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Eyes And Vision [Original SS] : Chapter 10 : Pg 53 (Page 23)

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mjhtnupurmayank

Originally posted by ...Mahak...

Originally posted by mjhtnupurmayank

Originally posted by ...Mahak...

Originally posted by mjhtnupurmayank

Originally posted by ...Mahak...

Originally posted by mjhtnupurmayank

Originally posted by ...Mahak...

Originally posted by mjhtnupurmayank


What chor and all? Huh? Maine kya kiya?  Oye.. Its a hindi saying re... Nupur bolti thi naa MJHT mein... C... U r not updating fast n u r tellin me dat I am buggin... So dat is "Ulta chor kotwal ko daante" Ohk...but main fast update kabhi nahi karti hoon..itni saari stories hain mere paas! and main AM se bore nahi hona chahti hoon... *on a serious note* Will u ever get bored of AM?? I mean I have read this FF 100 times*with an exaggeration of 94-95 times.. lol... :P :P* and still I have not got bored *as a matter of fact*... U may not feel like reading d same updates again cos u urself hv written it... but bored?? n anyways u really think so @least wit ur so FAST speed...*undoubted sarcasm*??? LOL...tum bhi na...Mujhe pata nahi ki tum kaise padh leti ho... Main sirf AM ko padhkar bore nahi hoti hoon..baaki sabko padh bhi nahi sakti hoon... Yeah yeah, i know that i don't update fast...no need for sarcasm! I already know... :) Mahan hai... if u noe ur ghalti toh u shld do something usse sudarne ke liye... Main kar bhi kya sakti hoon? I am helpless... *sighs overdramatically* Ek akeli jaan...uspar se itne saare FFs. Nautanki...!! I know... :P :P

What? Madam...i know that i love to write..par itna bhi nahi ki roz roz ek hi FF type karoon...and especially the one with which i feel connected to...  Arey yaar.. Toh main roz roz nahi bol rahi hoon naa... Weekly or fortnightly... Fortnightly? That would be too much for my poor hands...coz main doosre FFs bhi type up karti hoon...and today, i am going on for a one-month break. WHAT? WHY?  Hmm...actually July se college start hoga..and i want to concentrate on it...becoz school mein i have wasted my time...par College mein i DO wanna study...i wanna make my dream come true...study so hard, ki i can become an editor...and then a writer... Okk... I completely agree with whatever u have written... Obviously its ur dream 1st...U shld never compromise on that... But we are still in June now...! lol... Any idea wen in July is ur college?? Yaar...aaj gazab ho gaya...lagta hai Bhagwaan tumhare saath hi hain...and HE wants to see the wedding of Mayur before my college...aaj udi udi si khabar aai ki college August mein shuru hoga...agar aisa hua na..toh shaadi pakki :) Right..! Bhagwaan mere saath hai...! N i seriously hope that it is true...! I will be very very "Happy Happy"...!!!!! I know...i would be veryyy happy too...coz i seriously want to do that... Yaa..Really...hmmm...

What? God! You are I-M-P-O-S-S-I-B-L-E! Itni jaldi bug karegi meko? Kuch to concession de.,...like one month?? One month??? Kuch bhi... Tu likhna shuru kar atleast sochna shuru kar,...! Abhi waise bhi ye FF toh pura complete hi haina(except last part) toh AM likh naaa...! waise bhi tere pc ko mere se aur AM se bahut hi badi dushmani hai... so.. itna risk mat le tere PC ke saath...!!! LOL...yeh toh tumne sach kaha... But maine doosra part already soch liya hai...it's already in my mind... N wen wil it cum on WORD???!!! Woh bhi aa hi jaayega :P Jaldi... *mera waala* Unfortunately its *tera wala*... I wish *mera waala* hotaa...! N i soo know very well what is *tera wala* Jaldi... :/ Aisa bhi nahi hai...i write sooo long updates *pouts and sighs* Arey... I dint complain about the length of the update...!! I am tellin  u about the time dat u take for updating...! I know...i know...u r always right! *pats herself* Nautanki!


