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Mahii - wow! really interesting! Want to read moreee! U said updates everyday right? C'mon now...get on with the update... :P

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super update! do pm me whn u update!

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Hello, Mahak.

I am certain, the piece I just read does not qualify for a chapter. Hence, assuming, it was the preface, I will let out my two cents to you.

It has been really long that I read from you, by the way.

The protagonists deliver a Hindustani feeling, they converse like folks from UP and MP, simply etched. Simplicity always signifies something deep, and definitely dark and the way you punch a story out of such an idea is eventually going to help you grasp the attention of your reader.

You've made a really nice attempt.

Thanks for the PM.

Kankshita

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Originally posted by --jiya--

the intro was nice and intriguing! do pm me whn u update!

~jiya~

I have added you in my sister's ID...so i will surely PM you :)

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Originally posted by -roshnee-

it seems different. pls pm me when you update.

It is different...

I have added you in my sister's ID...so i will surely PM you :)

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Originally posted by cutiepie12

ahan...!!! i liked da intro

plzzz do pm me when ever u update... Smile

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Originally posted by qt4ever

Nice start
count me in!

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