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Ameres

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Posted: 31 August 2011 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aish_punk

hey, nicely written!
 
she was finding it hard to forget him, but the way he told her that it was all a mistake, she knew that she was pining for something that would never happen.
 
so this meeting will help her let go of the past, and she can move on in life, and not think that something could've happened.
 
do write more

Thank you so much! Big smile

Yes! You have got right there. Exactly what I was trying to say that the girl finally let go of the past. The baggage she was carrying was suddenly lighter and she could travel faster. 

Thanks again for reading and commenting. :)

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Posted: 19 October 2011 at 8:32am | IP Logged
i so loved this!! :) i could relate to the situation myself, and the feelings, and stuff are beautifully described. . reallly heart touching :)

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Posted: 28 October 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pluks

i so loved this!! :) i could relate to the situation myself, and the feelings, and stuff are beautifully described. . reallly heart touching :)

Ah! It always feels good to read nice things about oneself. :D

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you were able to connect with what i wrote. Just makes me really happy! Embarrassed
Thanks again! :))

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Posted: 01 November 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged
Excellent work Anu will be keeping an eye open on this one

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
your writing is very beautiful!!  it didn't some kind of great ending like the two of them making up and realizing their love. she just.. walked out. i liked how you took a simple situation and turned it into something real and emotional.

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Posted: 12 November 2011 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snitchseeker

Excellent work Anu will be keeping an eye open on this one

Thank you so much Snigdha for the encouraging words. Unfortunately i wont be continuing this one. Its only a one shot. But thanks for reading and commenting. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 12 November 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by *Nishi*

your writing is very beautiful!!  it didn't some kind of great ending like the two of them making up and realizing their love. she just.. walked out. i liked how you took a simple situation and turned it into something real and emotional.

Thank youuu! Big smile

Yes she just walked out in the end because there wasnt any love between them to start with so realization hona was out of question. She thought she liked him more than a friend but for the boy there was...nothing. 

Thanks again! I'm glad you could feel the emotions. Always feels great to read such encouraging comments. Embarrassed

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