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Shunya

@Bella-Edward

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Posted: 12 years ago

Intro

                        This cannot be a story , but a script by Destiny of things that exist in light and darkness . It describes not the life of humans , but the feelings on the dead cold darkness . It is not about the struggle for survival but the bond of the dead with life . Its not a happy dream , neither is it a sad song .

   Its a fable tale that describes the tune of silence , the beauty of a crumpled rose , the color of death and the meaning of forever .

   This tale starts when-ever its narrated so , at this note this tale starts now.

Chapter 10 - Silent Diary

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1720001&PID=51604020�

Chapter 11 - Memory of a Fireplace

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64590543�

Chapter 12 - Angel's Verdict

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68371427�

Edited by Bella-Edward - 11 years ago

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Shunya

@Bella-Edward

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Posted: 12 years ago

Characters

Piya Jaiswal : the fictional protagonist . This tale is around her , about her . Piya is the new girl in the town . A confident and stubborn girl who prefers to take care of others rather than being taken care of . She is a beautiful girl with curly black hair and chocolate brown eyes .

Abhay Raichand : Is Vampire who is 222 years old , he will always be in the age of 17 when he was transformed into a vampire after his human death . He was born in the year 1789 at the period of French Revolution . Impossibly beautiful , charming , determined and a very arrogant brat in the town . He is the eye ball of every girl in the college , but he never ever considers the most beautiful girl as worth paying any attention . Piya once called him "Adonis" - the Greek God of Mystery , as she felt he always carried a deep down secret .

Sugandh Jaiswal : Sugandh is Piya's mother . She was a solo parent . Piya inherited her confidence and beauty . Piyal also has her mother's chocolate eyes and curl black hair . In-spite of losing her love Sugandh asked Piya to believe in True Love .

Chand & Haseena : Chand is the head of the Vampire Coven (500 years old) . He was born in the time of Portugal Renaissances in Lisbon . He was first named Bernardi Riberio Junior after his father who was a Portuguese poet . He was turned as a vampire at the age of 29 after a deathly sickness . He is very gallant with dark black eyes . He is member of the board of higher trustworthy directly responding to the Higher Authorities . His is a powerful Vampire . He found his love in Haseena , an Arabian Slave . Haseena was born in the year 1711 in Eritrea (300 years old) . She is a lustrous beauty with blank hain and light brown eyes . She was sold an older trader at the age of 34 by her father , this hurt her and she tried to kill herself . She was left in the desert in her last moments of life when Chand found her , and she found her knight in him .

Drishti & Rhone : Drishti was born in the year 1616 in Saraland , France . She was named Tristi which means 'sadness' in Latin , a beautiful brown eyed blond who the parents couldn't afford . She could see visions of the past and future from her human life . The villagers worshiped as a Gifted Psyche , but once when she predicted the death of the Village Head-Man's Son just after his marriage the villagers feared her and thought she was a Cursed Witch so they planned to drown her in the sea to save the village from her curse . Her powers had reached the Higher Authorities years before her death and they found her half-dead , they saved her and turned into a vampire named Drishti . After that she lived with the vampires (she is 395 years old and was turned into a vampire at the age of 19) . Rhone Blake was born in some remote village in Lesie , British at the time of 3rd Civil War (360 years old) . Drish found him dead in the woods and turned into a vampire . Rhone can sense the strength of the bond in any group , he can find the lope holes and the little unknown flaws in a group may that be a family , pack or a coven both in human and super-natural . With time Abhay found his Sister's love in Drishti and Best Friend in Rhone . Drishti and Rhone are passionate lovers . This perfect love irritated Abhay he usually tells -- " William Shakespeare died and this idiotic Juliet was born .! "

Salazar : also called as the Old One . He is the red eyed vampire who is a centuries old enemy of Chand and his family .

The Denails' : this is the coldest place in Alaska where vampire Tamina lived with her two husbands Benjamin and Satan . Like Chand and his family they preferred not to take human blood but if tempted never bothered to be what they really are . Benjamin and Rhone shared a very friendly relationship .

Vampires in Seattle : Seattle is a place near the Olympic Mountains . Tanya with her sister Trimalchio ruled that area . They were human blood sucking vampires and never tolerated any-other vampire in their area .

The Dobriyal Family

Misha : The Dobriyal family's second daughter and Piya's best friend . Misha is a tomboyish candidate , in short a complete brat . She loves Piya as a sister and tries to protect her from every problem . Misha is very possessive about Piya and hates to share her with anyone .

Panchi : The Dobriyal family's elder daughter . She is a very polite , delicate and intelligent girl . She is the Mount College topper and is a Chairperson of Dramatic Society in MC . She's in a relationship with her classmate and trust's him a lot .

Madhu : Misha and Panchi's mother . A lovable lady who cares about Piya like a daughter . Piya always found a Mother in Madhu and loves her equally .

