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Eyes And Vision [Original SS] : Chapter 10 : Pg 53 (Page 5)

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 5:41am | IP Logged
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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 6:06am | IP Logged

Mahii - wow! really interesting! Want to read moreee! U said updates everyday right? C'mon now...get on with the update... :P

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged
super updateClap! do pm me whn u update!

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Hello, Mahak. 

I am certain, the piece I just read does not qualify for a chapter. Hence, assuming, it was the preface, I will let out my two cents to you. 

It has been really long that I read from you, by the way. 

The protagonists deliver a Hindustani feeling, they converse like folks from UP and MP, simply etched. Simplicity always signifies something deep, and definitely dark and the way you punch a story out of such an idea is eventually going to help you grasp the attention of your reader. 

You've made a really nice attempt. 


Thanks for the PM.



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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --jiya--

the intro was nice and intriguing! do pm me whn u update!

~jiya~




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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -roshnee-

it seems different. pls pm me when you update.




It is different...

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Posted: 17 June 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutiepie12

ahan...!!! i liked da intro

plzzz do pm me when ever u update...Smile




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Originally posted by qt4ever

Nice start
count me in!




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