Why I Love You So...(Rajeev FF)last part 119(7/5) - Page 9

Originally posted by: -purnima-

that was pretty soon 😛😛... har baar we say u update late 😆😆😆 ... Is baar it was soon 😃😃...make it a habit 😛😛... he he he... actually part pahle se hi likh rakha tha...isi liye jaldi ud kar diya...par next ud ke liye abhi tak confused hun...phir bhi jaldi ud karungi...😃

...sorry abt priyashi 😆😆😆 ... when i commented i was thinking abt something else 😳😳...spelling mistake hogaya 😆😆😆 ha ha ha...hota hai... hota hai...mere sath bhi aisa kai baar ho chuka hai...😆

as 4 lead actress... imaging self 😍 is better option 🤪... 😆😆😆...waise imagining u is also not bad idea 😛😛... kisi ko bhi imagine karo...kya farq padta hai...hamari nazar toh Rajeev par hi rahegi...vahan se hategi hi nahi...hai ki nahi...

awww 😔 ...starting mein hero ko sad kar diya 😒... his best friend suicide  😭😭😭... maine toh pahle hi kaha tha ke story as usall nahi hogi...

smoking & drinking Rajeev imagine karna thoda mushkil hai 😆😆😆...but he really seem to be dependent on Drinking  main uss se baht kuch karwanewali hun...jise imagine karna mushkil hai...par itna yekeen hai ke...sab ko sayad achha lage...😉

as 4 girl in rain ... guess she is Prisha 😛😛...& is she wishing 4 Rajeev 😉😉... lage raho...😉
My god... first part mein dono hero heroine ko sad kar diya 😆😆😆... aadat hai meri...main kya karun...sayad next ud me sare readers khush ho jaye...haan par hero-heroine ka pata nahi...😆

ab kiska phone tha 😉😉😉 ... what did she hear 😛😛... u will tell only in next UD 😆😆😆...so continue soon 😛😛.. nahi...main next ud me bhi voh nahi likhungi...he he he...story leap lega...😉😆

as 4 Rajeev playing both hero & negative 😍 ...gud 😳😳 ... means it will be a treat 🤪 ...atleast from me u will not get galiyaan 😆😆😆... haan neg me bhi toh main use hero ki tarah hi picturize karungi...kyoun ke main jo likh rahi hun...😆...rajeev toh galat ho hi nahi sakta...pakki baat...😆

UD soon 😃😃

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Prisha oops Priya😆😆😆 Hiieee Suhana😆

see now I am actually imagining u as Prisha.. achha hai mere liye...😆

Poor Raj!!! he seems to b addicted to smoking and drinking..Dev pleaded Raj to  quit drinking but he was unable to do so..he cud give up his life but not drinking😭😭😭I think his character will b grey here and u confirmed it too. thoda sa grey shade doongi usse...par rahega toh voh HERO hi na...mere fic me kisi aur ko main HERO banayu...iss se pahle main 21st floor se kudd kar jaan na de dungi...😆

chalo bahut hua sweet sweet Rajeev now we'll see wat effect this Raj has on our senses..😆😆 mujhe bhi toh dekhni hai na...😆

He seems to b tired of his life.. uss ka pura charachter abhi tak maine likha hi kahan hai...😉

How did Dev died?? did he commit suicide or was he murdered?? then who is Mitali??I think she is his fiancee. yupe...Raj ne ek baar kaha bhi toh tha Dev se...remember...???

Raj was really broken apart with his death but he cudn't do anything.

It seems Prisha is in love will Rajeev and they both knew each other in their childhood..why did they got separated?? pata nahi...main dono ko puch ke tumhe inform karti hun...okay...😆

I think she'll get a shock when she'll see him now. iss baat par bhi mujhe doubt hai...phir bhi jo hoga...jaldi hoga...!!! tumhe toh pata hi hai ke...main hero-heroine ko jyada der tak dur nahi rakh pati...aur agar baat Rajeev ki ho toh kabhi nahi...😆

Wat happened to her mamaji?? whose call was that which lead to these events?? yeh bhi sayad abhi dis-close na kar payun...par ek do ud ke baad voh bhi ho jayega...😃

 

Pls continue soon

Bye

 

 

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

loved the part...

Originally posted by: ivre

Hi Priya Hiieee Sur...kaisi hai...

