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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aamina1010

Wow sunayna. It is hard to believe this is your first time!! It was so romantic I could just picture the whole scene.
Please continue. Expecting more scenes from you.


Thank u for liking it, ur scene gave me inspiration, was waiting for urs and the ff's ud miss ccbm a lot. So gave this a try.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandy_nivren

omg that was soo romantic 😍pls continue soon dear


Thank u, I am glad u enjoyed it sweetie.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: daffodils06

wow..dat was so cute...


Thnx Jez
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Posted: 12 years ago
                         Love and Loss

Viren removed his hand from Nivis eyes. She looked at the scene before her eyes, gazebo looked Butiful with hanging flowering pots and big pots filled with flowering vines and tree. Table was filled with different chats and sweets with a vase of red roses, she looked up at Viren who looked happy and his eyes filled with luv.
Nivi asked " yeh kya hai Viren"
Viren replied " mein apni patni ke Saath kuch waqt beeth jaa rha houn"
At that time Nandu came with a tray of tea, placed it on the table and left.
Viren looked at Nivi and said " shuru kare".
Nivi saw there was rabdi and hot jelebis and she smiled remebering that she had said today afternoon to Vandana chachi she felt like eating them.
Viren and Nivi fed each other, Viren looked at Nivi she was trying to put everything back to take it inside. Her cheeks had a natural flush, she looked happy and content. Viren took her hand said " pls meri Saath bait jaoo, nivi looked at him and smiled he was looking cute making those eyes at her and he knew she could not say no to him like that.
Viren said " Tum mere zindagi ko itna kubsorat bana dia mujhe lagta hai khani meraei nazar na lag jhai" and takes kajal from her eyes and puts it on her. Nivi asks why did u do that Viren replies " tu meri zindagi hai.
They look at each other and hug. Viren kisses her forehead luvingly they get hold each other nivi puts her head on Virens shoulder and they get lost in each other peacefully.
Sidhartha came out on terrace with a cup of tea his eyes fell on nivi and viren both looked happy and lost in each other. They both looked like Radha Krishna pendant which he had given to Nivi. He knew he Luved Nivi his Putul will always be there with him, but he had doubts wether Nivi Luved him as he Luved her because from the time Viren arrived she looked confused and he had seen something in her eyes that made him believe that she Luved viren. He thought even she did not know what was it, but she could never leave Viren with all ups and down as she left him. He smiled at them fondly. They looked so much in luv and happy. He was glad he had married Divya who had Luved him with all her
heart and missed her much. He thanked god for giving him Divya.
Chanchal came out of the house to go shopping, looked at gazebo and stood still for a moment thinking. Viren looked happy and contend. He was never happy till he met Nivi, she had seen the change him that is what made her so jealous of Nivi. He was sad little boy who had grown up into angry young man. Even though he claimed he never Luved Nivi she had see his eyes searching for her when she was not there and she had seen luv shining in eyes from the beginning. She had never stood up for Viren when he was little like Nivi stood up for him and Luved even when he was wrong. Viren was very lucky so was she to have a dil like Nivi. Nivi simply looked Butiful actualy she was glowing from happiness and was looking luvingly at Viren. She got into her car there was tears of joy running down her cheeks.
It was getting dark Viren looked at Nivi light breeze was playing with her hair, he tucked the hair behind her ear and said "thum teek ho Jaan Tumae shawl chahi hai".
Nivi looked up and said"Tum meri Saath ho na phir mujhe tand nahi lagta" and she scooted much closer and hugged him.
Viren gave a contended smile and touched Nivis tummy, Nivi put her hands on Virens. Their eyes was shining with love for each other and their little one.



Edited by Butifuleyes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice scene yaar,, love the part of sid... Write more scenes... Waiting for next one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a touching scene... You are a great writer:) please write more if you can. Really miss NivRen and love to read about them:) thanks for this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was soo cute and amazing...u r a great writer dear
pls update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh dear
 
Thank u so much for the nice scenes you have written.  In absence of ccbm we are surviving on these beautiful scenes written by some of the best writers in our forum. dear pls. continue to write more and more loving niviren scenes.  it is really fantastic dear.  I hope its a treat for all niviren fans dear. Pls. earnestly request u to pls write more scenes .  eagerly waiting for your scenes...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sunayana...another awesome scene dear..thank u so much for this cute and romantic scene...*hugs*
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love_never_dies

Nice scene yaar,, love the part of sid... Write more scenes... Waiting for next one..

Thnx for the wonderful comment.