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Eyes And Vision [Original SS] : Chapter 10 : Pg 53 (Page 53)

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Posted: 01 October 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Wow

Nice part

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Mahak...

Originally posted by .SilentPrincess

Wonderful update Mehak...Thanks Laiba :) So finally the past is over.. Yeah, it is. Okay I have to admit the past wasn't so dark as I thought...It initially was, but i changed it for someone. She didn't wanted to read so much misery, so i had to lessen it up. But it was definitely painful. Yeah, it was.

Especially when she said this...

"Galti humari hi thi'humne socha bhi kaise ki koi ladka ek andhi ladki se shaadi kar sakta hai? Humari hi galti thi'joh humne socha ki shayad woh humse sacha pyaar karte hain'aur humne apne baba ki seekh ko bhulakar apna sab kuch unhe de diya."

Heart wrenching... Yeah, the only time she doubts herself...was this time..

Ab ghalti kis ki thi aur kis ki nahin...?? Pankhudi ke nazariye say dekhe toh woh ghalat nahi thi... Kyunke uss ne sacha pyaar kiya tha, aur yeh bhi soch liye ke jis say woh pyaar karti hai woh bhi usse sacha pyaar karta hain...God! you KNOW her...i mean, you really do...sabko batana pada ki she wasn't wrong...and u understood that she wasn't wrong. Really, you know my Pankhudi.

Agar woh sach main usse pyaar karta tha na toh Pankhudi ka andha hone us k liye koi mainey nahin rakhna chahiye. Woh jaisi hai uss say waise he apnata...But that was the whole point, he never loved her. He only lusted her. And that's why he never understood.

Ab iss main Pankhudi ki kya ghalti hai, Pyaar main kya ghalat or kya sahi kuch pata nahi chalta bas behte jaate hain aur jab haqeeqat aaknhon ke samne aathi hain toh buhat dher ho chuki hoti hain... I wouldn't say she was at fault she was rather a victim... I really adore you now. Sahi maayne mein, meri Pankhudi ko abhi tak...sirf tumne samjha hai...Pankhudi wasn't at fault...she was rather a victim of situations :) Meri Pankhudi ko samajhne ke liye shukriya :)

I felt really bad for her...I can understand that. I felt the pain myself. Pehle usse bachaya phir pyaar ka ehsaas dilaya... aur phir uss ke andhe pan ko le kar usse chor diya...I hate such pieces of crap.

She must be really strong...She is. Usne zindagi se haar maanna nahi seekha hai. Sab kuch hone ke baad she's standing...Indeed she is :) A very admireable woman...  :) Oh...i just love her.

I'm very curious about Arth's reaction...Everyone seems to be. I think he will stay with her, he doesn't seem like the one to run away.. God! you are the only one to say this...you are not going to be disappointed. He might be speechless but he will be with her.. :) You would be amazed when he does speak.

Thank you for the double updates... Embarrassed  It was entirely my pleasure :) Do continue soon... :) I am updating it today :)

-Laiba








Thanks :)

I am glad that the part was met with your expectations :)

I replied to you above itself :)

- Mahak



Really? I feel blessed... I'm not always the one understanding the main character... But it feels good... :) because Pankhudi is a special character...
Hmm... Pankhudi kisi bhi taraf say ghalat nahi...
Agar muhabbat karna gunah hai, toh iss duniya k tamam log gunhegaar hai ... ;)

-SP-


Edited by .SilentPrincess - 14 October 2011 at 5:36pm

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 5:30pm | IP Logged

Okay I just realized I haven't commented on the latest par yet. I've read it, but not commented. Ouch So here it is... :)

Beautifully written Mehak. You describe everything so well. And that makes visualizing the scenes easier. And as Sabah said... another unique fact about your writing is that you don't say things right out, but let us feel it ourselves.. that's a really unique quality in a writer.
I was really shocked by Arths last words... he proposed to her... that really shocked me, he wans to marry her.. Its sweet but then its not. Marriage for him might be right...what about her. She been through so much... I wasn't shocked nor surprised by her denial or rejection. She truly loved. And true love doesn't happen everyday. And the most important thing in love is trust. But her trust got shatttered, she gave away everything in love. and what did she get back... nothing but betrayel, pain and the cruelty of the real world. Trusting someoen again, is hard, especially for her... how can she trust someone again... and that too a guy. Yes Arth isn't like that, but after such a heartbreak trusting seems like impossible. Arth have to gain her trust, and I'm excited to see how he does it. Muhabbat karna bohat asaan hain, par muhabbat k saath wafah karna utna he muskhil... Arth ne muhabbat toh kar liy, par uss ke saath wafah kaise karta hai... ab yehi dekhna hain.

Update soon Mehak ... :)

-SilentPrincess-

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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PrithviSanyo1

awesome,brilliant update
loved it




Thanks yaar... I know it was way too short, But glad that you liked it.

I am posting the next part today :)

Sorry for so much delay :/

- Mahak :)


Edited by ...Mahak... - 26 October 2011 at 2:33am
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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mjhtnupurmayank

I was gonna scold u for such a small update wen I read the line "I am writing my FF 'Arrange Marriage' for Pooja. So, I didn't get time to write more. This was the last thing written on it." N isliye I cooled down somewat..!! Lol... :P

Well, Nice update... Really Short but good...! I'm infact thinking about wats gonna happen further...!

So, Do continue soon...
Wil b waiting...

Pooja






Thank God you cooled down :)

Thanks yaar... I know it was way too short, But glad that you liked it.

I am posting the next part today :)

Sorry for so much delay :/

- Mahak :)
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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazymayurian

really interesting




Thanks yaar... I know it was way too short, But glad that you liked it.

I am posting the next part today :)

Sorry for so much delay :/

- Mahak :)
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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 2:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -roshnee-

she needs time. time to trust him.




Thanks yaar... I know it was way too short, But glad that you liked it.

And yeah, she needs lots of time to trust him.

I am posting the next part today :)

Sorry for so much delay :/

- Mahak :)
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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 2:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shaheen_memon

great yaar i love it...but plz do update a longer post... :)




Thanks yaar... I know it was way too short, But glad that you liked it.

I am posting the next part today :)

Sorry for so much delay :/

- Mahak :)

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