Haan jaise in logon ko ready hone me to kabhi waqt lagta nahi hai."

 

Shalu and Abhi giggled and Abhi said, "ok kya ye world war baad me resume kar sakte hain? Abhi sach me chalein varna late ho jaayega."

 

And they all left from there.

 

Arjun and Arohi:-

 

"Kitne khoobsurat jagah hai na Arjun." She was really happy to see that place.

 

"Haan hai to par tum se jyada nahi." Still looking at her in admiration.

 

Arohi blushed, "accha abhi andar chalte hain." And she pulled him inside her pulling his  hand. Slow music was playing there which was making the environment more beautiful and both were engrossed in beauty of moment.

 

"Pasand aaya."

 

Arohi looked at him in awe, she thought for a while and said, "Tum ne ye sab mere liye kiya hai Arjun?"

 

Arjun gave a smile, "koi shak?"

 

"Sach?" she asked.

 

"Nahi jhooth. Ab ye batao mai jhooth kyoun boloonga tum se?"

 

Arohi was getting overwhelmed and she hugged Arjun instantly, "Mujhe nahi pata tha Arjun ki itne romantic ho tum."

 

Arjun smiled and took her tightly in the hug, "par mujhe pata hai ki meri Arohi ko ye sab kitna pasand hai. Tum ko Army me kis ne aane ko kaha tha, tumhe to movies me hona chahiye tha. Ya to kisi daily soap me jahan sab kuch dreamy dreamy milta bilkul tumhari aakhon jaisa jin me jaane kitne sapne ek saath dikhte hain mujhe." He teased but Arohi didn't buzz she just smiled.

 

"Agar yahan nahi aati to mujhe mera Arjun kaise milta?"

 

Arjun gave a smile and a soft music started making their body move with same rhythm.

 

Tum aaye to hawaaon mein ek nasha hai

Tum aaye to fizaaon mein rang sa hai

 

When this song started playing Arohi gave a big smile, "Tum ko yaad hai?"

 

"Off course Arohi, tum se judi hue har baat mere liye khaas hai aur humesha mujhe yaad rehti hai." And soon they started loosing themselves on beat of the song.

 

Yeh rang saare hai bas tumhaare Aur kya,
aur kya, aur kya
Aur kya, aur kya, aur kya 


"Sach me Arjun ab mujhe yakeen hai ki tum mujhe bahut jyada pyaar karte ho."

 

He was surprised for a moment, "to kya pehle nahi tha?"

 

She just smiled, "pehle lagta tha ki sab se jyada tum apne desh se pyaar karte ho."

 

"Vo to abhi bhi karta hoon. Kyounki humari pehchaan hi humare desh se hai jab tak ye hai surakisht tab tak hum bhi hai."

 

She saw his face for a moment and said, "to tum mujh se bhi jyada apne desh se pyaar karte ho?"

 

Arjun smiled ans asked, "Sach kahoon ki jhooth?"

 

"Sach."

 

"Haan." And Arohi hugged him tight this time.

 

"I love u so much Arjun, tum se jyada mujhe vakai me koi mujhe pyaar nahi kar sakta. I feel proud of you Captain Arjun Rathode."

 

Tum aaye to hawaaon mein ek nasha hai
Tum aaye to fizaaon mein rang sa hai

 

Here Raj and Naina were also in the same restaurant with Abhi and Shalu.

 

"Sorry sir."

 

"What do u mean by sorry?"

 

"Actually sir aaj ki booking hai poore hall ki, to aaj possible nahi ho paayega."

 

"Aap jaante hain hum kaun hai?"

 

"Actually sir ye venue aaj se then din pehle hi book ho gaya tha."

 

"To aap ko yahan closed ka hording to lagana tha na?"

 

"Sorry sir vo galti ho gayi hum se."

 

"What...koi yahan aata hai aur us k baad aap sorry bolte hain."

 

"It's ok Chauhan sahab hum kahin aur chalte hain."

 

"Par Raj aap dekh rahe hain kitne careless log hain ye?"

 

"Samajh raha hoon Chauhan par vo baar baar maafi bhi to maang raha hai na hum se?"

 

"Koi baat nahi Captain Abhimanyu hum chalte hain na doosre restaurant me, pass me hi hai." Shalu tried to explain to Abhimanyu.

 

Here Arohi sees them from the glass window, "Arjun vo dekho Captain Abhimanyu and Captain Rajveer."

