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Part 6

Maaneet ff'is pyaar ko kya naam du

 

 

Maan dressed in knee length, coat made from heavy suit, material almost the same color or same shade as geet lehanga.

He had it tailor made it and in sited on having a similar shade , shade of togetherness, his sherwani made him look even more handsome.Smile



Gurmeet Choudhary as Maan


Maan stand near the window and he think'''''

'''''.Smile

 

Flashback

1 year ago

In mountabbu

In hospital

 

At reception

Receptionist: may I help you sir

Maan: mujhe geet se milna hai

In which room she lay

Receptionist: sorry sir, yha geet name ki koi patient admit nhi hai

Maan: tum asa kaise kh skti ho , you check again

Receptionist: sir, maine thik se hi check kiya hai, yha geet name se koi admit nhi hai

 Cry

Stranger came near to the maan

And said''''.

Hey, I am dev, dev Mehta, kya hum

(isse phle dev kuch kh pata)

Maan: mein aapko kyun janana chayunga

Dev: mein aapko kuch btana chahta hu

Maan: mein anjaan logo se baat nhi krta

Maan jane lgta hai

 

Dev: geet ke bare mein bhi nhi

Maan stop and turn back

Maan: tum geet ko kaise jante ho

Dev: aap is waqt ye janana chahte hai mein geet ko kaise jante ho

Ya ye geet abhi kaha pe hai

Maan: geet kaha hai, mujhe abhi usse milna hai

Dev: chaliye

 

 

Mehta's house

 

Maan: ye tum mujhe kaha leke aayo ho

Dev: ye mera ghar hai, is halat mein, mein aapki trh usse akela nhi chod skta tha

 

Maan kuch kh nhi pata wo janta tha khi na khi uski bi galti thi,

Usne geet ko ek mauka bi nhi diya , khud ko shi sabit krne ka

 

Dev: andher chle

Maan : hmmm

Maan and dev enter in geet room

 

Geet bilkul chup si thi, aaj uska pyaar uske itne karib tha, pr fir bhi usse mahsoos nhi huya, jis pal ka intzaar usse picle 6 mahine se tha,

Aaj wo aaya , pr wo us pal ko jee nhi saki

Dev to doctor: ye medicines jo aapne mangwayi thi

Doctor takes medicines from dev hand

 

Maan take geet hand in his hand

Doctor, geet ko kya hua hai, ye meri taraf dekh kyun nhi rhi

Doctor: dekhiye inki past one week se asi hi halat hai,

No reaction, kuch bhi nhi kh rhi hai sayad sadme ki wajah se

Maan: sadma?

 

Flashback out

 

Daadi: maan bte

No response

Daadi tochad his shoulder, bte

Maan turn

Ye kya bte aapko aankho mein aansoo

Maan wipes his tears

Maan: nhi daadimaa, wo aankh me kuch chla gya tha

Daadi: bte, aap hmse bi nhi khenge

Hm jante hai, hamari wajah se

Maan: nhi daadimaa, asa kuch nhi hai

Daadi: bte na hum wo purani baatein karte,

Aur na hi aapko wo purane pal yaad aate

 

Maan hugged the daadi

Nhi daadimaa, mein to ye soch rha tha, meri wajah se geet ko kitna sb kuch dekhna peda

Aaj bi yaad hai daadimaa kuch hi pal phle mujhe itni badi khushi mili thi, aur dusre hi pal saari khusiyan firse bhikhar gyi

 

Daadi: bte, hamari taraf dekhiye, geet ko us sadme se bahar aane ke liye kitna lamba waqt lag gya, ydi unhone aapko ase dekha to unke zkhm fir se tajaa ho jayenge

Jo abhi tk puri trh bare bhi nhi hai, chaliye ab aansu puchiye, aur niche aaiye

Aapki dulhan aapka intzaar kr rhi hai

Maan pass weak smile

Hmmm

 

Precap: will u marry me?

