Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
me here :)
sorry sorry...i am here now...*holds her ears*...i had to run the other day and i didn't even get the chance to say bye...but i am here now...okay...firstly i wanna know how you do it? like is there some sort of trick u know...if so please share...i need to know how you manage to draw in ur readers with such few words...how u make me feel the pain that the characters are feeling...that too without a name and face...Honestly kid...i have to give you kudos for writing the way you do βοΈThe way the whole story came to an end by just perfect...smooth and realistic...the selfless way he cared for her despite the hatred he thought she carried for him...They way he handled her when her mother died...And the way she knew she needed him when her world came crashing down...no need to put up strong fronts...and the way she cared for him when he was dealing with the shock...They both knew that they had to take care of the other simply for the reason that they loved each other despite the misunderstandings they had..Jilly girl...u have done a fab job with this...and honestly i loved it πLove ya...keep writing sweets...
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