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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 7:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amail1601

That was beautiful Anu! You are really good at expressing emotions - that's your strong point. Will give a more detailed analysis later. :)
 
 
 
Thanks girl! Big smile
 
Yup im realizing that too. I suck at making up stories. LOL
 
Thank you! will be waiting. :)

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Originally posted by amail1601

That was beautiful Anu! You are really good at expressing emotions - that's your strong point. Will give a more detailed analysis later. :)



Thanksgirl! Big smile


Yup im realizing that too. I suck at making up stories. LOL


Thank you! will be waiting. :)


oye tere reading skills bahut poor hain - especially if it is about your genuine praise hee hee. Okay let me translate it for you - She is praising you for your strong point and you are not reading that lolz.

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Posted: 27 June 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ritzie

Originally posted by sugaryanu

Originally posted by amail1601

That was beautiful Anu! You are really good at expressing emotions - that's your strong point. Will give a more detailed analysis later. :)



Thanksgirl! Big smile


Yup im realizing that too. I suck at making up stories. LOL


Thank you! will be waiting. :)


oye tere reading skills bahut poor hain - especially if it is about your genuine praise hee hee. Okay let me translate it for you - She is praising you for your strong point and you are not reading that lolz.
 
LOL! I know. Yahi tu kaha ke im realizing that im good at describing emotions.
 
The story making part was...woh isliye kaha ke thats another area of writing where im not good. Avein likh diya tha. And made a 'LOL' too in the end! :P

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Posted: 10 August 2011 at 12:13am | IP Logged
It was really nice and touching. Felt bad for the female persona, guess that's what happens in life. Some things are taken too seriously when they shouldn't be. You are an awesome writer, i could really picturize the entire scene happening before my eyes! Wonderful job! :)

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Posted: 14 August 2011 at 10:26am | IP Logged
I love your writing! 

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Posted: 28 August 2011 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by stargaze94

It was really nice and touching. Felt bad for the female persona, guess that's what happens in life. Some things are taken too seriously when they shouldn't be. You are an awesome writer, i could really picturize the entire scene happening before my eyes! Wonderful job! :)

Wow! Thank you so much.
I never really expected any more comments here so hardly checked out my post. But...thanks a lot for reading and commenting. Really encouraging. Embarrassed

As for the story. I know. Its inspired from real life so yes aisa hota hai. We know that somethings aren't meant to be but still our silly heart refuses to believe so. 

Well, thanks again. =)

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Posted: 28 August 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bidz_Nivi

I love your writing! 

And I love you for this comment! Thanks a lot buddy! Hug

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Posted: 31 August 2011 at 5:18am | IP Logged
hey, nicely written!
 
she was finding it hard to forget him, but the way he told her that it was all a mistake, she knew that she was pining for something that would never happen.
 
so this meeting will help her let go of the past, and she can move on in life, and not think that something could've happened.
 
do write more

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