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PS- I sware i am updating tonight only..it's jst that light goes again n again...n my update is erased. stupid me for pasting it on internet and deleting it from word and then light going away!

but i am re-writing it right now..may be it wud take a little bit of time, but it wud be here tonight :)

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Originally posted by ...Mahak...

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PS- I sware i am updating tonight only..it's jst that light goes again n again...n my update is erased. stupid me for pasting it on internet and deleting it from word and then light going away!

but i am re-writing it right now..may be it wud take a little bit of time, but it wud be here tonight :)

- Mahi



Mahak...itni koshish mat kar.

I could hear that you were really frustrated...i mean, itna likhne ke baad, sab gayab ho jaana...and phir light ka baar baar jaana, is making u frustrated. So chill. Kal update kar dena!

Y r u opening the pc again n again n trying to write?

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Originally posted by ...Anchal...

Originally posted by ...Mahak...

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PS- I sware i am updating tonight only..it's jst that light goes again n again...n my update is erased. stupid me for pasting it on internet and deleting it from word and then light going away!

but i am re-writing it right now..may be it wud take a little bit of time, but it wud be here tonight :)

- Mahi



Mahak...itni koshish mat kar. Anchal, chod na...i was just trying my best...

I could hear that you were really frustrated...i mean, itna likhne ke baad, sab gayab ho jaana...and phir light ka baar baar jaana, is making u frustrated. So chill. Kal update kar dena! Lekin subah ke paanch baje tak light nahi aayi...stupid frustrating light!

Y r u opening the pc again n again n trying to write?And kyun kar rahi thi main? For my readers who have the trust on me and who were waiting for the update...kaash light jaldi aa jaati...toh shayad main kuch kar paati...






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"Kahan se shuru karein is kahani ko? Yeh kahani sunne ke baad…shayad har koi hamein hi dosh dega. Bhool thi hamari…joh humne unpar aitbaar kiya. Par kusoor hamara bhi nahi tha…woh aaye hi the is kadar.


Flashback-


It was night time. I was just roaming outside. When I felt someone following me, I moved on towards my house and shut the door.


Us waqt darwaza tha hamare ghar mein…bas ab nahi hai. Koi fayda nahi hai na.


I could hear the loud banging on my door. I was petrified. Aur hua wahi jiska hamein darr tha. Ek insaan humara ghar mein ghus aaya…usne humare saath zabardasti karne ki koshish ki. I was helpless and bitterly pleading with him to leave me alone.


Humein yeh toh nahi pata ki kyun aisa hua…bas itna pata hai ki us din pehli baar humein apni bebasi ka ilm hua. Humein takleef ho rahi thi. Dard kya hota hai, us din humein pata chala. Pehli baar humein apne andhe hone par dukh hua.


But then I heard someone coming. The person, who had removed my veil and was trying to rape me, was removed from my body. And someone had come in my life as an angel. He beat the crap out of the guy and helped me stand up. He wiped my tears and gave a new life to me.


Us din nahi pata tha humein, ki jise humne apna Bhagwaan maana hai, woh humein zindagi mein sabse zyada takleef pahuncha dega. Jisne aanson poonche the hamare, wahi humein zindagi bhar ke aanson de dega.


He helped me get up and recompose myself. He lend me his coat to hide my torn clothes. I graciously accepted his coat but I couldn't help and stop my tears.


And before you ask, yes, I have tears. My eyes show all emotions and perform every other function, except seeing.


He wiped my tears. When his fingers met my skin, I felt an electric spark going through me. And then, he hugged me and roamed his hands freely on my back to console me.  I was afraid, terribly afraid. He seemed to guess this, so he gave me my space.


He said, "Dekhiye, aap rona band kijiye…kuch nahi hua hai. You are fine. I am there."


But at the moment, I was terribly afraid. What if next time this happens again? What if, next time, no one comes to my rescue? What if, he hadn't come there on time? I was horrified.


Amongst everything, I heard him sigh and lean closer to me. And the next thing I knew, his lips were on mine. But, never in my life had I expected myself to respond to the kiss, he had started.


It was as if he was giving me comfort and I was taking that. But as soon as I came to my senses, I broke apart and pushed him. I had recoiled myself.


He took a deep breath and said, "Yeh nahi hona chahiye tha. Look, I am sorry. I was just trying to console you. I can't see tears in anyone's eyes."


I tried to smile. Yes, it was indeed wrong.


I remembered that I had to thank him, so I said, "Thank you…aaj aapne hum par ek bahut bada ehsaan kiya hai. Aapne aaj humari izzat bacha kar, humein ek nayi zindagi di hai. Hum aapke shukraguzar hain. Aapko shukriya karein bhi toh karein kaise? Lavz hi nahi hai humare paas."


He said, "Yeh toh humara farz tha. Koi bhi insaan ek ladki ke saath aisa hone nahi deta. Aur agar aapko humara shukriya karna hi hai, toh kyun na aap hamari dost ban jaanyein?"


I smiled and said, "Friends."


Us din humein laga ki humein ek naya dost mil gaya hai. Unhone humein jeena sikhaya…roz milne aate the humse. Unhone kaha ki unka naam 'Rudra' hai…par humne unhe hamesha hi 'Arth' kehkar bulaya. Kyunki unhone humein hamari zindagi ka arth bataya tha.


