'AASTHA'-Maaneet FF-PART 1 RE-WRITTEN - Page 77

Hey yaar..This is nice one.

superb!
love it to the core!

its good dear...

hey dear well part 1 rewritten was nice, but i guess I read all the earlier parts written by you, and i felt the story is going fine, I guess you just have to start with the holiday...

I know in the past maan had not believed geet, but now my hrut felt the pain that he is doing everything to undo the past, even though he cannot,, cant geet give him a chance...

well but if you are rewriting again would wait for that too 😊
pls continue soon

PART 1 - Re written

wow.. what can i say? all i can say is

Edited by harshdb - 12 years ago

'Maan, all truths cannot be bottled up for all the time. And if ever you come to know the truth, I wish... you have the strength to face it then... '

Edited by harshdb - 12 years ago

I am carry forwarding this to a new thread. I will be posting all the re-written parts in that. 

Awesome..loved it

continue son

do pm me