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Maaneet if
Is pyaar ko kya naam du
Part 2
Maan : geet mein bhi dekhta hu tum kbtk mujhse dur bhagti ho
After some time
Geet came out from the washroom
geet(self talk): thanks babaji wo yha nhi hai
khi unhe bura to nhi lg gya
pr babaji mein to mjak kr rhi thi
subh se unhone mujhe wish bhi nhi kiya hai
pr geet tunhe bhi kha kiya hai
maan come from behind and hug her
maan: acha to wo mjak tha
and rub his cheek to her
geet: maan daadimaa, hmara intzaar kr rhi hogi, aaj bhut late ho gye
geet turn and see his face
please maan chodiye
maan loose his grip
geet tried to moved out, he pulled her wrist and held her back . he turned her body to him and slowly pulled her back, it as so natural to just get carried away then he touched her ceek
geet: maan
maan: sshhh
his hand was warm. She closed her eyes blushing. His hands slowly slipped behind her ears
She chuckled, he long fingers caressed her scalp softly and then griping her hair pulled her closer to him. His other hand carnally grabbed around her waist. She touched her belly and almost stops breathing. He madly kissed her cheeks, shoulder, neck, ears. She clung on to him, crumbling his shirt harder in her fist, her eyes closed tightly.
geet(moaned): maan
maan: hmmm
daadi come across near to the maaneet room
daadi: maan bte
maan aur geet dono gbra jate hai
Both feel embarrass
Daadi: kya hua, aap dono ase kyu khade hai
Maan: kuch nhi daadimaa
Daadi: tu chaliye jldi se niche aaiye
Hm sb intzaar kr rhe hai
Geet :daadimaa, hm abhi aate hai
Daadi leave the room
Maan: tumhe bhut hassi aa rhi hai
Abhi batata hu
Geet: maan
Daadi
Maan turn
Maan: geet ruko
Geet leave the room
In hall
Daadi: aa gye aap dono
Annie: bhai, apne kitna time lga diya
Apko bhabhi ko lane beja tha, na ki khud wha rukne ke liye
Daadi: bs bi kriye annie
Waise maan bte itna time kaise lg gya
Maan: daadimaa
Daadi:ok ,ok hm kuch nhi puchte
Geet bte hmare pass aaiye
Geet : ji daadimaa
Daadi: bte ye aapke liye
Annie: wow daadimaa, kitna beautiful necklace hai
Aur bangles to aur bhi sunder hai
Kyu bhai
Maan: hmmm
Geet: daadimaa iski kya jaroort thi
Daadi: jaroort kaisi nhi hai, aaj hm sbke liye itna khushi ka din hai, chliye ab hume phnke dekhaiye
Annie: bhai bhabhi ki mdad to karo
Maan: hmmm
Precap: party
Maaneet ff- is pyaar ko kya naam du
Part 3
In hall
Daadi: aa gye aap dono
Annie: bhai, apne kitna time lga diya
Apko bhabhi ko lane beja tha, na ki khud wha rukne ke liye
Daadi: bs bi kriye annie
Waise maan bte itna time kaise lg gya
Maan: daadimaa
Daadi:ok ,ok hm kuch nhi puchte
Geet bte hmare pass aaiye
Geet : ji daadimaa
Daadi: bte ye aapke liye
Annie: wow daadimaa, kitna beautiful necklace hai
Aur bangles to aur bhi sunder hai
Kyu bhai
Maan: hmmm
Geet: daadimaa iski kya jaroort thi
Daadi: jaroort kaisi nhi hai, aaj hm sbke liye itna khushi ka
din hai, chliye ab hume phnke dekhaiye
Annie: bhai bhabhi ki mdad to karo
Maan: hmmm
Annie: bhai, bhabhi pe ye necklace kitne sunder lag rha na
Maan: hmmm
Daadi came forward and kissed forehead and blessed her
Daadi: hmari bahu bhi to utni hi khubsurat hai
Geet bte apko pata hai
Geet: kya daadimaa
Daadi: ye hmara necklace hai, hume hmari saas ne diya tha,
aura b hum aapko de rhe hai, pta nhi kb hmara bulawa aa
jaye
Maan: daadimaa, ye aap kya kh rhe hai
Daadi: are bte jo sch hai wo sch hai
Geet: daadimaa plz ase baat mt kariye
Annie: daadimaa
Daadi: ok
Ok , ab aap sb emotional mt hoiye
Chliye breakfast tyaar hai
Annie: chliye bhai,ya yhi khde rhne ka irada hai
Daadi: inhe yhi rhne dijiye
Annie: chliye aap yhi rhiye mein bhabhi ko le jati hu
Maan: annie meri baat to suno
At afternoon
In kitchen
Geet : nakul, sb kuch achi trh check krlo, kuch bhi kmi nhi
rhni chahiye
Nakul: yes madam sb kuch shi time pe tyaar ho jayenga
Geet: thik hai
Daadimaa enter in the kitchen
Daadi: geet bte aap abhi tk yhi hai
Aap jake tyaar ho jaiye
Geet: pr daadimaa, abhi to sham bhi nhi huyi hai
Daadi: bte huyi nhi hai to kya hua, ho jayengi
Aap aapne kamre mein jaiye aur tyaar ho jaiye
Geet: thik hai daadimaa
Geet left the place
In hall
Maan: adi, mujhe aajki saari detail kl aapne table pe chahiye
Adi: yes sir
Annie: kya bhai, ek din office nhi gye , to ghar ko office bna diya
Adi: heheheheehe
Maan give angry look
Maan: adi
Adi:sorry sir
Annie: adi sir , aap jaiye overall evening mein party hai
Aap jaiye
Adi look towards the maan
Maan: annie party evening mein hai
Abhi nhi
Annie: to kya hua bhai
Bhai daadimaa ne kaha hai mujhe
Maan: pr kyun
Annie: daadimaa se jake puchiye
Maan: adi ab jao
Pr jo kaam maine tumhe kaha hai wo bulna mt
Adi: yes sir
Mtlb no sir
Maan: kya?
Adi: sirrr kaam ho jayenga
Maan: hmmm
Annie: kya bhai apne staff ko drake rkhte ho, bechare adi sir
Jbtk aapne nhi kaha gye hi nhi
Maan: annie
Annie asa nhi hai
Kaam nbhi to jarroori hai'
Annie: pta hai bhai
Aap apne room me jaiye abhi daadimaa wha aati hi hogi
In maaneet room
Geet apne dress ko leke confuse thi
Kya phne
Aur usse se jyada is bat pe itni jldi tyaar hone ko kyun kha
daadimaa ne
Maan slowly came beside her and slipped his fingers into
hers. She pulled her hand away and looked away.
Maan mummers isse kya hua , subh tk to sb kuch thik tha ,
achanak kya hua
Maan: geet
No response
Maan: kya hua hai, tum mujhse naraz ho kya
Geet firse koi jwab nhi deti
Maan held her from shoulders, she instantly moved away
from his touch''..she looked at his grip on her shoulders
with a disapproving look.
He reluctantly removed his hand from the shoulder
Precap: any guess geet naraz kyun hai
And
Kuch khti mitthi nok zhok
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