Again

 



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Part 7

 

Maaneet ff ' is pyaar ko kya naam du

 

Daadi: maan bte

No response

Daadi tochad his shoulder, bte

Maan turn

Ye kya bte aapko aankho mein aansoo

Maan wipes his tears

Maan: nhi daadimaa, wo aankh me kuch chla gya tha

Daadi: bte, aap hmse bi nhi khenge

Hm jante hai, hamari wajah se

Maan: nhi daadimaa, asa kuch nhi hai

Daadi: bte na hum wo purani baatein karte,

Aur na hi aapko wo purane pal yaad aate

 

Maan hugged the daadi

Nhi daadimaa, mein to ye soch rha tha, meri wajah se geet ko kitna sb kuch dekhna peda

Aaj bi yaad hai daadimaa kuch hi pal phle mujhe itni badi khushi mili thi, aur dusre hi pal saari khusiyan firse bhikhar gyi

 

Daadi: bte, hamari taraf dekhiye, geet ko us sadme se bahar aane ke liye kitna lamba waqt lag gya, ydi unhone aapko ase dekha to unke zkhm fir se tajaa ho jayenge

Jo abhi tk puri trh bare bhi nhi hai, chaliye ab aansu puchiye, aur niche aaiye

Aapki dulhan aapka intzaar kr rhi hai

Maan pass weak smile

Hmmm

 

 

 

In maaneet room

 

Beauticians came to help geet to dress up for the wedding she wore a lehanga, it was richly embroidered , made  of heavy quality material and had a shade  of red and pink combination as it is auspicious with matching choli as they tied the knot. She shied with the squeeze she felt.

 

Once dressed ladies helped her to put on her chudas (red and white wedding bangles) and her gold heavy wedding jewellery.

The jewellery was tastefully selected to have the bend of modern and ethical flavor. Finally a red and gold duppatta was pined to her hair and then geet was ready to go.

It took hairs to dress her up. They made her wear the golden heavy anklets that glittered around the beautifully decorated legs, she looked gorgeous

 

Maan was sure to go flat.

 

Her make up was done carefully, eyelashes, lipstick, mascara etc, was applied in a way that it was adding to her prevailing beauty. She looked beautiful, her dress was shining brilliance.

 

Geet in bridal outfit


She was not able to look at herself in the mirror, she really felt shy. She looked truly maan dulhan now.

 

 

In hall

 

In mandap

 

Pandit to daadiji'shadi ka muhrat bs thode der me suru hona wala hai

Daadi: dulha to aa gya hai bs dulhan aati hogi

 

Hum abhi dekhke ate hai pndit ji

 

Pandit :ji

 

Daadi: anie jake dekho geet tyaar huyi ya nhi

Annie: ji daadimaa

 

 

 

In maaneet room

 

Beautician: madam, you look so pretty

 

Gaat: thanks

Annie knocks the door

Kya mein andhr aa skti hu

 

Geet: ha anie aayo na

Beautician: madam aaram se, aapka lehanga

Annie: bhabhi, khud ko aayne mein dekha ya nhi

 

Ek baar nazre uthake kudko dekhiye to shi bhabhi

Geet blushed more

 

Bhabhi srmana chodiye , aaj to bhaiya gaye, wo to dekhte rh jayenge

 

Beautician: really me madam aap bhut beautiful lag rhi hai

 

Annie: bhabhi common

Geet see herself in mirror and feel shyer

 

 

Annie: chliye bhabhi , aapka koi besabri se intzaar kr rha hai

Nazre jamake baithe hoge aaj to rashte pe

 

 

 

In hall

 

Daadi: maan bete ,kha dekh rhe hai

Maan: khi nhi daadi

Daadi: bete humse kaisa chupana

Hum aapki daadi hai

 

Maan: nhi daadimaa, asa kuch nhi hai, mein geet ka intzaar nhi kr rha hau

 

Daadi: bete humne kb kha aap geet ka intzar kr rhe hai

 

Maan: daaadimaa wo

Daadi: rhne bi dijiye

Hum sb jante hai

 

Wo bs aati hogi

 

Maan: hmm

 

