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Hey Hennu!! *hugs* Missed you yaar. How's univ going?
 
@Abhay..yeah...very much into him. He's still my one and only. :"> And last week he wore a red shirt for a few seconds...haaye...my heart...!! <3
 
Amrit had to travel home aaj..n kal was busy with work. I was giving her match ki commentary. :P
 
 

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Originally posted by amail1601

Hey Hennu!! *hugs* Missed you yaar. How's univ going?

aww misssing u guys  too yaar! Hug uni is going good... first week has been better than expected ppl behaving like normal humans rather than snobs... so i am thankful to watever transformation they have undergone over the summer. Dunno how long it will last tho...
 
@Abhay..yeah...very much into him. He's still my one and only. :"> And last week he wore a red shirt for a few seconds...haaye...my heart...!! <3

LOL good good i still have a (future) brother in law jo is so strong and has sonic speed..LOL

 
Amrit had to travel home aaj..n kal was busy with work. I was giving her match ki commentary. :P
 
 


ohho... my mommy na.. will never leave these cricketers even after breaking so many off their hearts..LOL u guys won the match kya?

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Recap: Donny has discovered Henna's art class accidently and is trying his best to get official admission into that class. Unfortunately things do not seem to be going his way thus far.

Part 11: Kali ko karo talli

Donny is left standing outside of the administration office. Desperate, he tugs his short black hair trying to think of some way to get enrolled into the art class. 'New form toh milne se raha, ab Miss Lovely se hi purane wala waapis lehna hoga' he sighs not believing how quickly his good luck turned sour. He strides to and fro thinking vigourously with his tiny brain breaking every speed limit it has ever reached.
 
Outside at the bike stand, Henna is stood conversing with Hussain. 'Acha Hussain, main chalti hoon warna meri bus miss ho jayegi' she turns to leave but hussain runs in front of her. 'Arre par mere bike pe bohat jugah hai. Tum kyun uss purani gandi si bus mein jaogi?' He smiles knowing he has a valid point. The bus was far from hygienic, it was overcrowded carrying way more passengers than legally permitted and immensely noisy with chatter. In short it was enough to make anyone feel nauseous and drive them crazy with a throbbing headache. Calmly Henna moves Hussains out off her path. 'kyunki main roz jaati hoon.' She shrugs not knowing exactly how to answer his question. He frowns as the feeling off rejection begins to overshadow him. Henna can't help but notice his desperation. 'Thanks but mujhe aaj lift ki zarurat nahi hai. Hogi toh zarur poochungi, acha?!'she adjusts the strap off her bag back over her shoulder and takes a step away from him hope that explanation is enough to solve the problem.
 
Hussain gently holds her arms and swivels her around diverting her attention from the bus. 'Acha baat toh suno na' he says softly. 'Jaldi karo na Hussain bus nikalne wali hogi!' she looks at her watch to see how fine she is already cutting it. Hussain watches with pleasure as the bus drives off behind henna. 'Haan toh main yeh keh raha tha ki, tum icecream khaogi?' Henna looks at him a little annoyed but replies courteously. 'Nahi aaj mujhe jaldi ghar jaana hai aur bohat se kaam pending pade hai.' 'Acha' Hussain replies with a smile. Henna glances over to look at the bus, but to her surprise it is not there. Realising what just happened she closes her mouth and turns back to hussain in fury.
 
Donny is busy on his phone, Saara sees him in the corridor so approaches him. He motions her to wait but saara being her loving self interrupts him anyway. 'tumhe kabse dhoond rahi hoon, ghar nahi jaana aaj Donny?' He looks at her and answers 'abhi nahi' and continues his conversation. 'Phir kab?' saara persists. Sighing Donny cuts his call short and looks at saara. 'Abhi mujhe kuch kaam hai, main baad mein aaonga. Tumhe jaana hai toh jao.' He walks off.
 
Annoyed henna moves away from hussain. 'This is not funny! ab main ghar kaise jaongi?' she says almost screaming. Hussain motions her to come sit on the seat behind him, patting it gently. 'Argghh!' is all henna manages to say in frustration. 'Henna please bura matt maano na, abhi ke liye aa jao.' He rolls his bike forwards a little trying his luck. Henna gives him a stern look. 'mujhe zabardasti pasand nahi hai.' Snaps Henna. She leaves hussain and heads back towards the college building. 'Oh god!' Hussain sighs to himself realising he's pushed henna too far.
 
