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Part 12: New new new new NEW Entry!
First of all big thnk u fr wiriting sacha lamba part LOLand tht so fastEmbarrassedLOLClap
After a few minutes off struggling miss lovely finally gets off donny. 'sweetu dance karo na mere saath' she slurs drunkenly pulling Donny by the neck off his sweater. Donny removes her hand firmly and picks himself up 'no thank you ma'am.' brushing his clothes off he takes a step towards the door. Miss Lovely seizes the opportunity and holds donnys hand. She twirls herself around forcibly holding Donny's hand above her head, drunkenly spinning with great lack of skill. Donny swiftly passes on the drunken Miss Lovely to Eijoo and makes a quick exit. Saara and Garu follow. Arjun and Eijoo continue their drunken party with her
Seedha saahda donny good impressedLOL henna think once again regarding donnyLOL 
Outside Saara fans Donny with the textbook she never found any other use for. 'itni garmi kyun khaa raha hai? Teri lovely ji toh kab ki peeche choot gayi hai' she attempts to calm donny down. Donny on the other is not in the mood to listen anymore, he walks out off the college building towards his bike. Saara looks at Garu. 'uff iske saath iss mood mein koi pagal hi baitega' she sighs thinking what to do. Donny gets on his bike and pulls on his helmet hastily. 'ghar jaake sau baar shower lehna padega' he looks over to see if saara is coming. Garu signals he is dropping her. Without a second thought Donny whizzes to the college gates. As he rides through them he sees Hussain and Nits walking back towards college laughing. 'yeh chipkoo chacha ab iske saath bhi chakkar chala raha hai?!' he grits his teeth having had enough he tells himself he doesn't care and revs his bike harder and zooms off.
Ha bike ride very filmyLOLLOLhaa chakkar ShockedDay Dreaming*hussain in dreamland*
 
Hussain thanks Nits for keeping him company and cheering him up. 'mujhe koi problem hogi toh tumhare paas zaroor aaonga!' he assures her. 'main koi free therapy nahi dehti acha icecream mein payments karni zaruri hain haan?' she tries to put on the most serious face she can manage but both up laughing and hussain nods in agreement. Having had enjoyed her time with Hussain she makes her way back to the hostel to fill Verni in on all the details. Hussain slides on his helmet and gets on his bike.
My pleasure always hussainEmbarrassed just one call i am there fr u as alwaysTongueLOL *iska liya  saab free may chalaga*Wink
Saara looks at Garu who winks back at her naughtily and they both run back inside to see what has become off Miss Lovely. Eijoo and Arjun sit her on her chair and gently laying her down on her desk so that she can sleep it off. 'bechari donny ke pyaar mein kitni pagal hogayi hai' Arjun shakes his head not knowing if he should find the situation funny or not. Eijoo picks up the whiskey bottle and removes any evidence off them ever having been there. 'zyada matt soch arjun, isse bhi pata hai donny isko kabhi bhi uss nazar se nahi dekhga. She's just very lonely.' he pulls the office door shut behind him. Arjun begins to wonder why she is so lonely.
bechari  lovely ka kya haal hogya nd top of tht she lonelyOuch

Saara paces down to corridor fast just in time to see Eijoo and Arjun shutting the door. 'kya hua?' she enquires. 'passed out' Arjun replies. 'kisi ko inform karna chahiye' Garu reasons as it is their fault she is in that state. 'Tum log bahar jaake wait karo' Saara takes the initiative and walks to the staff room, she explains to the staff there that she noticed Miss Lovely passed out over her desk when she had gone to ask for some help on a certain assignment. The staff members typically not suspecting Saara because she is a girl tell her she should go home as it is getting late and that they will unfortunately have to see to her. Saara turns, her innocent expression turning into a smirk. She blows on her index finger as though it's a gun 'sab are wrapped around it ache se' she says to herself and hurries back to the boys.
my god boli bali saara too clever impressedLOL
 
