Pari, I loved both of your chapter updates. I'll first comment on the second chapter. It seemed so realistic when Shyam went to attend Khushi's call for Arnav, I was like omg he is going to find out about the challenge. Loved how Arnav is making Khushi join him on the trip or else she is fired. Her points were also correct since the contract only talks about the office. I loved how Payal helped Khushi escape from her home, I can see Payal help Khushi run away with Arnav as well.
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