 

sabse pehle sabse end ki baat karti hu. Mujhe tumhara note dekh kar bahhuuut khushi hui! Kyuki mai ajkal aise hi fics dhundh rahi hu...typical love stories se bore ho gai thi. sayad yehi wajah thi ke maine iss fic ko start kiya...par yeh nahi keh sakti ke...tum jo chahati ho vo iss fic me milega ya nahi...sahi hai ke typical love story toh nahi likh rahi hun...par pata nahi yaar...baht confused hun...matlab mujhe khud iss story par doubt hai yaar...😕😕🥱

 

One suggestion- please kisi k bhi kehne par ya fir even public demand par apni story ya characterization change mat karna. ;) mujhe kya pagal kutte ne kata hai jo change karungi...!!! aaj kal main baht hi strong girl bann gayi hun...aur mujhe kisi ki dhamki se koi faraq bhi nahi padta...!!! aur sach kahun toh jo mujhe darate the...voh aaj mere frnds power dekh kar darrte hain...!!! see...mere sath mere itneee sare dost hain ke...koun mujh se panga lega yaar...use apni haddi pyari nahi hai kya...😆

 

Dev ko maine as smeer sharma imagine kar lia...kyuki sabse zada mare huey scene mene usi k dekhe hai. he he he...😆

 

First part me kuch zada pata nahi chala...kafi sarre questions zarur khade ho gaye, jo tumko jaldi se jaldi answer karne hai. nahi ker sakti re...iss ke liye jaldi ud post karna padega...aur tum toh meri speed janti ho😆...phir bhi try karungi jaldi jaldi ud karne ki...😃

 

Overall mujhe kafi acha laga. And isey Rajeev fic banane k liye very good :D sab ke emotion ka khayal rakha hai maine...tabhi Rajeev fic banaya...sabhi Rajeev fan khud ko imagine karenge...uss ke opposite me...😆

 

take care and update soon

thanks for the pm

S

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
wow what a start... Thanks Deepa...😃
oh that Dev part was so sad and seeing Rajeev so reactionless and emotionless sure did hurt... yupe...Dev uss ka best frnd tha...isi liye...
so thats the female lead's intro...
does she mean Rajeev? hmm...yeh aap hi padh lena...aage ke parts me...phil hal abhi dis-close kaise karr sakti hun...😉
hope yes... dekhte hain...😉
cont soon...

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

wow that was the super fast speed of the update😆😆😆 iss liye kyoun ke maine yeh part pahle se hi likh rakha tha...😆

 

first part ke liye kahun to tumne negative bana hi diya rajeev ko like drinking and smoking and talking rudely to his uncle and his friend dev uska bahut achcha dost tha jaisa ki tumne fb me dikhaya ab isko thoda nahi thoda nahi bahut pyaara bhi bana do jo bhi likhna hoga voh main likh dungi...par pyara banega ya kuch aur...yeh tum decide kar lena...😉

 

and prisha wo kya rajeev ke baare me hi baat kar rahi thi😕😕😕 mujhe bhi nahi pata...main baad me batayungi...😆

 

waise pehla update thoda confusing sa laga magar tha achcha 👏👏👏 Thanks Shreya... isliye zaada to nahi likh paayungi ud ke baare me lets see jaise jaise ud post hote jaaenge waise waise confusions clear hongi😉😉😊 clear toh honge...aur voh bhi surf excel blue ki tarah clear hoga...fiqar not...Sherni hai na...😆

 

jaisa sur ne kaha tha main bhi yahi kahungi kisi ke bhi kehne se apni fic ka haal ztmk ki tarah mat karna jisse tumhe use rokna pade...aur baaki as you like to go on with your story we were happy to read your writing😊😊😊 nahi iss bar toh apne mann ka hi karungi...aur thoda baht yakeen toh hai hi ke...sab ko achha lagega...😉😆

 

pls dont mind i just said what i feel rest is up to you😊😊😊 and update soon just like this part😉😉😉 Mind...voh kya hota hai yaar...??? aur agar mere paas MIND hota...toh tumhe lagta hai ek main FIC likhti...??? Dil...aur Dimag...sabb kuch gayab hai sirf ek inshan ke liye...jiss par mein fic likhti hun...😆

take care😃😃

shreya😃😃😃

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Now is see why you were saying that this Fic will be different.

To be honest it is difficult to think of Raj in a negative role...it will be interesting to read of him is such a role. pura neg charac nahi dungi...par haan...thoda sa grey shade de rahi hun...aur Rajeev fic hai toh...voh hero toh hoga hi...aur readers n writer ki bhi nazar sirf usi par rahegi...😆

 

To start with Raj smokes and drinks. He is devestated by Dev's death.