Henna takes out her phone and calls Amrit. It was an old habit off Amrits; she'd sneak to the library at the end off the day to use the computers in the library. The net at home always frustrated her and her brother did nothing considered less then invading her privacy. Using the library computers was always a safer bet for her. Busy typing away Amrit glances over at the flashing screen on her phone. Glad she rembered to put it on silent mode she looks over to see where the librarian is. 'ufff yahan se toh woh mujhe dekh lehgi' moving the keyboard aside Amrit picks her phone up and dives behind the nearest bookshelf for cover. 'hello' she whispers as quietly as possible. Barely able to make out the voice henna replies 'hi Amrit, kya tum abhi tak college mein hi ho' 'yes' Amrit whispers keeping her reply as short as possible. 'tum itna dheere dheere kyun bol rahi ho?' 'library mein hoon' Amrit looks left and right to make sure the librarian hasn't spotted her. 'acha main wahin aati hoon' she hangs up and increases her speed briskly making her way to the library.
 
Hussain watches her walk away. 'I'm sorry na' he calls out. Doubtful henna heard he thinks to himself. 'Shayad apne boyfriend se baat kar rahi hai, ussi se lift lehgi' He feels angry at himself for blowing it and also extremely jealous at the same time. Nits walk past, on her way back to the hostel. 'Hussain!' she calls out. 'Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho ab tak?' she enquires. 'ice cream khaa raha hoon' he retorts sarcastically still lost in his thoughts. 'kya?' Nits looks at him confused. Hussain snaps out off it. kuch nahi icecream khaogi Nits?' 'Ofcourse.' Nit's tired face lights up. Hussain smiles seeing the change in expression. 'chalo koi toh humse khush hua' he walks with nits to the icecream parlour a short walk from the college worried still.
 
Donny and his gang soon finish discussing how they are to go about completing their mission. 'samjh gaye na sabhi?' Donny clarifies. Saara speaks up 'Maine kya karna hai yeh toh tum batana bhool gaye!' she looks at Donny in confusion. 'Thats because you're not part off the plan saara. khudi u came along - uninvited.' he looks at her with suspicion. 'Arre main toh apne bhai ki help karne aayi thi' she makes a sad dejected face. Donny ignores her and together with eijoo, arjun and Garu he makes his way cautiously across the corridor. Saara determined follows at a distance too. 'hunh! Main kyun peeche rahun? mujhe bhi dekhna hai'
 
Henna comes and sits on the computer besides Amrit. 'uff I could kill that hussain.' she mutters resting her bag on her lap. Amrit turns to her 'Henna aaj tum toh ghar jaldi jaane wali thi na?' 'pooch mutt yaar sab mere plans kharab kar diya hussain ne' she explains her version off what's been happening. 'He likes you.' Amrit replies sternly. She looks back at the computer screen letting henna digest the information for a few seconds. 'like????' henna says loudly unable to control her reaction. The librarian looks over and clears her throat indicating henna and amrit to either pipe down or move their conversation elsewhere.
 
It's been a few minutes since Donny and gang had managed to evade teachers and cleaning staff to reach Miss Lovely's office. Donny is inside searching desperately for the paper whilst eijoo is on watch just outside the door. Arjun and Garu are stood at opposite ends off the corridor ready to signal if they see Miss Lovely approaching.Donny scrumages around. 'shukar hai yahan nahi thi warna plan B adopt karna padta' he cringes at the thought. 'yeh college meri izzat loot ke hi rahega!'
 
Amrit and henna walk out off the library and make their way towards the canteen. Amrit gives henna a moment to think and get over the denial that hussain just wants to be friends. 'shayad maine hi usse wrong signal  diye hai' she looks at Amrit confused. 'ab woh kaise?' Amrit waits for a full explanation. They get something to drink and find a comfortable place to sit in the completely vacant canteen. 'kyunki pehle din maine hi hussain ko bola tha ' Hi! Kya main tumhari partner ban sakti hoon' henna sighs. 'yeh kab bola tha tumne?' Amrit gasps almost choking on her drink. 'arre art class mein na jab partners ko draw karna tha, paas mein hussain hi toh baita tha, toh usse pooch liya' she replies deep in thought trying to connect the dots. 'Acha aur tumhe Lagta hai tumhare yeh kehne se woh lattu hogaya?' sarcasm rings in Amrits voice. 'Usne meri baat ka ghalat matlab nikal liya na' henna continues not noticing Amrits tone.
 
Saara is busy talking to Garu. Both are stood at the corner off the corridor with Garu slouching in style against the wall, his hands dug deep into his jean pockets. Eijoo is watching them from a distance eagle-eyed. 'mujhe hamesha se hi maloom tha yeh Saara ke peeche pada hua hai' he mutters as he watches. Arjun bored curls his hands and pretends to be holding binoculars, playing his own zoom in zoom out game. 'Uh oh!' He turns around and starts singing 'Donny ki jawaani, dian lootne wali'

Eijoo chuckles at the choice off song. He calls Donny to get out off there. 'Donny chal na arjun signal deh raha hai!' 'Eijoo bas ek min shayad iss locked drawer mein shayad ho' donny tries finding the key. 'arre rehne de donny!!!' eijoo glances back down the corridor and knows it's too late Miss Lovely is already half way down the corridor. 'hide! aagayi hai, mujhe faltoo mein phasa diya' Eijoo grits his teeth and quickly closes the office door. 'kahan hide karun ab main?' Donny looks around. Miss Lovely sees eijoo waiting outside her office and changes her chaal all off a sudden 'ufff sweetu na sahi toh yeh hot-tu hi chalega' being her desperate self she hurries to Eijoo.
 