Henna turns quickly, immediately recognising the voice. She urges it too be quiet and takes the person to her room quickly. 'marrwayegi yaar!' henna sighs with relief. The voice laughs, as it always does, mazze mein enjoying every bit off teasing people. 'Adee! Stop it!' Henna warns. The girl pushes her long dark, waist length hair out off her face still laughing. Stood here was the neighbourhood jasoos. 'Henna, yeh achi baat nahi hai, kabse tera wait kar rahi hoon.' Letting herself fall onto henna's bed she bounces. Henna sighs thinking about why she was late. She sets her bag down besides her desk and joins Adee. 'Bus choot gayi thi yaar. Amrit ne lift di. Waise Adee, how's your leg now?'
Here enters adi Big smile 
 
Adee looks down at it and shrugs. 'Getting better, jasoosi phir se kar sakti hoon.' She winks playfully. 'You'll never change, yeh journalism ke shauk mein hum sab ke pol khol dehgi tu!' Henna smiles happy to see Adee on the path off recovery after a major depressive episode in her life. Starting college and making a new start had meant a lot to Adee but the accident had ruined all that for her. A few weeks before college had started Adee had met with a road accident, where the driver had failed to stop leaving her seriously injured. A stranger had come to her rescue and had later visited her at the hospital. She did not remember him well because she was so drugged out and drowsy at the time, but Henna had conversed with him.
adi jugnu mama detective LOL
 
 'Doctor ne kaha hai agle week se main college shuru kar sakti hoon!' Adee grins pleased. 'That is fantastic news Adee! Amrit, Nits sabhi tujhse mil kar pagal hi hojayenge khushi se. The old gang will be back together phir se.' Henna hugs her hearing the positive news. Adee clears her throat 'ahem, waise maine jo question poocha tha uska abhi tak mujhe jawab nahi mila.' Just then Henna's mom pops in, she informs that Henna's dad and she are going out to a company event and that they'll be back late. Both girls nod and wave goodbye. It was hard for Henna and Adee to differentiate between their own parents and each others as their parents had never differentiated between the two girls. Adee was a couple of months younger than Henna and because off that she always loved acting like Henna's younger sister, to which Henna had no objection whatsoever. 'Chal dinner karte hai, phir tujhe batati hoon college mein kya tamasha chal raha hai.' Henna motions Adee to get up and come. She makes her way to the kitchen. 'Adee tumhari mom ko pata hai na ki tu idhar hai? Kahin aise hi toh nahi aagayi bin bataye?' 'subah se toh yahin hoon Henna, mom ko pata hai.' Adee follows her limping slightly, she ignores the pain as being ill or weak sickened her the most.
grt news adi recovering dinner without us verbadCryLOL
 
Leaving one off the servants to park his bike Donny hand over his helmet and walks inside. 'Donny' his mom calls. Lost in his own thoughts he walks upstairs. 'Donnyyy!' she calls louder, enough to make Donny snaps out of his thoughts. 'Ji?' he manages to answer stumbling to catch his balance from the mini shock. 'Saara kahan hai?' she enquires. 'Aa rahi hai' he shrugs and walks off. 'Haainn?' Donny's mom gasps, 'yeh ladka bhi na ek dum nalayak hai!' Donny drops his bag on his bed and goes to clean himself up. 'Inn clothes ko toh will burn' he mutters to himself. 'uski shakal ka bonfire doll will make.'
 
Saara arrives about 20 minutes later but with Eijoo. Garu like always had been sidelined as Saara had got into the car with Eijoo without a second thought. Garu had just watched her leave without saying anything. She says goodbye to Eijoo and heads inside where her mom is waiting for her. 'Saara, itni late kyun aayi ho?' she looks at her over her glasses frames not impressed. 'Mom, yeh Donny na, mujhpe gussa karke wahin mujhe chodh aaya. Bas meri chappal ghalati se ghir gayi thi. Badi mushkil se Eijoo se lift li hai.' She makes a sad victim face, smirking knowing Donny will get told off. 'Payback for subah Donny' she whispers. 'KYA?' Donny's mom gets all worked up and tells saara she won't leave Donny.
 
