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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jungli Billi

Recap: Donny has discovered Henna's art class accidently and is trying his best to get official admission into that class. Unfortunately things do not seem to be going his way thus far.

Part 11: Kali ko karo talli
Yeah. Kali. :| I thought Hussain doing Henna ko talli then maar kha kar kahin par falling. LOL

 He strides to and fro thinking vigourously with his tiny brain breaking every speed limit it has ever reached.
Hussain is sooo chaalu!!! Angry Achha kiya Henna ne jo left him. Badtameez ganda ladka! AngryAngry
Amrit in the library? ShockedShockedShocked
Bataao...ab Nits ke peechhe. *rolls eyes* Kitna ganda hai Hussain! Angry
 Saara determined follows at a distance too. 'hunh! Main kyun peeche rahun? mujhe bhi dekhna hai'
Rofl!!! Chhota baccha hai..."mujhe bhi dekhna hai." LOLLOL
It's been a few minutes since Donny and gang had managed to evade teachers and cleaning staff to reach Miss Lovely's office. Donny is inside searching desperately for the paper whilst eijoo is on watch just outside the door. Arjun and Garu are stood at opposite ends off the corridor ready to signal if they see Miss Lovely approaching.Donny scrumages around. 'shukar hai yahan nahi thi warna plan B adopt karna padta' he cringes at the thought. 'yeh college meri izzat loot ke hi rahega!'
Haaye bechaara Donny...izzat hi lutti rehti hai iski. ROFL
Amrit and henna walk out off the library and make their way towards the canteen. Amrit gives henna a moment to think and get over the denial that hussain just wants to be friends. 'shayad maine hi usse wrong signal  diye hai' she looks at Amrit confused. 'ab woh kaise?' Amrit waits for a full explanation. They get something to drink and find a comfortable place to sit in the completely vacant canteen. 'kyunki pehle din maine hi hussain ko bola tha ' Hi! Kya main tumhari partner ban sakti hoon' henna sighs. 'yeh kab bola tha tumne?' Amrit gasps almost choking on her drink. 'arre art class mein na jab partners ko draw karna tha, paas mein hussain hi toh baita tha, toh usse pooch liya' she replies deep in thought trying to connect the dots. 'Acha aur tumhe Lagta hai tumhare yeh kehne se woh lattu hogaya?' sarcasm rings in Amrits voice. 'Usne meri baat ka ghalat matlab nikal liya na' henna continues not noticing Amrits tone.
ROFL Waise guys don't need aisi lines bhi to go after a girl. *rolls eyes*
Saara is busy talking to Garu. Both are stood at the corner off the corridor with Garu slouching in style against the wall, his hands dug deep into his jean pockets. Eijoo is watching them from a distance eagle-eyed. 'mujhe hamesha se hi maloom tha yeh Saara ke peeche pada hua hai' he mutters as he watches. Arjun bored curls his hands and pretends to be holding binoculars, playing his own zoom in zoom out game. 'Uh oh!' He turns around and starts singing 'Donny ki jawaani, dian lootne wali'

Meanwhile Nits enjoys the khulfi hussain has brought her chatting endlessly to him. Glumly hussain converses with her in a polite fashion. A thought flashes before him all off a sudden 'yeh bhi kahin mujse upset na jo jaaye!' He quickly smiles as he listens attentively to what Nits is telling him seeing that he can't have another girl upset with him.
'oh hello eijaz' Miss Lovely batts her eyelashes. 'Eijaz!' Donny puts his hands over his mouth to stop his laughter. Donny hadn't heard anyone call Eijoo by his full name as far as he could remember. Donny had known eijoo all his life and it was he who had named Eijaz 'Eijoo' as he was unable to pronounce Eijaz in his earlier years. Donny dives under Miss Lovely's table for cover. 'Loot loh eijoo ki izzat woh toh waise hi luttata phirta hai' he giggles with joy because for once it's not him being harassed. 'ji ma'am aap hi ka wait kar raha tha' he says with much charm. 'oh why why?' she batters her already very battered eyelashes at him.
ROFL Can imagine half her eyelashes falling off! ROFL

 Donny holds his head thinking this is gonna go on now for quite some time he buries his head in his arms and sits tightly squashed in the small space under Miss Lovely's table.
Awww...poor Donny!Cry
Miss lovely is jumping with joy 'Main Donny ke ghar jaake uske parents se baat karun?' she asks eijaz without hearing a single thing further about this proposal. The three jokers standing in the doorway burst out laughing whilst Donny's jaw drops to the floor. Eijoo chuckles 'nahi ma'am waisa proposal nahi hai' the Laddoo inside her stop phutting all off a sudden. 'phir kaisa proposal laaye ho eijaz?' she gives eijoo a very confused look. 'Actually ma'am Donny ne kaha tha ki baat batane se pehle main aapko yeh gift doon' he removes a bottle of very mature whiskey from his bag. It was a really strong and expensive brew one off the finest amongst Donny's father's collection. Saara gasped recognising the bottle. 'Donny, you chor!!!' She whispers as quietly as possible. Donny rustles his hand through his hair thinking that's a bottle gone to total waste.
@bold... ROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dost bhi waise kameene hain Donny ke...maze se drinking. LOL
 Just as she takes a step towards her room an angry voice comes booming behind her. 'kaun tha woh?' it demands. Wide-eyed henna stops in her tracks.

Will poor Donny survive the elephant on his back? Nopes.
Or will she crumple him? 200 of 206 bones will get broken.
Will Henna overcome the trouble on the horizon for her? Not until she marries Donny, no. LOL
Awesome part just waiting for me!!LOLLOLLOL
Love all the detailed description, scene by scene...and yet the action is fast-paced! ClapClapClap And I loved Hussain ki haalat. MUHAHAHA!!!

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 6:14pm | IP Logged
lovely part henna haa henna thinking hussean taking  advantageLOL
haa kulfi tht to frm hussainDay Dreaming*kash saach hojayi*
next part waiting fr adis entry

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jungli Billi

hey guys how r u all? not getting much time to come online these days.. Ouch so mini update off what's going on in ur lifes at the moment would be nice as always :D

adee how's hawbhay? still into him?

nits... uff u watching the mess they have made off geet? *rolls eyes*

any news on my mommy?
good to hear everything is fine with u
yaa they messed up a lot with geet dont know wht they r showing
@donny:good to seeBig smile and akpi dhurshan hothi raha aga bhiLOL
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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 4:23pm | IP Logged

good to see u her amu

so how r things going in ur side

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 7:00am | IP Logged
yayyy seeing as everyone has read this part in like full speed.. LOL i'm gonna post up the next part...

read all ur comments btw... will just reply to them!

Edited by Jungli Billi - 21 September 2011 at 7:24am
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maaahiii...mahi ve mahi...mahi ve...LOL

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