Amrits phone rings. 'ji papa coming coming.' she hangs up. 'Chalo henna tumhe ghar drop kar dehti hoon. Papa bahar wait kar rahe hai' she picks her bag up. 'Thanks Amrit, Soch hi rahi thi aaj ghar chal kar hi jaana padega no thanks to hussain.' Relieving the frown on her face henna follows Amrit.
 
Meanwhile Nits enjoys the khulfi hussain has brought her chatting endlessly to him. Glumly hussain converses with her in a polite fashion. A thought flashes before him all off a sudden 'yeh bhi kahin mujse upset na jo jaaye!' He quickly smiles as he listens attentively to what Nits is telling him seeing that he can't have another girl upset with him.
 
'oh hello eijaz' Miss Lovely batts her eyelashes. 'Eijaz!' Donny puts his hands over his mouth to stop his laughter. Donny hadn't heard anyone call Eijoo by his full name as far as he could remember. Donny had known eijoo all his life and it was he who had named Eijaz 'Eijoo' as he was unable to pronounce Eijaz in his earlier years. Donny dives under Miss Lovely's table for cover. 'Loot loh eijoo ki izzat woh toh waise hi luttata phirta hai' he giggles with joy because for once it's not him being harassed. 'ji ma'am aap hi ka wait kar raha tha' he says with much charm. 'oh why why?' she batters her already very battered eyelashes at him.

He casually leans his back against her office door. 'proposal laaya hoon aapke liye' he continues. Donny on all fours readjusts his position leaning his ear closer to hear what eijoo is saying, as he does so his hand glides past a paper already on the floor. He glances at it. 'arre ma'am aur kiska proposal laonga aapke liye. Donny ka hi' eijoo smiles a mischievous smiles. 'kyaaa?' Miss Lovely manages to reply almost fainting. 'What!' donny screams in a quite whisper as he bangs his head against the table in a hurry to make an escape. He grabs the paper that brushed his hand 'mil gaya yeh eijoo mujhe fazool mein baich raha hai' he looks around the room and spots a small window. 'yahan se khood jaonga lehkin is aunty ko paas nahi aane dunga' he tugs ferociously at the window.

Just then the office door opens and donny dives under the table. Miss lovely and eijoo come inside. Donny motions to eijoo that he has the paper and to not proceed with their plan. Eijoo not noticing Donny's gestures continues. It's not long before Arjun, Saara and Garu are stood peeping into the office. Donny holds his head thinking this is gonna go on now for quite some time he buries his head in his arms and sits tightly squashed in the small space under Miss Lovely's table.
 
Miss lovely is jumping with joy 'Main Donny ke ghar jaake uske parents se baat karun?' she asks eijaz without hearing a single thing further about this proposal. The three jokers standing in the doorway burst out laughing whilst Donny's jaw drops to the floor. Eijoo chuckles 'nahi ma'am waisa proposal nahi hai' the Laddoo inside her stop phutting all off a sudden. 'phir kaisa proposal laaye ho eijaz?' she gives eijoo a very confused look. 'Actually ma'am Donny ne kaha tha ki baat batane se pehle main aapko yeh gift doon' he removes a bottle of very mature whiskey from his bag. It was a really strong and expensive brew one off the finest amongst Donny's father's collection. Saara gasped recognising the bottle. 'Donny, you chor!!!' She whispers as quietly as possible. Donny rustles his hand through his hair thinking that's a bottle gone to total waste.
 
Miss Lovely's eyes are fixed completely on the bottle. It was a well known fact around the college that Miss Lovely was not one that could hold her drink particularly well. Many students had talked about the scenes she had created at college events and parties over the years. If these rumours were anything to go by this plan was bound to work for sure. Eijoo pours a bit into a plastic cup and hands it over to miss lovely. After slight hesitating she extends her arm and accepts the glass. Eijoo not holding back pours some for himself. He knew the quality off the alcohol on offer here and he was not going to miss out regardless off whom accompanied him in drinking.
 