Seems that Raj and Dev were good friends. And being a true friend, dev always tried to convince Raj to give up his bad habits.But Raj would never agree. baht prob hai use...spl treatment ki jarurat hai...😆

 

How did dev die? and who is mittali. Mitali...Dev ki GF hai...raj ne ek baar bataya bhi tha...par pura clearly nahi kaha tha...😊

What did mamaji hear, which gave him such a big shock. yeh bhi clear ho jayega...kuch hi uds me...😃...Thanks Nisha...

please continue soon

Originally posted by: golu_1677

is there any chance of an update today?????

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

So am here finally!! Part pehle hi padha tha as usual...but wasnt getting the tym or mood to comment properly...😳 koi baat nahi dear😃...sab ke sath aisa hota hai...aur vaise bhi bad mood me comment karne me jyada taklif hoti hai...

Waise pata hai...ye part padhte waqt...I cud feel a certain pinch in my heart...main bas Rajeev ki khamosh nigahon ko imagine kar rahi thi...😳..and damn...the guy is too awesum!! Tumhe to pata hai na RK ye sab kitna awesum tarike se portray karta hai...😳😳...to bas...main kho hi gayi..😆 ab wapas aa jayo...😆 aur yeh sab tum kis se kah rahi ho...uss se jiss ka title song hai 'tere naam pe suru...tere naam pe khatam'...he he he...in fact ab yeh toh hum dono ka title song ho gaya hai...nahi...😆

But getting serious...😳😳...I of course knw..its not sumthing typical u r writing...😊 Priya hai...hatke to hoga hi!!😉😉 kahin itna hettke na ho jaye...ki readers bhi hattke galiya dene lagg jaye...😆

But Rajeev lost Dev......his best frnd...He surely hated his father for killing Dev's father......bechara bas gam me duba hua rehta tha...aur ab Dev bhi chala gaya and that too...he committed suicide!! abhi baht kuch bahar aana hai yaar...abhi toh bass suruwat hai...

Pata hai Rajeev jab keh raha tha...ki kisne usse aisa dhoka diya hoga ki Dev usse chhor kar chala gaya...bina uske bare me soche...I cud just feel these lines...😭...pls continue soon na...kyunki agar story aage nahi badhegi to main Rajeev ko aur behtar kaise jaanungi...😳😳 kyu nahi... maine next part me sirf Rajeev ko hi toh dikhaya hai...matlab ek aur chehra Rajeev ka...😉

Btw...isme heroine bhi thi...😆😆...koi phn convo sun liya usne hai na?😆😆...Tum UD kar dena...main padh lungi uski problem...😆😆...but main attention is on Rajeev...as usual..😆😆 achha...heroine thi...kahan...??? maine toh notice hi nahi kiya tha...😆phir se padhti hun...sayad mil jaye...😆

Waise...Rajeev neg bhi hai and positive bhi...gr8!! Bekaar me kisise ladhne ka jhanjhat nahi hoga!!😆😆 tumhe sach me lagta hai ke...rajeev ko bina kisi se ladwaye main jane dungi...😆...Rajeev Neg me hai...par hero bhi toh vohi hai...aur mere fic me villian na ho...yeh toh main hargiz nahi karungi...Rajeev ke actions bhi toh mujhe achhe lagte hain na...😆Par tumhe lagta hai main usse gaaliya dungi?😆😆 🤣 Dont worry...mere sahi & ghalat ka definition Rajeev ke saath saath badal jata hai...😉😉...jahan Rajeev hota hai...bas wohi sahi ho jata hai..😉😉 meri tarah...ha ha ha... main iss me rajeev ko thoda grey shade me rakhungi...par hamesha yehi koshish rahegi ke..sab ki attention sirf usi par rahe...aur kisi par na jaye...isi liye toh use neg shade doongi...😆

Waise Puri ko kehna...Soundtrack dekhne se smoking & drinking Rajeev imagine karna easy ho jayega...😆😆...she shud w8 till then...😆😆 (am sure ye fic August tak khatam to nahi hoga...bas kuch hi parts ayenge film ki release tak...tab tak adjust karne ko kaho😆😆) he he he...iss par toh Purnima hi tumhe RPLY karr sakti hai...!!! vaise Purnima tum ne suna kya...AB keh rahi hai...😆

Abhi tum der mat karo samjhi? This is my next fav fic of urs 😃...(ab ye count mat karo tumhari kaunsi fic meri fav nahi hai...huh😆😆)...iska UD jaldi karo...bas!!😳😳 itni jaldi mat karo yaar...pata nahi aage kya ho...😆

Belated Happy Birthday once again...😉 thank youuu Sumi...😃 vaise  Doc ne bhi tumhare liye ek msg choda hai...n 2nd page par...😛

Luv,
Sumi .😳