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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 4:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolvini4u

Jinszyyy Hug

Awww.. firstly i love you sooo much..read ur reply to my comment.. and that made me smile wide =D

An epilogue? Wow. that was a surprise .. didnt expect! But m glad you did..
it was really sweet ..  the fact that Ridz never questioned him about his job and the reason he left et al shows how those things never mattered to her. .she knew if they were imp and Armaan would feel comfortable, he would have already told her everything. .. it shows the height of trust and understanding! Its not ordinary .. only Love can make you feel this way.. irrevocable and unconditional love!
The proposal was soo romantic.. sincere and loving.. perfect beginning for the new phase of their life!

Awesome.. <3
I really want to read more from you. FF? Thought over it? *looks hopefully and grins*

Love
Vini

Vini Heart

I love you more Tongue (with that again!) and Imma glad I got some one to smile! Big smile

An epilogue? That's exactly what I thought.. I wasn't going to.. but then i was like Arghh screw it.. i might as well right a proper ending!
I am not good at the happily ever after endings.. so I am glad that it worked!

Lol, You named the characters?? Was I that good u thought it was Armaan and Riddhima??

The stuff you found from the epilogue, even I didn;t realize! LOL
It just sort of came.. I am very happy u liked it hough.. because along with Reya di.. I really look up to you!
I
FF.. I thought over it.. and I ma bargaining with you.. how bout an one - shot??
That's the best I can do... Approve

Sorryy for disappointing Unhappy

Love you... jinszzyy...

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anumeha_rajat

it was sooo awsum n beautiful...

loved it to the core...

thnx for the pm...


Thannk you so much di!
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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged

Brilliant work dear

The update was precise and beautiful
 
Loved the trust that she had on himClapClapClap
 
N finally he proposed and that too in such a brilliant manner ... n yes this is the begining of their love and I really appreciate this
 
Amazing work yaar
 
loved it
 
u r a talented writer
 
love-Piya

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Very nice SS..loved it..specially loved how he proposed her.. Do write more.. Smile

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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged

hey 

d ss ws js awsm 

it ws so kind of painful after d death of her mother he ws in shock 

goshhh its js painful loosin parents hw it feels i knw

i've lost mine it really moistn my eyes

d jhalli pari term ws mindblowin 

u knw u din mentioned deir name 

i ws kind of imagnin it as an arsh ss 

really it seemed to me lk dat only

bt at d ned all is well

luvd d proposin style

i mean d dialogues u sed fr him to propose her

ws untocuhable got to use smwre 

offcourse wd ur permission

i dn do anythin wdout permission

i js read dat proposin scen thrice 

dis ss has became kind of ideal fr me 

thnx fr d pm

kip pmin me fr ur stuffs lk dis n even u cn pm me fr ur general stuffs too i mean os ff based on arsh kash anythin dn frget 

luv

Bipin



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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by divkashfull

this was a deewana full of part
very nice

Thnnxx... I guess you can say, I am a deewaani!
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Posted: 23 August 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by piya-

Brilliant work dear

The update was precise and beautiful
 
Loved the trust that she had on himClapClapClap
 
N finally he proposed and that too in such a brilliant manner ... n yes this is the begining of their love and I really appreciate this
 
Amazing work yaar
 
loved it
 
u r a talented writer
 
love-Piya

Thank you so very very much Piya!!
I can't tell you how much I love reading your comments!
It means a lot!

Jinszzy

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