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Eyes And Vision [Original SS] : Chapter 10 : Pg 53 (Page 8)

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princessrashida

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_sweetz

wooow!!!...Clap...i luv the idea!Approve
it's very beautifulEmbarrassedEmbarrassed!
n d way wrote it...awsmThumbs Up!




You do? Thank you. I am glad that you like my attempt at a new writing style.

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MoHiTZ-DrEaMeR

AweSome Dear..U so Talented...Hug Heart




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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Riddss

nice one
continue soon




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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Favouriteofall

interesting intro Mahak!
OMG...daily updates Big smile
continue soon with a longer update...plzzz
nd thnx for the pm Smile




Yup...daily updates... Longer? Yaar roz update kar rahi hoon..kuch toh taras khao...

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Ecstasy-

Will read it when I go online from PC..
Till then, a dreadful Reserve!
..

Madam..aap kab 'unreserve' kar rahi hai?

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Kanky-

Hello, Mahak. 

I am certain, the piece I just read does not qualify for a chapter. Hence, assuming, it was the preface, I will let out my two cents to you. 

It has been really long that I read from you, by the way. 

The protagonists deliver a Hindustani feeling, they converse like folks from UP and MP, simply etched. Simplicity always signifies something deep, and definitely dark and the way you punch a story out of such an idea is eventually going to help you grasp the attention of your reader. 

You've made a really nice attempt. 


Thanks for the PM.



Kankshita




I know...the update was really short. But then, i am updating everyday, so it counts for something...right?

Yup..i know...it's been very long.

Yup. They do belong to UP. As i said, typical Lucknow Nawabi Andaz.

This is a really deep story, so i thought that there was no use for using fancy-English. I wanted to give it a simple touch.

Thank you.

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princez_94

Hmm.. Very different concept... But I'm really loving the start, and you describe everything ever so beautifully.. She has no eyes but a vision...And the best part you write in Urdu... Please add me to your PM list, I'm already loving you ss... Continue soon Mehak... :)
 
-Laiba
 




I am glad that you find it beautifully described...

Really? Thanks :)

Actually, whenever i am in deep thoughts...I always talk in this manner...so I thought that it would be fair, if I write a SS in this manner only :)

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