'Haan toh kya Baat thi eijaz?' Miss Lovely asks highly intrigued by the words that have been coming out of eijoo's mouth. 'ma'am ab baaton mein kya rakha hai aap donny ka gift enjoy kijiye na' he tops up her glass  again and again enjoying the quiet swig here and there himself.
'puri pee jayegi yeh toh pyaasi behns' Donny rolls his head back trying to shake off the cramps in his neck from sitting snugly compressed against the sides of the table.
 
Henna arrives outside her house. She thanks Amrit's dad for the ride home and the lively chatter it had really helped divert her attention. Henna had always been fond off his talks especially his tips on how to dodge the bullet, in other words his wife. She waves to Amrit and gestures she will call her later on to continue the conversation they were having earlier. Amrits waves back in mutual agreement as she and her dad set off. Smiling henna turns and heads inside.
 
By now Arjun, Garu and Saara have joined in the mini party. Donny observes them, gritting his teeth. 'yeh log toh iss 'Unlovely' ke hi dost lag rahe hai' Miss Lovely is the centre off attention singing love songs about Donny whilst the others mock her drunkenness and laugh helplessly. It's not long before Eijoo and Garu hoist Miss Lovely up onto her desk and she dances, swaying without rhythm. Unable to bare the ruthless banging off her heels over his head, Donny plans his escape. He gets on all fours and attempts to literally crawl out of the problem. Just as he nears the door Garu nudges Saara. 'Dekho donny ki halat' he urges her bursting into laughter. As soon as he does so he realises that was a bad move as all eyes are now on donny and Donny's eyes are firmly fixed on Garu - full off anger. 'Oops' Garu gulps trying to fade into the background. Before Donny can say anything to Garu, Miss lovely is already sitting on top off donny. He tries his best not to buckle under her weight. Donny looks on unimpressed by the turn off events.
 
Henna walks inside shutting the front door firmly behind her. 'Atleast hussain se toh jaan chooti!' she sighs relieved that she didn't let him force his way into dropping her home. Henna wasn't a person that liked accepting favours from other people let alone forceful favours. She liked being very independent. Just as she takes a step towards her room an angry voice comes booming behind her. 'kaun tha woh?' it demands. Wide-eyed henna stops in her tracks.

Will poor Donny survive the elephant on his back? Or will she crumple him? Will Henna overcome the trouble on the horizon for her?



Edited by Jungli Billi - 18 September 2011 at 6:50am

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jungli Billi

Originally posted by amail1601

Hey Hennu!! *hugs* Missed you yaar. How's univ going?

aww misssing u guys  too yaar! Hug uni is going good... first week has been better than expected ppl behaving like normal humans rather than snobs... so i am thankful to watever transformation they have undergone over the summer. Dunno how long it will last tho...
 
Awwwie!! Hug Hope it lasts!!
 
@Abhay..yeah...very much into him. He's still my one and only. :"> And last week he wore a red shirt for a few seconds...haaye...my heart...!! <3

LOL good good i still have a (future) brother in law jo is so strong and has sonic speed..LOL

 LOLLOLYeah...n who looks awesome in a scarlet/vermillion shirt. Just saw that scene abhi. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
Amrit had to travel home aaj..n kal was busy with work. I was giving her match ki commentary. :P
 
 


ohho... my mommy na.. will never leave these cricketers even after breaking so many off their hearts..LOL u guys won the match kya?
LOLLOLNaah...lost. But yesterday waala was very well played. Ex-paa ne bhi kamaal kiya. :D

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ohhh might re-capture mommy's heart aise toh.. LOL

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Reserve? Me going on refreshing the page FF ki ummeed mein. ROFL

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still writing it... but will post it so far... LOL don't want u to die waiting.. LOL

edit: posted the complete Part 11.


Edited by Jungli Billi - 18 September 2011 at 6:10am

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Ya toh my reading speed has increased ya phir you write chota henna..;;)

But still mazza aaya padhne ka. Big smile

Liked the turn of events with Hussain LOL i wish he does saare woh kaam jo henna dislikes and comes in bad books ;;)

Aur yeh Miss Lovely ko na donny se durr rehna chaiye :-w n college mein daroo?Shocked agar sab pakade gaye toh expelled Shocked kuch zyada hi hogaya but then that means trouble awaits Donny and Gang.

Thank u for keeping Saara a lil polite in this part ;;) n Eijoo better stop drinking habits...sharaabi ppl Saara doesn't like :-w Garu ki na aaj hi new pic i saw wen u described his lean against wall na cud imagine how cute he wud hv seemed Blushing

Huggie for Amrit LOL...for making Henna realise facts...soon she will make henna realise she's falling for donny ;;) good good.

And Nits Didi ki Eid Diwali Christmas sab hogayi...Hu ke saath having Kulfi akele akele..Wink

Next part mein ab Henna Donny ki baat shaat bhi karwa dehna...;;)

Post next part soon Blushing


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