 

Arjun looked in that direction, "Haan to?"

 

"Hume unhe yahan bulana chahiye na."

 

"To tumhare saath romance kaise kar paaonga?"

 

"Oho Arjun jitney jyada log rahenge utna hi maza aayega na. Ab dekho un k saath do ladies bhi hain ek Doc Shalini Singhal aur doosre Captain Rajveer ki wife Naina. Pata hai bahut acchi hai Naina."

 

"OK Arohi...samajh gaya mai. To mai bula leta hoon un ko baad me koi complain nahi karna samjhi."

 

"Nahi karoongi, thank u Arjun love u." and she kissed him on his cheek.

 

Arjun just smiled and before they can leave he came out.  "Excuse me sir."

 

Raj and Abhi turned to find Arjun standing there, "Captain Rathode."

 

"Yes sir, sorry for inconvience. Maine hi aaj ki booking ki thi. But now I want you all to join us here."

 

Raj just smiled, "So captain Shah is here with you but we don't want to disturb you both. So we will be fine in any other place."

 

"No sir, Arohi ne hi aap logon ko bahar dekha to mere se kaha ki aap logon ko yahan saath me bula liya jaaye." Arjun told.

 

"Nahi aap logon ka programme kharab nahi karna chahte hum." Abhi said.

 

"Aisa kuch nahi hai aap log aaiye na." and finally Raj and Abhi has to be agreed and they bought Naina and Shalu with them.

 

"Hello Naina mam and Shalini mam."

 

"Arohi, tum hume mam kyoun keh rahi ho?" And Naina smiled at her.

 

"Kyun galat kiya kya?"

 

"Bahut galat, call us by our names." And Sahlu smiled saying it.

 

"Ok than Naina and Shalu."

 

"Vow aap log aa gaye yahan, I hope ab aur jyada maza aayega."

 

"So let's sit now."

 

"Na na baithne ka time kahan hai ab."

 

All saw Arohi with questioning look, "kyoun?"

 

"Are baba itna sweet romantic song chal raha hai to is par to dance hona chahiye na?"

 

Arjun said, "yeah off course."

 

"May I have the pleasure to dance with my lady love?" Raj asked in his unique adorable style.

 

And Naina shyly gave her hand in his hands, "yeah."

 

They were on floor soon followed by Arjun Arohi. Arjun took her hands in his and settled his arm around her waist. Raj was watching Naina's face while doing that and she was blushing.

 

Tum aaye to hawaaon mein ek nasha hai
Tum aaye to fizaaon mein rang sa hai
Yeh rang saare hai bas tumhaare

Aur kya, aur kya, aur kya

 

Naina k liye Raj k pass aane ka ehsass naya nahi tha par har baar aisa kyoun hota tha ki jab bhi Raj us k pass hota tha vo apne aap ko rok nahi paati thi. Raj ki khushboo, us ki narjein aur us k pass hone ka ehsaas sab kuch Naina ko apne hosh khone pe majboor karne lagta tha.

 

Yahan Arohi ka dil bhi kuch aur soch hi nahi paa raha tha jab se Arjun ne us ko apni bahon me liya hai. Jee chahta tha ki waqt yahin ruk jaaye, ye lamha yahin tham jaaye taaki vo humesha k liye isi tarah apne Arjun ki bahon me khoyi rahe.

 

Eh hey hey, aah haa haa Eh hey hey,
aah haa haa  
Tum aaye ho to dekh lo
Naya naya sa lage yeh jahaan,
ho Haan haan haan haan haan, oh ho

 

Arohi ki dil ki dhadkano ko mehsoos kar sakta tha Arjun aur sach pooch to vo bhi kuch aisa hi chahta tha. Jab se Arohi us ki zindagi me aayi hai har taraf ek naya ehsaas jag gaya hai aur ab jeene ka dil karta hai us ka. Pehle sab kuch akela tha. Bachpan me hi Arjun k maa papa chale gaye, mama jee ne paal pos kar bada kiya us ko. Apne pita ki saari property ka ek lauta vaaris Arjun Rathode.

 

Par Arohi k aane k baad sab kuch badal gaya. Us ne Arjun ko badal diya aur jeena sikhaya hai. Us ki vajah se hi Arjun mohabbat karna seekh paaya zindagi se.