P.P.S. reply- Wahi main bhi dekh rahi hoon...bhala mere is FF ne kya galti kar di hai? Well... Iss FF ne koi ghalti nahi ki but AM ne bahut "Punya" kiya hai...!!!!!! LOL...tum bhi na...ek piece ho poori! Sachi...By God! Compliment hai kyaa?? Nope :P I knew that...! Toh phir kyun poocha? :P Ainvayi...! Acha ji :) Yeah..! :)

P.S. - Yeh khichdi kitni colourful hai...By God!
Sachi,...!  But, i am loving it! Hehe... Me 2...! :)


Okk... Now regarding this part... Chalo...mere is SS ki yaad aa hi gai... lol...! :P Nahi sachiii...
Firstly... I have to give this compliment... Very Fast updates...!!!! Chalo! Mere kisi SS ki speed se toh madam khush hain! I love you Pooja...i seriosuly do...   Hmmm... Me 2...!!!! Its a challenge... Make me give this compliment for AM.. *Meri sui wahin pe atki hai By God...* Sachiii mein! teri sui wahin par atak gai hai! Tera kuch nahi ho sakta hai...By god! Right...! :)
N nice part... Lets c aage kya hota hai...Hmm...let's see...
Although I wanna know the Arth mystery...! Oh...there is nothing that important...
But wrong time pe end kiya,...!!!! I know :P 
Itna curiosity aur suspense chal raha tha n den end...! Aah...thank you :) it was not a compliment... its a complaint...!!!! I take it as a compliment :)

N thanx for the pm... Thank u Aashi...!!!

Pooja







And I am thankful to you for leaving a review... :) 


Hey... Wers d update... i'm used 2 gettin a pm wenevr i sit online...! Y late?? Actually...i didn't update on sunday..reason being father's day :)
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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mjhtnupurmayank

Y no update today...??


Madam, if you remember, yesterday was 'Father's Day'..but technically i am updating everyday..since legally, my first update was after 12.00 am...so means the next day...so...

And aaj ka update bas aa raha hai...
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She looked shocked for a moment.


"What? Nahi toh...aapko aisa kyun lag raha hai?"


I felt embarrassed. How in the world, should I answer that? How to tell her that I thought that a blind person can't live alone?


"Woh...actually...hamein laga ki..."


Before I could continue, she herself answered.


"Aapko laga ki ek andhi ladki, akele is ghar mein kaise reh sakti hai."


Now I was really embarrassed. Not only had I underestimated her, but also I had invited her to her own house.


"Woh...humara matlab yeh nahi tha...par..."


She again cut me in my mid- sentence. She had a serene look on her face.


"Hum jaante hain...aapka yeh matlab nahi tha. Aap bas soch rahe the ki hum akele kaise reh sakte hain. Sach kahein, toh humne kabhi nahi socha tha ki humare saath kabhi aisa hoga. Humare paas kehne ke liye, sirf humare baba hi the. Hum bahut pyaar karte the unse. Par jis accident ne humse humari aakhein cheeni, usi hadse ne humse hamare baba ko bhi cheen liya."


A sad and desolate look came on her face. I wanted to stop her from torturing herself, but still...she continued.


"Arth ji, sach kahein...toh humein baba ki aadat ho chuki thi. Ek saath apna sab kuch kho dene ki vajah se humein bahut takleefein hui...par phir humne haar nahi maani. Kyunki, joh bina koshish ke hi apni haar maan leta hai, us insaan ka jeena kya...aur marna kya. Isiliye humne bhi jeene ki aadat daal li. Sach kahein, toh ab humein hamari zindagi se mohobbat hai. Aur ho bhi kyun na? Aakhir kaar zindagi milti toh ek hi baar hai. Toh phir use hum gam mein kyun bitayein? Choti choti cheezon mein apni khushii dhoondh lena hi toh zindagi hai. Aur phir, humare naam par mat jaaiye...hum jitney nazuk dikhte hain...utne hum hain nahi."


Truly, she wasn't like any other girl I have ever seen in my entire life. Her vision for the world is so different. She has all the reasons to grief and hate her life, while she has chosen to do the opposite.


"Wow...aapka is duniya ko dekhne ka nazariya kitna naya aur alag hai."


She shrugged her shoulders and a heavenly smile graced her lips.


"Hmm...who toh hai. Aur humein aisa kyun lag raha hai ki aap apni pareshaaniyon se bhaag rahe hain? Hum yahan par aapki baat karne aaye the...na ki apni. Toh zara baat ko kam palatiye aur bataiye ki aapko kya takleef hai?"




To be continued...

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i truely hav never seen suc a string gurlll...she is truely one in a million...Big smile

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ya. it would have been a nicer world if everyone could see life through her eyes.

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