Hello, Mahak.
I am certain, the piece I just read does not qualify for a chapter. Hence, assuming, it was the preface, I will let out my two cents to you.
It has been really long that I read from you, by the way.
The protagonists deliver a Hindustani feeling, they converse like folks from UP and MP, simply etched. Simplicity always signifies something deep, and definitely dark and the way you punch a story out of such an idea is eventually going to help you grasp the attention of your reader.
You've made a really nice attempt.
Thanks for the PM.
Kankshita
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