 

Haseen haseen hai yeh zameen
Dhula dhula sa hai yeh aasmaan
Tum ho to hai yeh samaa
Aur kya, aur kya, aur kya, aur kya

 

Raj ko samajh me nahi aa raha tha kaisa jadoo kar diya hai Naina ne us par ki nigaah hatai nahi hai us ki Naina k chehre par se jab bhi vo saamne hoti hai. Bus dil karta hai yu hi dekhta rahe ho vo Naina ko humesha. Naina k aane k pehle vo akela tha par ab Naina us ko kahin bhi akela nahi rehne deti yahan tak ki khayalon me bhi nahi.

 

Naina soch rahi thi Raj ka har ehsaas us k liye khaas hai. Raj k touch se vo aur pagal hone lagti hai. Achanak se us ki aakhon k same aaj subah ka aur abhi sham ka vo pal aa gaya jab Raj us k bahut pass tha, itna pass ki dono k beech ki saari dooriyan almost khatam hi honewaali thi. Pata nahi kyoun ab us ko lagne laga hai ki dono k beech ki saari dooriyan khatam hone ka time aa gaya hai.

 

Dhadak raha hai dil mera
Jhuki jhuki hai palkein yahan,
ho
Haan haan haan haan haan, oh ho

 

'Sahi soch rahi ho tum Naina, ab vo pal aa hi gaya hai shayad jab mujhe lagta hai ki hum dono k beech ki saari dooriyan kahtam ho jaani chahiye. Ab mai aur intejaar nahi karna chahta na, mai tumhe mehsoos karna chahta hoon Naina har tarah se. Mai apni Naina ko har tarah se apna banana chata hoon. Bahut waqt le liya hai hum ne aur shayad ab jyada dooriyan nahi bardaasht hongi mujh se. '

 

Shayad Raj ki in ankahi baton ko Naian ne sun liya tha aur us k chehre par sharmaane ka vo gulabi pan dikh raha tha ki Raj samajh raha tha ki us ki Naina ne us ki feelings ko padh liya hai.

 

Raj ab soch raha tha 'maine to apni feelings keh di hain Naina ab tum bhi kaho na. Mai sun na chahta hoon ki tum mujh se kaho ki mai pyaar karoon tumhe. Har tarah se apne beech ki saari dooriyan mita dein. Jo jism ek jaan ban jaayein hum humesha k liye. Kaho Naina mujh se kaho.'

 

Jo dil mein ho,
voh keh bhi do

Ruki ruki si hai yeh daastaan

Jazbaat maange zabaan
Aur kya, aur kya, aur kya, aur kya

 

'Sach kahoon Veer, ab mai sach me apne pyaar ko poori tarah se apna banana chati hoon. Jaane kab se mera dil us pal ka intezaar kar raha hai jab hum humesha k liye ek ho jaayenge. Jab kabhi bhi tum mere pass aate ho mujhe apne pe kaboo nahi reh jaata, jaise lagta hai sab kuch mere haathon se nikal gaya hai. Mere upper se mera control khatam ho jaata hai aur tumhari aakhein jab mujhe dekhti hai mere jism ko dekhti hain to mai jo mehsoos karti hoon vo mai bayaan bhi nahi kar sakti. Mujhe humesha k liye apna bana lo Veer...'

 

Tum aaye to hawaaon mein ek nasha hai
Tum aaye to fizaaon mein rang sa hai 



Back to Arjun and Arohi:-

'Arjun pata nahi kyoun tum jab bhi mere kareeb hote ho to bus kuch aur sochne ka man nahi karta hai, tumhara pyaar aur saath mujhe poora karta hai aur mai kabhi bhi ek pal k liye tum se juda nahi chahti.'



Yeh rang saare hai bas tumhaare
 
Aur kya, aur kya, aur kya
 
Aur kya, aur kya, aur kya

 

'Nahi Arohi hum kabhi juda nahi honge. Hum ek hai aur ek rahenge, is duniya ki koi bhi takat hume kabhi juda nahi kar paayegi maut bhi nahi. Ye vada hai mera tum se.'

 

 Abhi and Shalini were just watching them, "kitne acche lag rahe hain na ye sab ek saath?"

 

"Haan Doc, kaash meri zindagi me bhi koi itna pyaar karne waala hota."

 

"Kyoun, koi na ho aisa to nahi ho sakta Captain."

 

Abhi gave a small smile, "shayad kabhi tha Doc par ab nahi hai."

 

"Kyoun Captain?"

 

"Vo kisi aur se pyaar karti thi."




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hey congo 4new thread
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