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Magical_KaSh

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged

hey 

d ss ws js awsm 

it ws so kind of painful after d death of her mother he ws in shock 

goshhh its js painful loosin parents hw it feels i knw

i've lost mine it really moistn my eyes

d jhalli pari term ws mindblowin 

u knw u din mentioned deir name 

i ws kind of imagnin it as an arsh ss 

really it seemed to me lk dat only

bt at d ned all is well

luvd d proposin style

i mean d dialogues u sed fr him to propose her

ws untocuhable got to use smwre 

offcourse wd ur permission

i dn do anythin wdout permission

i js read dat proposin scen thrice 

dis ss has became kind of ideal fr me 

thnx fr d pm

kip pmin me fr ur stuffs lk dis n even u cn pm me fr ur general stuffs too i mean os ff based on arsh kash anythin dn frget 

luv

Bipin



Edited by arsh4life - 23 August 2011 at 11:30am

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by divkashfull

this was a deewana full of part
very nice

Thnnxx... I guess you can say, I am a deewaani!

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by piya-

Brilliant work dear

The update was precise and beautiful
 
Loved the trust that she had on himClapClapClap
 
N finally he proposed and that too in such a brilliant manner ... n yes this is the begining of their love and I really appreciate this
 
Amazing work yaar
 
loved it
 
u r a talented writer
 
love-Piya

Thank you so very very much Piya!!
I can't tell you how much I love reading your comments!
It means a lot!

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Blazed_Blazing

Very nice SS..loved it..specially loved how he proposed her.. Do write more.. Smile

Thanks u Riya!

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arsh4life

hey 

d ss ws js awsm 

it ws so kind of painful after d death of her mother he ws in shock 

goshhh its js painful loosin parents hw it feels i knw

i've lost mine it really moistn my eyes

Thank you very much, and I am so sorry for bringing back those memories... 

d jhalli pari term ws mindblowin 

u knw u din mentioned deir name 

i ws kind of imagnin it as an arsh ss 

I didn't mention their names so readers can imagine whoever...

really it seemed to me lk dat only

bt at d ned all is well

luvd d proposin style

i mean d dialogues u sed fr him to propose her

ws untocuhable got to use smwre 

offcourse wd ur permission

i dn do anythin wdout permission

i js read dat proposin scen thrice 

Sure, ofc u can use it! Just please give me the credit please, my name is Jinil and please say my username too!

dis ss has became kind of ideal fr me 

thnx fr d pm

kip pmin me fr ur stuffs lk dis n even u cn pm me fr ur general stuffs too i mean os ff based on arsh kash anythin dn frget 

luv

Bipin


Thank you so very much for your comment...

krazy4kash

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
it was awesome

short ans sweet

loved it


luv
kj

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by krazy4kash

it was awesome

short ans sweet

loved it


luv
kj

Thnnkkxx kj

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