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Posted: 07 January 2006 at 12:38pm | IP Logged

hi guys. im starting a fan-fic for the first time. I hope u guys like it and plzz giv me sum encouragement. I decided to make it different from the original. so i just hope u guys like it.

Characters:

Kripa: she is the most popular girl at her college and is prithvi's gf.

Prithvi: he is also the most popular guy at his college and loves kripa a lot.

Angad: Prithvi childhood friend and  they havent met for over 10 yrs

Kripa's family: same as original

prithvi's family: same

angad's family: same as original

i will post the first part later.

i hope u guys r excited to know more

Tongue



Edited by desiigirl19 - 11 June 2006 at 4:05pm

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Posted: 07 January 2006 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
oh yes i am excited to know more plz continue
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Posted: 07 January 2006 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0lalalalalalalalalalal i wanna read it
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Posted: 07 January 2006 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
i am excited but y p-k bf and gf it should be a-k bf gf
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Posted: 07 January 2006 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
i'm excited! continue..
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Posted: 07 January 2006 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
aww... Clap Clap plzz contiue!!
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Posted: 07 January 2006 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
u guys might be wondering y i paired p-k up but its just part of the story. butits not abt them. dont worry..it is about A-K

Scene 1:
kripa -k
prithvi - p

The scene starts with two guys teasing a new girl in college. Then u see another girl walking towards them. u cant see the girl but first u see her legs, then her eyes, n then u see her face. It is none other that our own beautiful KRIPA! She tries to save the new girl.

K- Josh yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?
J- kripa? sorry woh mein..
K- maine tum se kaha tha na. tum ladkiyon ko chedna bandh kyu nahi karte.
J- kripa im really sorry. mujhe plzz maaf kar do. mein aur phir kissi bhi ladki ko nahi chedunga. Im really sorry.
k- u better be. samjhe? now just get lost.
New girl- thank u very much. agar aap nahin aati to pata nahi kya hota.
K- its ok. aayinda se tumhe koi takleef nahi hogi. ok?
new girl- thnx very much. lekin woh aapki baath itni jaldi kaise maan gaye?
K- is college me sab meri baat mante hain. sab darte he mujhse kyunki main is college ki class president jo hun.

They talk for a few more mins and then the new girl thnx kripa again nd leaves

Then u see kripa busy reading something wen someone grabs her from behind. she turns around to see...

K- Prthvi? Tum. Tumne to mujhe darahi diya tha.
P- Maine? tum mujse kabse sarne lagi?
Then P hugs her nd she sees his watch...

K- oh god! its already 1 o'clock. mom aur dad hamara lunch par wait kar rahe hain. chalo prithvi hume chalna chahiye.
P- itni bhi kya jaldi hai? first give me a kiss.
K- prithvi plzz. chodo mujhe. mujhe late ho raha he.
P- just one ( he gets very close to her and she pushes him aside)
K- prithvi woh mein.. I..
P- me samajhta hun kripa. im sorry mujhe zabardasti nahin karna chahiye tha. im sorry
He is about to leave wen she holds him wrist.
K- Naraz ho na mujhse? im sorry
P- nahin kripa. mein tumse naraz kabhi nahin ho sakta. u know i luv u too much. now lets leave.

K holds prithvi's hand nd they leave. everyone in the college is staring at them.Then u see the new girl again.

new girl - ng
Anita ( K's frnd) - an

an - wow. they look so cute naa. i wish mere paas bhi prithvi ki tara koi hota.
ng - yeh prithvi kaun hai?
an - tum prithvi ko nahin janti? shayad tum yaha nayi ho. rite?
ng- ha
an: arre P and K yaha ke hottest couple hain. they have known each other for 3 yrs and have been bf/gf for 2. they r made for each other. hain na?
ng: ha. they make a pretty good couple.

Scene 2
K and P arrive at K's house in P's car. K is abt to get out of the car wen p get a hold of her wrist.

