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Posted: 30 June 2011 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Lovely update Kanky. I told you in my previous comment also that this makes a very good read. I love the equation between the leads. It's awesome.
 
Very well written & very gripping.
 
Continue soon. :-)

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Posted: 30 June 2011 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
I don't have much to say about this part, simply because the humorous and the light-hearted context makes me giggle silently. I'm taking your suggestion, and I hope I can complete that little one-shot. Then again, my procrastination will overpower it. I don't have much to say this time around, but I'm sure it won't be next time.

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Posted: 01 July 2011 at 4:24pm | IP Logged
R: for True Affair!  Wink

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Posted: 01 July 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
THANKS.. for the PM Kanky..

This is an awesome piece of work by you! I would love to read it further..

Karan and Amaira seem to be enemy-friends.. I am sort of confused!
Can you do me a favor, just post a CS or something like which clears out all the roles and characters..

Nice use of vocabulary! I am galvanized.. You are a superb writer.. Thanks a ton for the PMs!

I am so sorry that I did not comment earlier when you posted Chapter One!
I was quite busy.. I had not even read the part and forget to reserve too.. I just read both Chapter One and Chapter Two right now!

The concept sounded fresh and new to me so I liked the PM tab and I am truly very glad I did so..

Awesome adaptation of Pride and Prejudice! I am currently in the process of reading that book too. This one sounds cool and new!

Kunal is Amaira's brother? I could not understand that part. I would be humbled if you would post a Character's Sketch. The part was a little confusing too!

Kanky, we have a new and awesome Short Story here and I would love to read it further!

It is wonderfully executed and I could gather up the words, just that the Characters sound confusing..

Thanks a lot for the PM and So Sorry for not commenting earlier.. Will try and comment on every update!

Continue Soon and Do PM me..

Best Wishes..

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Posted: 02 July 2011 at 12:23am | IP Logged
Full 2 DAYS late i am...Stern Smile

anyways...Loved this update Kanks...i loved Karan especially.and guess what girl-i had to read it twice to get the words etched in my mind properlyLOL.But,oh..that is my weakness.. Nevertheless-ur choice of words and the sarcastic humor u make your leads use is awesome..works amazingly for the story i must say..

continue soon..Thumbs Up

Debzy...Smile

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Posted: 02 July 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
wonderful kanks !! .. i need to read very carefully to understand!! .. Embarrassed ..

but it is worth it! ,, the equation in leads and the tight humour u weave in is amazing! .. enjoyed reading it .. update soon! ..

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Posted: 02 July 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged
Okay K, I apologise. I need my head to read this, and i don't usually have it with me every time.

So, i finally read it, and uhm , what do I say except for the fact that i liked it.

Karan intrigued me more in this chapter, I got to see much more than a guy-fascinated-with-rubber-bands. I could probably even say this i-like-to-be-alone mood swing of his relates him To Darcy.

Amaira is different here than the last chapter, I'd say. But then again, its good to have a little bitchiness.

I likey.

Continue soon.

Love,
A!

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