Hum unse mohobbat karne lage the. Aur humein jab pata chala ki woh bhi humse mohobbat karte hain, humein laga ki maano humne sab kuch paa liya hai. Woh dhai aksharo ne humein zindagi de di thi. Bahut khush the hum. Aur humare beech wahi hua joh har ek prem kahani mein hota hai…some stolen moments of life from here and there…few kisses….few hugs.


To be continued...

I know that this chapter was supposed to be update yesterday. But there was no light until 5 at the morning. So, I am updating two chapters together as a compensation.

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Humne apni zindagi mein tay kiya tha ki hum kabhi bhi apni hadein nahi todenge. Par shayad us waqt humein nahi pata tha ki pyaar mein hadein nahi hoti hain. Pyaar duniya ka ek aisa ehsaas hai…jismein har hadein…bandishe…toot jaati hain. Aur ek din, humne bhi apni sabhi hadein paar kar di…


It was an evening time. It was raining heavily. The moon was shining brightly in the sky, I could feel it. I always had a thing for getting wet in rains…and that day too, I got wet in rain. My clothes were sticking my body like a second skin.


Kaash hum us din na bheegte…par pata nahi tha humein…ki us din baarish mein hum sab kuch bhool jaayenge…nahi pata tha ki baarish ka nasha aisa chaayega humpar, ki hum apni sabhi hadein paar kar jaayenge.


He was there with me. Although I couldn't see him, yet I could feel that he was there. He slowly came along and hugged me.


This was as our first intimate touch. I felt shivers in my body. We had hugged many times before, but we had never been so close. I felt exposed.


And as if it was not enough, he started nuzzling my neck. His butterfly kisses were making me shudder. I don't know what happened, but my breaths were becoming shallow.


I muttered my courage and said, "Yeh aap kya kar rahe hain? Chodiye na."


He said, "Aaj nahi…aaj bilkul bhi nahi. Itne romantic mausam mein aapko chodna would be impossible. Aaj hum aapko poori tarah se apna bana lena chahte hain."


I knew this was wrong. It was not the way how we should react. Yet, it felt so right. Before I could protest much, he silenced me with a kiss. It was all that took, to daze me. But I knew that was wrong.


I removed myself from him and said, "Please, yeh sab shaadi se pehle theek nahi hai."


He said, "Do you trust me?"


And I knew that it was the end of the discussion. I trusted him with my life. So, I surrendered myself to him. And that day, I lost the one thing that was most precious to me…and that was my virtue.


Shayad yahi bhool kar di humne…hum nahi jaante ki kyun ki humne yeh khata. Shayad, pyaar mein log sab bhool jaate hain…hadein, bandishein, maryada…kuch nahi maayne rakhti hai. Aur humne? Humne toh sachii mohobbat ki thi…toh phir hum kisi se alag thodi na the. Hum bhi behek gaye.


Dukh toh is baat ka hai…ki humein pata hi nahi chala ki jisse hum pyaar karte the…woh insaan nahi…jaanwar tha. Usne humein dhoka diya. Jab humne usse shaadi ki baat kari, tab humein pata chala uska asli chehra.


Laying tangled in the bed-sheets, I said, "Kal raat jo hua, woh nahi hona chahiye tha."


He lifted my chin and said, "Kyun? Kya aap humse pyaar nahi karti hain?"


I shyly said, "Agar aapse pyaar na karte, toh kabhi aapke itne kareeb na aate. Yeh bataiye, shaadi kab karenge aap humse?"


He stiffened. He said, "Shaadi? Kaisi shaadi?"


All the colour from my face had drained away. How could he say that after what we had shared during the night? I was shocked and felt my heart breaking.


I mustered up my courage and said, "Kyun? Aap humse pyaar karte hain. Aur kal raat ke baad, humein lagta hai ki humein shaadi kar leni chahiye."


He extracted himself from me and said, "Dekho Pankhudi, pyaar vyaar apni jagah hai. Par hum apni zindagi ek andhi ladki ke saath nahi bita sakte hain. I can only give you love, not commitment."


My heart broke that instant. I told him to go away from my life. And he did. He went away from my life.


Flashback ends.


Galti humari hi thi…humne socha bhi kaise ki koi ladka ek andhi ladki se shaadi kar sakta hai? Humari hi galti thi…joh humne socha ki shayad woh humse sacha pyaar karte hain…aur humne apne baba ki seekh ko bhulakar apna sab kuch unhe de diya.


Sach toh yeh hai ki…hum jaise log…I mean, blind people like me, have no right to have a happy ending. Happy ending sirf kahaniyon mein hoti hai. Aur shaadi? Koi ek andhe insaan ke saath apni poori zindagi kaise bita sakta hai? It was my fault.


Toh yeh thi hamari kahani. Aise hui hamari zindagi barbaad. Khata hamari thi…toh kisse fariyaad karte? Lekin humne apne ateet ko peeche chod diya…aur hum ab aage badh chuke hain. "



To be continued...

So, finally comes the truth about her past. Now that you have heard it, it's about time to switch back to present.

At the present, what would be the effect of this on Arth? Would he run away? Would he still like her? Was she wrong on her part?

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P.S. - I don't think that i would be able to update tomorrow...because i need to go out for shopping with my best friend.

- Mahak



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she was wrong on her part.but then most of the people forget right or wrong in love.

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