P- kripa tumne pura time mujhse baat tak nahin kiya. tum mujhse naraz to nahin ho na?
K- nahin prithvi. main naraz nahin hu.
P- Kripa...do u luv me?
K- yeh kaisa sawal hai? u know how i feel abt u
P- phir bi. ek baar kaho. tum mujhsw kabhi kehti hi nahin ho.
K- ( not able to meet his eyes) I luv u prithvi.
Then she gets out of the car nd runs into her house

K- Mom..Dad.. kaha hein aap?
Mom:M
Dad:D

M: Kripa beta itni der kardi tum dono ne. arre prithvi kaha hain?
K: woh mom woh car park kar raha hai.
D: Lo prithvi bhi agaya.
P: hi aunty. hi uncle. sorry we r late.
M: acha tum dono haath dho lo. mein tab tak khana lagati hoon.
K - P : ok

kripa enters her room and prithvi is following her but she stops him at the door.
K- tum kaha ja rahe ho?
P: tumhare rrom me. mujhe bhi to haath dhone do.
K: P is ghar me bohot bathrooms hai. tumhe mere kamre mein aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. waise bhi ab tak hamari shaadi nahin hui. acha nahin lagta na. bye
P: lekin kripa...

Kripa closes the door before he can say nething.

After a few mins kripa is combing her hair, P walks in from behind cuz she forgot to lock the door. he grabs her from behind and they fall on the bed.

K- prithvi? tum yaha? maine tumse kaha tha na. plz leave my room.
P- come on kripa. hamari shaadi hone wali he. its ok.
He tries to kiss her but she tries resisting.
K- Prithvi plz. stop it (she pushes him off her really hard.)
P- Kripa?
She storms out of the room in anger.

At the Dining Table:

M: yeh kripa aur prithvi kaha reh gaye? KRIPA?
K: haan mom im coming. chalo jaldi khana do mujhe bohot bhook lagi hain.
M: lekin prithvi ko to aane do.kahan he woh?
K: Mom woh...
P: main yaha hoon aunty
M: ok chalo mein khana laga deti hoon.

During lunch they start talking.

M: Acha prithvi. aaj kal damini kaha he.
P: aunty woh mom london gayi he. ek business deal ke liye.
M: Acha. nahi woh mein soch rahi thi ki tumhari aur kripa ki shaadi fix karna hai.

U see prithvi smile and kripa in shock.

M: arre kripa tumhe kya hua? tumhara mu itna latka hua kyun hai?
K: nahin mom. woh mein soch rahi thi ki itni jaldi kya hai shaadi ka. abhi college bhi khatam hone me 2 saal hai...
M: To kya hua. u have to eventuallly get married. so y not now? kyun prithvi?

Prithvi is abt to say yes but kripa hits him from under the table and hints him to say no.

p: (in a disappointing voice) woh aunty kripa theek keh rahi hai. me kuch banna chahta hoon shadi karne se pahle.
M: acha beta jaise tumhari marzi

After a while prithvi decides to go home.
k: main tumhe bahar tak chodne aati hoon.
they go outside to P's car.

K: ok then bye prithvi. i'll see u in college tomorrow.
P: Kripa.. tumne shaadi karne se mana kyon kiya?
K:(not knowing wat to say) woh prithvi...college..aur..
P: its ok kripa. main samajhta hoon. bye.
He leaves in his car.

As he leaves in his car 
k: [thinking] tumhe main kaise batau prithvi ki mujhe pata nahin ke me tumse shaadi karna chahti hoon bhi ya nahin...
P: [ thinking] kripa..mujhe hamesha aise kyon lagta hai ki tum mujhse pyar nahin karti...

OK guys. thts it for today. i hope u guys liked it. i know its kinda boring coz it too detailed. but i really want u guys to like it. plzz leave ur comments on it.

NEXT: something about angad...




Edited by desiigirl19 - 07 January 2006 at 4:26pm

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Posted: 07 January 2006 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
plz continue
i want angad 2 cum
cuz well i wanna c scenes btwn him n kripa
plz do quickly
im dyin 4 more of ur fanfic

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