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ARHI FF- Judayaian updated pg 18! (Page 8)

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
awesome

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Jiwan08

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged

Hey great update!! loved it.

But there's a blooper in te ff
 

"Wait...what?! Maan exclaimed. "Security guard? Bullying a kid? Have you lost your mind? Instead of thanking me for getting your handbag back you're shouting at me and insulting me?!"

 

"Hold it," Payal piped in before Geet could start again. "You're the security guard that helped get our handbags back?"

You forgot to change maan to arnav and Geet to Khushi

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Hey Jiwan.
Nice update dear. I loved Arnav's reaction on seeing Khushi!!! Looking forward to their future encounters.
As for the title (you mentioned it in the PM), I think its good...a bit sad sounding, but interesting nonetheless. I say sad because separation is never happy and is usually connected with heart ache!!! But as I said, it is interesting, because it got people reading it!!!
Thanks for the PM dear and update the next part soon!!!
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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Loved the update:D:D
khushi so shocked!!
LOOL...security guard??
loved it:D:D
continue soon:D:D
the name is good:D:D
thanks for the pm:D

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
Awww that was amazing.

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
Wow, Payal is Arnav's sister? What?? But good track.. Continue soon.

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
i seriously loved ur update.Heart
plz do continue soon.as for the title , i think it is very  suitable to the story.
raunika

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Posted: 13 August 2011 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
really nice update. plz add me in ur pm list.

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