bechara donny have to face all scoldings fr her mummaLOL
 
Henna heats up the food her mom has left whilst Adee helps sets the table even after Henna told her not too. She brings both their plates and sits at the table with Adee. 'Acha tujhe yaad hai jab main hospital main tujhe dekhne aayi thi, college ke pehle din?' Henna begins, Adee nods taking a spoonful. 'Toh uss hussain ke bare mein bataya tha, art class wala? Subah jo ladka aaya tha wo hussain hi tha.' 'oh, kahani aage badi matlab' Adee teases. 'yehi toh problem hai adee.' Henna plays with the food on her plate. 'kaise?' Adee asks confused. Henna continues updating her on the current situation.
no eyieng at hussain Ermm
 
All clean Donny comes and sits at his table. He opens his bag to retrieve the notorious form and begins filling in it. 'Name... Student number... current class... prospective class...' Donny completes the form with ease in his keedhe makode style handwriting. He suddenly stops. 'Parental consent and sign???' He re-reads the form again in the hope that what he just read was wrong. Unfortunately it's not. Slapping his forehead he rests his elbows on his desk. 'Mere saath hi kyun aisa hota hai? Forge karun' ya poochun?.' He sits there for a while contemplating what to do. Saara walks past and tells Donny that their mom wants to see him. Sighing he gets up, he looks at the form then decides he is not a liar and that forging will only increase his problems. He folds the paper up and puts it in his pocket, in search off the correct moment to ask. He goes downstairs to see why his mom is calling him.
haa handwriting (liked they way u described it hennaLOLClap)donny sign of the form without anybody notice thab ki baath thab dhaklanga LOL
 
Adee is busy listening to the story with full expressions and reactions, occasionally adding in her philosophical pieces off advice. 'Ab amrit ko lagta hai ki Hussain mujhe pasand karta hai.' Henna finishes her tale. 'Aur tujhe kya lagta hai?' Adee asks thinking deeply about the situation. 'Pata nahi itna toh socha nahi' Henna shrugs. 'toh soch na, tujhe hussain kaisa lagta hai?' she asks impatiently almost jumping off her seat with suspense. 'He's ok.' Comes the reply. 'loh!' adee lets out, slumping back into her seat 'bas ok?' 'haan, jaise tu ok hai, amrit ok hai, waise hussain bhi ok hai.' Henna reasons not knowing herself what she is saying. 'Arre par hum ladkiyan hai, hum jaisi bhi hai use koi farkh nahi padta' Adee slaps her forehand. Henna even more confused by what Adee is trying to say stays quiet and eats her food. 'Dikhne mein toh bura nahi tha Henna, aur subah bade style se aaya tujhe lehne.' Adee attempts to ignite the situation. 'I guess' Henna says disinterested. 'toh' tu impress nahi hui?' Adee taps her nails on the table. 'Impress?' Henna almost chokes on her food. 'darr itna lag raha tha ki koi dekh na leh, impress hone ka time kahan se nikalti?' she sips some water. Adee lets out a long 'hmmm' taking in the feelings surrounding the situation. 'zyada adee baba na ban ab, dinner karle' henna says pretty hungry herself.
Amrit ko galtha lsoch rahi hiiLOL no dontt get impressed pls not so soonLOL
good philosopy adeeClap
 