Daadi: bete anurag koi phone aaya

Maan: nhi daadimaa

Mein abhi krke dekhta hu, pta nhi kha rh gya

 

Anurag: mein yha hu

Daadi: bete ye koi aaine ka time hai

 

Aur tani kha hai

 

Anurag: daadi ye rhi

Anurag and tani bent down and touch her foot

 

Daadi: khush rhiye bete

 

Hamari bahu bhut pyaari hai

Tani bete hath aage kriye

 

Daadi gifted a khanghan

 

Tani: daadi ye ap kya kr rhi hai

 

Daadi: daadi bhi khte ho aur sawal bhi puchte ho

Tani: sorry daadi

Both hug each other

 

Maan: mujhse nhi milenga

Anu: daadi ye kaun hai

 

Daadi: bete abhi tk aap dono ka zagda khtm nhi huya

 

Maan: common yaar

Anurag: meri shaadi mein aaya nhi

Sukr mna mein aa gya , sirf aapni daadi ki wjh se

 

Maan: wo mein

 

Anurag: mujhe pta hai, MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA  kitne busy rhte hai

 Dosto ke liye bhi waqt nhi hai

 

Maan: meri baat sumega

 

Anu: kya?

 

Maan: bs ab jo mein khu usse sun

 

 

Anu: dekha tani, ye hai maan ka gussa

 

Maan: tune bhabhi se kya kha

 

Anu: jo sch hai

 Pta nhi meri bhabhi kaise shti hogi

Waise meri bhabhi hai kha

 

 

 

 

Maan: anu

Daadi: aap dono ldna bnd kriye

Chotte bacho ki trh ladte hai

 

Anu tani aap jake fresh ho jaiye

Aur jldi se aiye

 

Anu: ji daadi

Chlo tani

 

Maan mein abhi aata hu

 

Congrates

Yaar

 

Maan and anu hugs each other

 

 

Daadi: nakul inhe guest room mein leke jaiye

 

Nakul: ji

 

 

 

 

 

Geet enter in the hall with annie

 

Meera cme near to geet and hugs

 

Geet : it  ok, thanks to babaji ,  tu shaadi hone se phle aa gyi

 

 

Meera: bs bi kr

Aa to gyi hu

Anie: aap dono baatein kriye mein abhi aati hu

Geet : hmmm

 

Acha meera dev kha rh gya

Meera: bs car park krke ate hnge

 

 

Dekh aa gye

 

Dev: hey geet, kaisi ho

Geet: dev mein bilkul thik hu

Acha hua tum dono aa gye

 

 

At other side

 

 

 

Adi: sirrr

 

Sir ko kya hua hai

 

Maan ki nazre nhi ht rhi thi geet se wo kaise aur kisi ki baat sunta

 

 

Annie came beside the maan

Anie: sshhh

Adi: sir ko kya hua hai, kuch kh kyun nhi rhe hai

 

Annie: relax, ab khenge

 

(In loud voice at the near of ear)

Bhaiii

 

Maan came back from dreams and shout on the annie

 

Maan: ye kya mjak hai anie

 

(bechara adi to drr ke mare kapne laga)

 

 

Daadi see the all act and came near towards the maan

 

Daadi: bete kya hua hai.

Aap itna gussa kyun lag rhe hai

 

Maan: kuch nhi daadi maa

Pta nhi kya ho gya tha

 

Annie: sory bhai

Maine aapko khwabo se bahar nikal diya isliye

 

Daadi: kaunse khwab

 

Maan: kuchj nhi dadimaa

 

Ye anie yuhi bakwas kr rhi hai

 

Anie: ha daadi maa ab to bhai ko meri baatein bakwas hi lagegi

Making a baby face

 

Adi: hehheheheh

 

Maan: adi

 

Adi: sory sir

 

 

 

Precap;

 Will u marry me?

 

 

Again

 

 

 

Hope u like it

Today update

 

 

Sorry for delay

 

 



Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 06 July 2011 at 8:54am

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awesome ... nice part 6 ...

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awesome ... loved part 7 ...

what was that past yaar ...

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continue soon ,...

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