PS : (other characters will be introduced when-ever required)

Edited by Bella-Edward - 12 years ago

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Aysha

@matwamango

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Very cool. Love the sound of it already

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Reashma

@Reashma

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

oke nice. .. but i want to see more ...👍🏼

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Resh

@SheDevil

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey yaar this sounds interesting😊

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Kiran..(Kikka)

@SaJanAbhIya

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

it's sounds really interesting!!! thnx for sharing..keep it up!!!

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

I love your FF's name and the way you write it... please continue soon 😊

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Shunya

@Bella-Edward

Senior Member

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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks!
looks like i'm reasonably fine...
i'll load the script very soon...!😊

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Shunya

@Bella-Edward

Senior Member

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Posted: 12 years ago

White Snow

               It was a misty morning in Delhi . Two ladies , a young girl and an aged nun were standing in Kashmere Ghat waiting for the bus that would take the girl to Dehradun . The young girl was more that beautiful , she was pretty with a long skirt , a simple plain top , pattered gray jacket and jet black curly hair . When the bus arrived the girl introduced herself as Piya Jaiswal from Coorg . Afther thanking the nun and waving her a goodbye Piya started her journey with the raising sun .

               Piya was an orphan girl from Coorg , South India . She had spent 6 years of her life in St. Mary's Orphanage in the rainy city of Coorg , and enjoyed the droplets as beads of happiness from heaven above . Piya was born to lovable people in Indore . Sugandh Jaiswal was Piya's mother , but no matter how hard she tried she never remembered her father's name . Her parents loved each-other . Though they got very little time to spend together they used to find happiness in it . Piya knew her father loved her the most , but after some years they found it hard to answer the questions the society was posing on them . On Piya's 6th birthday her parents had a fight and her mother called it over . Piya never understood what the problem was , but when her mother told "Its Over!" and her father left , she knew it was for ever .

               After this Sugandh was everything for Piya , not only her parent but also her best friend . Sugandh used to strive hard to give Piya a happy life , but with short time she lost her health . Sugandh died out of blood cancer when Piya was 10 . Piya always remembered Sugandh's last words , she told Piya she was a very special girl , a gift of true love so where ever Piya goes she will find love there and one day her True Love - her Soul-Mate would hold Piya in his clutches . After her mother's death Piya was taken to St. Anna's Orphanage in Indore . She stayed there for a year , it was then she realized that no matter what -- she has to believe her mother's words and be happy in life .

             At the age of 11 , due to some problems in the orphanage the children were moved from Indore and Piya was taken to Coorg . Piya never feared new places so she found it easy to adjust there . This was the place where Piya found real friends . Piya was a very intelligent student . She was fond of Mother Superior in St. Mary's and always had a new question to ask . Mother called Piya not intelligent but an interesting child , she encouraged Piya's curiosity and her desire of learning new things . By winning Brockdale Scholarship Piya was offered 100% free education in 2 prominent colleges in India , Florean College - Chennai and Mount College - Dehradun . Everyone on orphanage expected Piya to select Florean as she always like the sun and hot places. Piya selected Mount College for her graduation studies . When asked she selected Dehradun which is too far from Coorg and she won't be able to come to orphanage for festivals or holidays as she won't be able to pay for the journey ; Piya tole she wished to see the snow . Piya told she was fascinated to enjoy the white snow , thus selected Mount College . But deep down Piya didn't know why she selected Dehradun , neither could she explain the pull she felt for that place .

   It was twilight and Piya knew she would be reaching Dehradun in an hour . She put her book in her bad . A silver chain with a little 'S' pendent and a purple book were Piya's only possessions . The chain was her mother's gift which also was the only souvenir of her childhood . The purple book was Piya's personal diary . Piya was not someone who preferred carrying a diary but from when she planned to reach Dehradun she got this book , to be her little friend in the new place . She named the diary Little Moon and started writing in it as if she's having a chat with a dear friend .

                   It was dark when Piya got down in the road that would lead her to Mount College and Hostel . It was an empty road by the forest with just a small tea-stall , which also had a little boy and an old man . Piya asked the boy the road to College . The boy told her it was a mile walk in the same road . Piya was tired and wanted to reach the hostel , on this the boy told there is a track in the forest which will take her to College in 15 minutes but warned her from using it . When she asked why the boy told her its dangerous to travel in the forest in the dark as these forests hald darker secrets in them . Piya took the forest track and reached the hostel . After changing for the bed Piya thought of writing in her diary before she sleeps .

Dear Moony ,
   I have reached Dehradun . I couldn't see the scenery by the forest as it was very dark . When i walked into the forest the breeze was soft but eerie around the forest . I should have been afraid but i felt at home... home at the darkness . That's very weird .

Something Awful Is Going To Happen Tonight...!

Piya didn't know why she write that . She felt a bit crazy . She stuffed the diary under her pillow and lied down to sleep .

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EyeForBeauty

@EyeForBeauty

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

very well written.loved it👍🏼keep writing n pm me😆

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