Where there is peace and quite, on the other side is noise and anger. Donny is stood being told off for tanging 'poor' saara. Not a rare occurrence in Donny's life, he knew it was better to be accused off everything under the sun then to try and tell his side. Whilst his mom shouts he thinks off a scheme to get his paper signed. 'Sunn raha hai na tu Donny?' his mom roars. From disinterested Donny makes the saddest face he can manage. 'Ji mom.' Seeing this his mom also changes her tone. 'Kya hua beta?' she asks with much concern. Donny smirks knowing he's in. 'Mom aapko toh pata hi hai dad ne meri koi baat nahi sunni aur sabhi subjects apni pasand se rakhe teh.' His mom nods in agreement. 'Kya main unn mein se ek... SIRF ek nahi badal sakta?' he frowns harder. 'Ab Donny yeh toh tumhare dad hi bata sakte hai' she comforts him. 'Dad toh kabhi nahi change karne dehnge, yeh form dekhein mom bas idhar hi sign chahiye.' He fakes a sniffle. His mom looks at the signature box Donny is pointing too. 'Itna bhi nahi kar sakti kya aap mom?' Donny tries to ask with much innocence. 'Lehkin Donny tumhare dad'' Donny cuts her short. 'Mom itna toh haq hai na aapko apne bachon pe' he chucks in a few more filmy lines and she finally gives in. Eastactic he hugs her and rushes off with his entry ticket.
 good acting donny (impressedLOL)
'Henna, uss din hospital mein toh tu hussain ke bare mein badi badi achi cheezein keh rahi thi.' Adee points out. 'Uss waqt thodi na usko jaanti thi ache se adee.' She gets up n starts clearing the table. 'yeh bhi hai' adee gets up to help. Henna puts the dishes in the sink and starts to clear up whilst adee leans against the counter taking the weight off her bad leg. Tired off talking about Hussain, Henna changes the topic. 'tujhe tere mystery man ke bare mein kuch aur pata chala adee?' 'Nahi, bas wohi jo tune mujhe bataya tha' Adee says sadly.
mystery man humm (i got some hintLOL)
 
Henna slaps her forehead, 'mystery man se yaad aaya. Ek ladka ghus gaya tha humari art class mein aaj' she laughs thinking how could she forgot to tell Adee this tale. She places the wet dishes on the drying rack and dries her hands on the towel nearby. She makes Adee and herself a cup off hot chocolate and they walk back to Henna's room. 'Phir kya hua?' Adee notices Henna's sudden change in mood. 'Haan toh ma'am gayi dekhne ke kaun aur kyun aaya hai. Bohat se display rakhe hua hai wahan toh directly door nahi dekh sakte jahan hum sab baite hue teh. Toh naturally sabhi curious hogaye' Adee sips her hot chocoloate not wanting to interrupt henna at all. 'Phir wo aur ma'am aaye jahan hum sab baite hue teh, sach kahun na adee toh kaafi cool aur hot tha.' A redness flushes over Henna's cheeks as she hadn't even admitted this herself yet. 'matlab ki dono garam aur thanda tha? Tune kab usko haath lagaya?' adee jokes, and they both end up laughing. 'hatt... silly!' henna retorts turning a tamatar shade off red.
back to herself blusing tamatar styleEmbarrassedWink
 
The evening passes by quickly and yet again Donny is in another problem. He has checked everywhere on his desk for Amrit's notes but hasn't managed to find it. 'Yeh mere saath hi kyun hota hai?' Donny tuts thinking where the paper could have gone.
problem is ur close friend donny isliya it follows u humasha ki tharaLOL
 
Nits is busy telling Verni about her unofficial icecream date with Hussain making her very jealous and wish that it had been her who had just by chance walked past at the right time. Hussain on the other hand is sat in his room on his bed, looking at the canvas he'd been working on the pervious night. He thinks how to resolve the problem between Henna and himself.
haa verni it was to goodBroken Heartmera dil ki thukuda hogaya nahi hussainOuchLOL
 
Amrit, who has just had dinner, settles down in front off the TV to watch a movie gets a unexpected call.
Kiska phone hoga humm thinkingD'oh
 
Will problems ever stop following Donny? Is Henna completely impressed by Donny's first appearance? What will Adee Baba conclude? Who's calling Amrit?

cont soon henna it was really lovely haa everyones life moving EmbarrassedClap cont soonBig smile



Edited by preethi - 23 September 2011 at 12:41pm
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@henna, amrit...I'll comment kal aaraam se. Abhay...oops! Mystery man ke baare mein soch ke khush ho rahi hoon. ;)
 
 
@Nitz...happyyy birthday!!! <3
 
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@adi:thnks a lotHug kounsa mystery man haaa me to waiting

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Me updated comments. :D
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Lol..I was packing kal ko Amrit. :P Aaj in delhi - roaming pe online...kal dad got me a new connection n said apna lappy pack kar you're not going to use mine. Ab faayeda uthaaying. ;)
 
 
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@amu:where r HD on holiday ?
@adi:good to hear tht adee
delhi kis kushi may?

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